Jamaican Me Crazy Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 Hey guys this is my first PK montage and I am just trying to get it out there! :) All the clips in the video are from around an hour of PK'ing Please give it a thumbs up as it is my first shot at editing too :) Please don't hate :) Here it is: Nothing special please watch will really help me out Thanks Tip.It I look forward to spending time in your community RegardsJMC :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 Moved to the correct forum, which is RuneScape media :) My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nico Robin Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 not bad! 899th to 120 attack! August 9, 2014~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 Not bad at all. I would suggest playing with a bit more effects, and try to pick music that compliments the action in the video. Content-wise looks great! Try to stick with generally short clips that only show the "Wow" moments, people generally dislike seeing alot of a fight unless it's commentary or hybridding. Hope to see more from ya! [2:21:46 PM] Baldvin | Leik: these comp reqs are so bad [2:22:36 PM] Arceus Dark: Time to get...req'd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L2Pullout Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 0/10 Too many annoying effects, I was ready to turn it off in the first 12 seconds. I want to see you fight, not see the screen fade in and out every 5 seconds. Music was horrible, didn't compliment the video at all. And you showed someone teleporting like anyone cares. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamaican Me Crazy Posted April 19, 2012 Author Share Posted April 19, 2012 0/10 Too many annoying effects, I was ready to turn it off in the first 12 seconds. I want to see you fight, not see the screen fade in and out every 5 seconds. Music was horrible, didn't compliment the video at all. And you showed someone teleporting like anyone cares. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy, maybe you could tell me what to do next time rather than just point out my weaknesses. As I said this is my FIRST EVER attempt at making a video, if you could please help me out than just make me feel bad about the video, also thanks to everyone above that enjoyed the video. Sorry L2 pullout maybe I will do better in the future, thanks! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logdotzip Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Maybe it's just me, but I prefer when PK videos aren't really edited at all, except to get to the good part. I don't like zooms, don't like flashy shit, etc. That being said your video wasn't terrible, but it could use some work. Take advantage of the extra space you have on either side of the video my youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quyneax Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 Try adding less effects, the ones you have now are very strong and make it harder to see what's happening. In general, people like to see epic moments in real-time or slightly slower (reruns), and non-epic fighting slightly faster. Some people also like to see how you do it, prayer switches etc. Supporter of Zaros | Quest Cape owner since 22 may 2010 | No skills below 99 | Total level 2595 | Completionist Cape owner since 17th June 2013 | Suggestions 99 summoning (18th June 2011, previously untrimmed) | 99 farming (14th July 2011) | 99 prayer (8th September 2011) | 99 constitution (10th September 2011) | 99 dungeoneering (15th November 2011) 99 ranged (28th November 2011) | 99 attack, 99 defence, 99 strength (11th December 2011) | 99 slayer (18th December 2011) | 99 magic (22nd December 2011) | 99 construction (16th March 2012) 99 herblore (22nd March 2012) | 99 firemaking (26th March 2012) | 99 cooking (2nd July 2012) | 99 runecrafting (12th March 2012) | 99 crafting (26th August 2012) | 99 agility (19th November 2012) 99 woodcutting (22nd November 2012) | 99 fletching (31st December 2012) | 99 thieving (3rd January 2013) | 99 hunter (11th January 2013) | 99 mining (21st January 2013) | 99 fishing (21st January 2013) 99 smithing (21st January 2013) | 120 dungeoneering (17th June 2013) | 99 divination (24th November 2013) Tormented demon drops: twenty effigies, nine pairs of claws, two dragon armour slices and one elite clue | Dagannoth king drops: two dragon hatchets, two elite clues, one archer ring and one warrior ring Glacor drops: four pairs of ragefire boots, one pair of steadfast boots, six effigies, two hundred lots of Armadyl shards, three elite clues | Nex split: Torva boots | Kalphite King split: off-hand drygore mace 30/30 Shattered Heart statues completed | 16/16 Court Cases completed | 25/25 Choc Chimp Ices delivered | 500/500 Vyrewatch burned | 584/584 tasks completed | 4000/4000 chompies hunted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morriss Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 Not going to lie to you, I didn't really enjoy the video. You seem to be very good at pking but the video editing was quite bad. You need to stop trying to make the video look good and just leave it for people to watch you kill him. Like Quyneax said, alot of people want to watch from start to finish what you have done, so you running over to him, attacking him, all the way through to you killing him and seeing your loot. Also, don't make the screen flash white just before a big hit, because every time it did that I thought you was going to another clip and then I saw you hit high and I was like oh. When the video had finished I felt very confused and didn't realise massively what had just happened. In my opinion, I'd say 4/10. I hope this has helped! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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