rate or hate personally i'm proud of it :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

p.s. don't hate to hard :roll: :wink:

 

 

 

edit: btw not done with staff so ignore that :wink: :D

in the middle of hate and rate :P

 

that head is strange, no nose, strange colour of the eyes,

 

the mystic isn't right, and the red robe or whatever is strange, what is it, the ancient staff can be a little bigger, but the idea is good, and damn that rigth arm, what a muscles , strong one ;)

..........anatomy problems galore...........the bottem is to short the toop is to long, the arms are waaaaaay to short and neck plz? the body is shaped waaaay to ovalish.dont use the curved line tool for the body put some shape into it......

I'm hating more than rating.

 

Work a bit in the anathomy, shade better, work proportions, and fix those legs.

 

 

 

~komodo

thanks for all the....hating :wink: :D

 

 

 

remember this is just a begining work.... :wink:

lol blue santa hats FTW!

 

 

 

 

 

it pretty good, but the arms are too short :?

 

correct me if im wrong (i dont own an ancient staff) but isnt there 4 "[bleep]e" things coming out from it? shouldnt there be one on the bottom? it might b because ur not done wit it yet... but anyway

 

 

 

6.10 so far

lol blue santa hats FTW!

 

 

I dont think is a Blue Santa :lol:

 

Its more like a Blue Mistyc (I think..)

 

 

 

~komodo

I love backgrounds, and your background...well doesn't exist.

 

Put it in and it should look tons better.

I love backgrounds, and your background...well doesn't exist.

 

Put it in and it should look tons better.

 

Well, it does exists, its ...errr...hummm... White BG! :lol:

 

His guy has special powers that make him float on nothing, that why the BG is white. :lol:

 

 

 

~komodo

Well, erm.. theres not much to rate, cus it looks very rushed... It's like you've never seen a human before. Even if you want it to be cartoony don't resort to making it up as you go along.. His face is kind of cute, but his hat's well to big.. Plus he has no ears.. :shock:

 

 

 

Im not even gonna start with the body, cus im guessing at that point you just.... gave, up.. But in the future try imagine meeting your character in real life, you may just bring some reality to your work, better proportions, shading.. colouring... because the body atm is.. awful (too harsh?), it looks like he's been stretched at the chest..

 

 

 

If you're under 12 than fair do's..

 

 

 

If your over 12 than, I'd avice you just look the human figure more, (not to sound weird) but there are people everywhere.. You need to start sketching people to become more familiar with the basic proportions, you'll be a natural in no time at all..

Well, erm.. theres not much to rate, cus it looks very rushed... It's like you've never seen a human before. Even if you want it to be cartoony don't resort to making it up as you go along.. His face is kind of cute, but his hat's well to big.. Plus he has no ears.. :shock:

 

 

 

Im not even gonna start with the body, cus im guessing at that point you just.... gave, up.. But in the future try imagine meeting your character in real life, you may just bring some reality to your work, better proportions, shading.. colouring... because the body atm is.. awful (too harsh?), it looks like he's been stretched at the chest..

 

 

 

If you're under 12 than fair do's..

 

 

 

If your over 12 than, I'd avice you just look the human figure more, (not to sound weird) but there are people everywhere.. You need to start sketching people to become more familiar with the basic proportions, you'll be a natural in no time at all..

 

 

 

 

 

thanks that helps me alot :D

hey its better than what i can do, sooo

 

 

 

4/10 not that good quality

hey its better than what i can do, sooo

 

 

 

4/10 not that good quality

 

 

 

well at least i can do something better then someone :roll: :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

btw its blue mystic hat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shock: :wink: :lol:

hmm :?

 

:) fair try,

 

you allined a part of it, and you have a part where are no black lines around it.

 

 

 

you got to choose: with or without lines.

 

 

 

it isnt that bad for a start, keepon trying. :wink:

its ok, you need a back ground. keep practicing.

its ok for a first try :o

 

 

 

keep traning

hmm :?

 

:) fair try,

 

you allined a part of it, and you have a part where are no black lines around it.

 

 

 

you got to choose: with or without lines.

 

 

 

it isnt that bad for a start, keepon trying. :wink:

 

 

 

ok i've learned positive is good.... :D thx woop :D

Anatomy needs fixing badly...

 

 

 

The body is all relative.

 

 

 

The legs should be the same height as the torso and the head put together, so the legs are half the full body height, whereas the head and torso make the other half.

 

 

 

Hope this helps :S

awsome but let his muccles be showed or how ver you say that :P but its nice

hmm :?

 

:) fair try,

 

you allined a part of it, and you have a part where are no black lines around it.

 

 

 

you got to choose: with or without lines.

 

 

 

it isnt that bad for a start, keepon trying. :wink:

 

 

 

ok i've learned positive is good.... :D thx woop :D

 

 

 

yea, why break someone off to the ground, if you can be a nice person and give him options to choose, which help him getting better :)

 

I dont like flaming :wink:

hmm :?

 

:) fair try,

 

you allined a part of it, and you have a part where are no black lines around it.

 

 

 

you got to choose: with or without lines.

 

 

 

it isnt that bad for a start, keepon trying. :wink:

 

 

 

ok i've learned positive is good.... :D thx woop :D

 

 

 

yea, why break someone off to the ground, if you can be a nice person and give him options to choose, which help him getting better :)

 

I dont like flaming :wink:

 

 

 

so do i :wink:

 

 

 

POSITIVE HELPS

hat looks like a santa, apart from that its going allright