Hoopster211 Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 Here it is I actually think I did a good job [/bads] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 his ribs are broken :( and his arms are dislocated but for a second.. and in a day =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 shadeing isn't bad, but the anatomy is just pathetic! Ask around here for some linework or start working some of your own... But you really have got to work on it :? New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopster211 Posted July 23, 2006 Author Share Posted July 23, 2006 Ok, made him a bit more narrow [/bads] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runescapeloser22 Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 u could use some work on anatomy, but otherwise the shading is good. why is there only one [bleep]e thingy on his shoulders? and his neck is way to fat :? pretty good for a 2nd, if u want me to rate it then 6/10 for a second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopster211 Posted July 23, 2006 Author Share Posted July 23, 2006 Made his neck skinnier and added a little chainmail underneath. Also, the [bleep]e is a brassard. EDIT: Also flattened out his arms and put little pad thingies on [/bads] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanheader Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 It's getting better but his arms aren't connecting with his body.Arms do that : And his chest is a little wide still I think. The shading is good though. 7/10 :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopster211 Posted July 24, 2006 Author Share Posted July 24, 2006 Ok, added a different dragon on the front, made him a bit skinnier, and made the chest shading blend in more [/bads] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blaze The Movie Fan Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 Are you trying to be funny? What's the point of this? Everyone knows dragon platebody doesn't exists. JK, I love them. Especially the hat. BTW, is that a made up item like the dragon platebody? If not where could you get it? :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sereth Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 Pillowshading(Dark to light) is pretty bad on him. Try and look up pictures of real armor and shade like that not just a circle going in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 Pillowshading(Dark to light) is pretty bad on him. Try and look up pictures of real armor and shade like that not just a circle going in. actually i think he has it right if the light was coming straight at him... Though there would be a seam down the front as the plate would curve out from the sides.... plates are difficult to shade from straight on... :? He looks much better then when i first saw him.. His posture is much more basic but still quite stiff keep at it New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 the shading is good but the anatomy isnt that great... 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopster211 Posted July 24, 2006 Author Share Posted July 24, 2006 Got rid of the black outline, kinda looks more 3D now [/bads] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 he looks like a cannibal or something. his face scares me lol apart from that, anatomy is yucky, but shading is kai! My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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