Bloodredsword Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 rate or hate personally i'm proud of it :D p.s. don't hate to hard :roll: :wink: edit: btw not done with staff so ignore that :wink: :D Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_Mattman Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 in the middle of hate and rate :P that head is strange, no nose, strange colour of the eyes, the mystic isn't right, and the red robe or whatever is strange, what is it, the ancient staff can be a little bigger, but the idea is good, and damn that rigth arm, what a muscles , strong one ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 ..........anatomy problems galore...........the bottem is to short the toop is to long, the arms are waaaaaay to short and neck plz? the body is shaped waaaay to ovalish.dont use the curved line tool for the body put some shape into it...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 I'm hating more than rating. Work a bit in the anathomy, shade better, work proportions, and fix those legs. ~komodo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted April 17, 2006 Author Share Posted April 17, 2006 thanks for all the....hating :wink: :D remember this is just a begining work.... :wink: Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runescapeloser22 Posted April 18, 2006 Share Posted April 18, 2006 lol blue santa hats FTW! it pretty good, but the arms are too short :? correct me if im wrong (i dont own an ancient staff) but isnt there 4 "[bleep]e" things coming out from it? shouldnt there be one on the bottom? it might b because ur not done wit it yet... but anyway 6.10 so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted April 18, 2006 Share Posted April 18, 2006 lol blue santa hats FTW! I dont think is a Blue Santa :lol: Its more like a Blue Mistyc (I think..) ~komodo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moron8275 Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 I love backgrounds, and your background...well doesn't exist. Put it in and it should look tons better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 I love backgrounds, and your background...well doesn't exist. Put it in and it should look tons better. Well, it does exists, its ...errr...hummm... White BG! :lol: His guy has special powers that make him float on nothing, that why the BG is white. :lol: ~komodo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 Well, erm.. theres not much to rate, cus it looks very rushed... It's like you've never seen a human before. Even if you want it to be cartoony don't resort to making it up as you go along.. His face is kind of cute, but his hat's well to big.. Plus he has no ears.. :shock: Im not even gonna start with the body, cus im guessing at that point you just.... gave, up.. But in the future try imagine meeting your character in real life, you may just bring some reality to your work, better proportions, shading.. colouring... because the body atm is.. awful (too harsh?), it looks like he's been stretched at the chest.. If you're under 12 than fair do's.. If your over 12 than, I'd avice you just look the human figure more, (not to sound weird) but there are people everywhere.. You need to start sketching people to become more familiar with the basic proportions, you'll be a natural in no time at all.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted April 19, 2006 Author Share Posted April 19, 2006 Well, erm.. theres not much to rate, cus it looks very rushed... It's like you've never seen a human before. Even if you want it to be cartoony don't resort to making it up as you go along.. His face is kind of cute, but his hat's well to big.. Plus he has no ears.. :shock: Im not even gonna start with the body, cus im guessing at that point you just.... gave, up.. But in the future try imagine meeting your character in real life, you may just bring some reality to your work, better proportions, shading.. colouring... because the body atm is.. awful (too harsh?), it looks like he's been stretched at the chest.. If you're under 12 than fair do's.. If your over 12 than, I'd avice you just look the human figure more, (not to sound weird) but there are people everywhere.. You need to start sketching people to become more familiar with the basic proportions, you'll be a natural in no time at all.. thanks that helps me alot :D Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bloodweaver Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 hey its better than what i can do, sooo 4/10 not that good quality rarest tradble item in game is bds - a super poisoned bronze dagger. i have never seen one. ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted April 20, 2006 Author Share Posted April 20, 2006 hey its better than what i can do, sooo 4/10 not that good quality well at least i can do something better then someone :roll: :wink: btw its blue mystic hat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shock: :wink: :lol: Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted April 20, 2006 Share Posted April 20, 2006 hmm :? :) fair try, you allined a part of it, and you have a part where are no black lines around it. you got to choose: with or without lines. it isnt that bad for a start, keepon trying. :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
o_0wnag3_0 Posted April 20, 2006 Share Posted April 20, 2006 its ok, you need a back ground. keep practicing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MASTINO Posted April 20, 2006 Share Posted April 20, 2006 its ok for a first try :o keep traning 991th to 99 mage 9\6\06 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted April 21, 2006 Author Share Posted April 21, 2006 hmm :? :) fair try, you allined a part of it, and you have a part where are no black lines around it. you got to choose: with or without lines. it isnt that bad for a start, keepon trying. :wink: ok i've learned positive is good.... :D thx woop :D Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RcS89 Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 Anatomy needs fixing badly... The body is all relative. The legs should be the same height as the torso and the head put together, so the legs are half the full body height, whereas the head and torso make the other half. Hope this helps :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prinsbuba Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 awsome but let his muccles be showed or how ver you say that :P but its nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 hmm :? :) fair try, you allined a part of it, and you have a part where are no black lines around it. you got to choose: with or without lines. it isnt that bad for a start, keepon trying. :wink: ok i've learned positive is good.... :D thx woop :D yea, why break someone off to the ground, if you can be a nice person and give him options to choose, which help him getting better :) I dont like flaming :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted April 21, 2006 Author Share Posted April 21, 2006 hmm :? :) fair try, you allined a part of it, and you have a part where are no black lines around it. you got to choose: with or without lines. it isnt that bad for a start, keepon trying. :wink: ok i've learned positive is good.... :D thx woop :D yea, why break someone off to the ground, if you can be a nice person and give him options to choose, which help him getting better :) I dont like flaming :wink: so do i :wink: POSITIVE HELPS Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkinStyle Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 hat looks like a santa, apart from that its going allright 99 attack, 99 strength, 99 defence 125 combat 95 magic )))mb pker 4 lyf((( RSN: skin_style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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