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Looks to me that the axe is going though his neck.. does anyone else see that?

 

 

 

Yeah, lol, it kinda looks like he's decappinating himself :lol: It's very good, though. You might want to fix that axe thing...and the right foot (on the left side of him) looks a bit small.

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very cool. Well done shading and outlining. Just three things:

 

 

 

1. the axe, yea they are right...move the handle out so it doesn't appear that it is going through his jugular.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. the leg thing, it isn't that it is too small, this is an illusion. What is actually wrong is that the cloth he is wearing is following the contour of his leg. So if it is actually pants, then even it up a bit to look more like pants. If it is in fact a cloth, then what you should do is change it so it breaks the outline of the leg (try having it blowing slightly out to the left; but not too far left :lol: ). Although you might enlarge the left upper leg just slightly as it moves back to balance it out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3. remove the shadow from the top and bottom of the axe head (this is skeweing it in an awkward direction).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

otherwise, you have some very nice talent with this style of drawing.

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