Yeah... well... figured it was time for a new wallpaper. This is another concept peice of mine. I kinda' made it in a hurry, so I will work on it some more tomorrow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ratings, comments and feedback is always appreciated.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here it is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

Love it m8 :D Your idea's are realy nice :P Heh i think it would be interesting to see a colab between you and L337, it could get serriously sweet :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, great job, even better idea :D

Very well done, Az. Great job.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

QH.

Brilliant. I really like the concept and the way it is executed. GJ

not to say that I don't think that the wallpaper is absolutely hawt, but...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The "To be..." text on the hand could use some work..just a tiny bit..so it looks like it's burned into the hand. other than that it's incredible!

If the to be was intentionally meant to not fit in, then ignore this comment, if not, well, work on the 'to be' text, because it doesn't fit in imo.

I think if more time had been spent on the blending, it wouldn't look so rushed in places. The blood doesnt look very convincing it needs to be more bold, and have atleast some reflection atleast.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The whole colour of this pieces seems to be very dull, and where that can be intentional, I'd have used layered colours rather than a colourize. I would also get rid of all the type used in this piece, it does not need it, and something I say quite often, is that pieces do not need text. Don't feel you need to add it, it's simply not needed.

Good job Az. Liking it alot. I gave blood today and I'm feeling pretty dizzy right about now... No idea what that has to do with anything but.... nice job nonetheless. :)

Right... hm... I can see what you mean when you say that it looks rushed in some places. I only worked on it for about an hour or so. As for the text, I like having text in my images, since that is the thing I'm worst at, I have to train on it even more. I also think text adds something.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But anyway... I gtg to a mate now. Will work on it some more when I get home.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the ratings, everyone!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

What I was trying to say, is that every piece does not need text, do not feel your peice if left empty without it.

Don't worry Entangle, if I felt like any of my images would look better/didn't need text, I wouldn't add it, and vice versa.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway... I actually thought that when I would "work on it some more", I would change a lot of things - but when I finally sat down, with the image displayed on my monitor, I actually couldn't find much to change to the better. So I only made it blend in somewhat better in some areas, changed the "To Be..." text a bit (which still doesn't look as though it was carved into the skin. Bummer). I also changed the blood in a few places. But as someone suggested, I can't make it more bold, because that would totally distort the focus from the hand (where it is meant to be), and it would really clash with everything, since it generally has a pretty subtle and dim look to it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So anyway... here it is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

I like the idea, well done, very creepy. GJ

I aggree with vlad..very creepy

creepy.....nice

The second one IMO is much better. Carries out the detail and message/mood you seem to be trying to convey. An overall well done peice, the concept is very original.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10, one of my favorites from you. Although I don't think this will be my wallpaper just yet, the last thing I need is my parents thinking im suicidal :? :shock:

Although I don't think this will be my wallpaper just yet, the last thing I need is my parents thinking im suicidal :? :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Heh, when I showed this to my dad, he was like "Patrik... you alright...? :o"

 

 

 

But he liked it nonetheless.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I'm glad the changes was to the better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

You are kind of lucky Azvi. To have parents that are even that supportive that is. When I showed my sig "Tide of danger" to my father, he said: "...hmm....are..are those trying to be waves?? Is that a sea??"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And he was serious....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Never commented the picture, I noticed. Well. It has this professional feel to it. Liking it. You are very effective considering the short time it took.

Hah, yeah. My mom is like that. For example

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She: "What is that? A tree?"

 

 

 

Me: "Mom. It's abstract... it isn't supposed to look like anything."

 

 

 

She: "Aah. Nice. Pretty." *walks away*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's basically my dad and my (sometimes) my sisters who tell me that I do a good job and such. My dad still has this grunge wallpaper I did, on his computer at work. It was the first time I ever used brushes - it was like a year ago. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And I actually taught my biggest sister (23) the basics of Bryce and Photoshop. It was... interesting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My mom is more into sceneries and paintings etc. so whenever I do that, she always gives me good and nice comments. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway... thanks for the comment. Do you see anything I could improve?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, I'm very sorry for not PM'ing you back with that... *hmmrmrmr*, but I promise I'll do that this weekend - I'm a bit stuffed (to say the least) with schoolwork atm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.