Azvareth Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 Yeah... well... figured it was time for a new wallpaper. This is another concept peice of mine. I kinda' made it in a hurry, so I will work on it some more tomorrow. Ratings, comments and feedback is always appreciated. Here it is: // Azvi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 Love it m8 :D Your idea's are realy nice :P Heh i think it would be interesting to see a colab between you and L337, it could get serriously sweet :D Anyways, great job, even better idea :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuietHeroin Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 Very well done, Az. Great job. QH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrothKahn Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 Brilliant. I really like the concept and the way it is executed. GJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UTSnyper Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 not to say that I don't think that the wallpaper is absolutely hawt, but... The "To be..." text on the hand could use some work..just a tiny bit..so it looks like it's burned into the hand. other than that it's incredible! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forsaken Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 If the to be was intentionally meant to not fit in, then ignore this comment, if not, well, work on the 'to be' text, because it doesn't fit in imo. . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
entangle Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 I think if more time had been spent on the blending, it wouldn't look so rushed in places. The blood doesnt look very convincing it needs to be more bold, and have atleast some reflection atleast. The whole colour of this pieces seems to be very dull, and where that can be intentional, I'd have used layered colours rather than a colourize. I would also get rid of all the type used in this piece, it does not need it, and something I say quite often, is that pieces do not need text. Don't feel you need to add it, it's simply not needed. Quit RS 2005 | RSN: JohnalderBack as of 5/7/2008!Dragon Drops: x1 Med, x5 Legs, x4 Skirts, x25 Boots, x1 Visage | x7 Abyssal Whips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 Good job Az. Liking it alot. I gave blood today and I'm feeling pretty dizzy right about now... No idea what that has to do with anything but.... nice job nonetheless. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azvareth Posted September 11, 2004 Author Share Posted September 11, 2004 Right... hm... I can see what you mean when you say that it looks rushed in some places. I only worked on it for about an hour or so. As for the text, I like having text in my images, since that is the thing I'm worst at, I have to train on it even more. I also think text adds something. But anyway... I gtg to a mate now. Will work on it some more when I get home. Thanks for the ratings, everyone! // Azvi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
entangle Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 What I was trying to say, is that every piece does not need text, do not feel your peice if left empty without it. Quit RS 2005 | RSN: JohnalderBack as of 5/7/2008!Dragon Drops: x1 Med, x5 Legs, x4 Skirts, x25 Boots, x1 Visage | x7 Abyssal Whips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azvareth Posted September 12, 2004 Author Share Posted September 12, 2004 Don't worry Entangle, if I felt like any of my images would look better/didn't need text, I wouldn't add it, and vice versa. Anyway... I actually thought that when I would "work on it some more", I would change a lot of things - but when I finally sat down, with the image displayed on my monitor, I actually couldn't find much to change to the better. So I only made it blend in somewhat better in some areas, changed the "To Be..." text a bit (which still doesn't look as though it was carved into the skin. Bummer). I also changed the blood in a few places. But as someone suggested, I can't make it more bold, because that would totally distort the focus from the hand (where it is meant to be), and it would really clash with everything, since it generally has a pretty subtle and dim look to it. So anyway... here it is: // Azvi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 I like the idea, well done, very creepy. GJ Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UTSnyper Posted September 13, 2004 Share Posted September 13, 2004 I aggree with vlad..very creepy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ice_ring Posted September 13, 2004 Share Posted September 13, 2004 creepy.....nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoyalFlush Posted September 13, 2004 Share Posted September 13, 2004 The second one IMO is much better. Carries out the detail and message/mood you seem to be trying to convey. An overall well done peice, the concept is very original. 8/10, one of my favorites from you. Although I don't think this will be my wallpaper just yet, the last thing I need is my parents thinking im suicidal :? :shock: If it isn't in your veins, you'll never know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azvareth Posted September 13, 2004 Author Share Posted September 13, 2004 Although I don't think this will be my wallpaper just yet, the last thing I need is my parents thinking im suicidal :? :shock: Heh, when I showed this to my dad, he was like "Patrik... you alright...? :o" But he liked it nonetheless. Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I'm glad the changes was to the better. // Azvi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColAvanor Posted September 13, 2004 Share Posted September 13, 2004 You are kind of lucky Azvi. To have parents that are even that supportive that is. When I showed my sig "Tide of danger" to my father, he said: "...hmm....are..are those trying to be waves?? Is that a sea??" And he was serious.... Never commented the picture, I noticed. Well. It has this professional feel to it. Liking it. You are very effective considering the short time it took. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azvareth Posted September 13, 2004 Author Share Posted September 13, 2004 Hah, yeah. My mom is like that. For example She: "What is that? A tree?" Me: "Mom. It's abstract... it isn't supposed to look like anything." She: "Aah. Nice. Pretty." *walks away* It's basically my dad and my (sometimes) my sisters who tell me that I do a good job and such. My dad still has this grunge wallpaper I did, on his computer at work. It was the first time I ever used brushes - it was like a year ago. :) And I actually taught my biggest sister (23) the basics of Bryce and Photoshop. It was... interesting. My mom is more into sceneries and paintings etc. so whenever I do that, she always gives me good and nice comments. :) Anyway... thanks for the comment. Do you see anything I could improve? Also, I'm very sorry for not PM'ing you back with that... *hmmrmrmr*, but I promise I'll do that this weekend - I'm a bit stuffed (to say the least) with schoolwork atm. Thanks. :) // Azvi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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