My 5th Pixel

[Noobish111]

 

Please just CC and advice. No flaming.

 

 

 

Thanks,

 

Noobish

[cadburys_egg]

List of what to fix:

 

• More shading.
   
  Hands.
   
  Hair.
   
  Ears.
   
  No spray can tool.
   
  No line tool.
   
  Border.
   
  Text placement.
   
  THINGS! It's so empty.

 

Nothing in real life is perfectly straight. Make that factor in your signatures.

 

He's got such a small crotch ._.

 

If you need to, spend more than one day on a pixel. Take time, don't rush anything just so you can post it.

 

Study good pixellers, you can learn alot from observing.

 

Try drawing in real life. I can't draw in real life well, that is why I do not pixel.

 

The spray can tool is your ENEMY. The line tool is your ENEMY. The only friends you have are the PENCIL TOOL and the ERASER TOOL.

 

 

 

I may not be a master pixeller, but I know this much.

[runedrune900]

Worlds simplest pixel =) 1337 lol

[gorufriders]

ok

 

 

 

-theres no action in ur sigs it jsut a guy standign there

 

-ur arms arn;t that staight put them in diffrent posses see wat u come with try adding weapons and stuff

 

-plox don;t make me says this again don;t use spray can!its caleld pixaling for a reason not the fast way out ur sky looks exactly like ur ground

 

try drawign everythign ur doign i nblack lines then shade it in leavign the black line

 

-ur shading is 2 much liek a gradient there mushles(srry about the spelling i have a hangover)in the human body like ur chest there would make tyhe shadign a bit didfrent because it may shadow parts

 

-the human head isn't perfectly circular there obstaructions noises eyes ears mouths and hair!!!!!lol

 

 

 

 

 

if ur still not gettign wat im syaing i kidna fixed up ur guy abit (hope u don;t mind) so kidna study wat i did with him i did a fast job on most the shading

 

 

 

 

and dont be afraid 2 go 2 the library and take out a book of anatomy

[Nadril]

List of what to fix:

 

• More shading.
   
  Hands.
   
  Hair.
   
  Ears.
   
  No spray can tool.
   
  No line tool.
   
  Border.
   
  Text placement.
   
  THINGS! It's so empty.

 

Nothing in real life is perfectly straight. Make that factor in your signatures.

 

He's got such a small crotch ._.

 

If you need to, spend more than one day on a pixel. Take time, don't rush anything just so you can post it.

 

Study good pixellers, you can learn alot from observing.

 

Try drawing in real life. I can't draw in real life well, that is why I do not pixel.

 

The spray can tool is your ENEMY. The line tool is your ENEMY. The only friends you have are the PENCIL TOOL and the ERASER TOOL.

 

 

 

I may not be a master pixeller, but I know this much.

 

 

 

Quoted for 100% truth.

 

 

 

 

 

btw... Noobish I realy hope you are listening to these guy's C&C, it's good stuff. Heck, you'd be foolish not to listen to it.

 

 

 

Anyways, my bigest gripe out of his list is your "spraycan" shading. It seems like the easy way out but it just looks pretty tacky.

 

 

 

 

 

So, listen to what these guys have to say.

[eckered]

ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH :wall: :wall: #-o :wall: #-o

 

 

 

 

 

if you use that damn spray can again im going to spazz!!!!

 

 

 

the spray can is your enemy!!!!!! never use it again!!!!! EVER!!!!!

 

 

 

im not sure what efect you were going for with the gray sky and ground, but you need to shade, and dither

 

 

 

also, your charicters clothing is to bright for the gray background.... shade and dither their cloths too... give your guy hair please... bald guys make me sick :-X

 

 

 

 

 

edit: sory about the evil post above, im pissed atm lol... :evil:

 

 

 

good to see that your trying at least

[GonAndGary]

Yeah, dont use pray can.

 

 

 

P.S. Was it you who got me banned for "Spamming/Flaming" in The Gallery?

[My_Eggs]

hahahahahaha! since he used that spray can its plain right around the guy, thats hilarious! didn't wanna risk getting some grey on your guy and having to touch it up? :lol: :lol: :lol:

[Nadril]

Yeah, dont use pray can.

 

 

 

P.S. Was it you who got me banned for "Spamming/Flaming" in The Gallery?

 

 

 

Nope. Me and JacobRyan :wink:

[Guest XplsvBam]

Hey now that spray can looks really good in the sky! Thats the first time I've ever seen the spray can used and liked it. But you shouldn't have used it on the ground thats what makes it look tacky. A nice improvment from your last work I think.

[Rich_Azn]

Ok... here are my thoughts -

 

 

 

- First its kinda boring and not much happening...

 

- Theres also alot of unused space...

 

- U need hair... the guy looks kinda funny... maybe use some human anatomy? Where are his hands?

 

 

 

Ok there are probably more I wanna say... but that's all i can think of now.