xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 UPDATE x6: So i got to work on a background. Anyone suggest something else to be fixed? Anyways rate, constructive critisiscm please don't post unless it helps.:) Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Mabyey finger nails? Ow, playing a guitar with no fingernails :x Anyways, looks good. Looking at the title I thought it was just a guitar doing it's own self -portrait :lol: IMO the head is a bit too round. I've found heads to be more square or cubic than spherical (oooh geometry words :) )The hair is wierd I think because it sticks right to the head, stemming from the problem mentioned before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black_Flat Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Very nice, I like it. CC, maybe your fav band logo on your shirt (if your not in a band, if you are in a band your bands logo) Right arm is smaller than the left, and from the way your holding your guitar your right handed. Hair needs a little work, maybe add a drummer and bass guitarist as your bg, but its your choice... Again i like it, and out of curiosity what kind of guitar do you have? black flat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Hey thanks for the C&C, By the way i've added nails, fixing the shirt, trying to add a face and fix hair. But its been stubborn. I'm keeping the arms. I think they look fine :? , maybey later on.. And for my guitar, i have a piece of [cabbage] typhoon until i can get enough $ for my gibson sg like in the pic :wink: . Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 UPDATE: Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neishc Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Wow!!! I love it man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 needs a face but looking good. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Anyone got any tips on facial feautures for a realistic look ? Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
t_hrowie_s Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 only flaw I noticed is the hands, the fingernails are a bit too big..but thats just my opinnion :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black_Flat Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 only flaw I noticed is the hands, the fingernails are a bit too big..but thats just my opinnion :thumbsup: ooh yea, i didnt notice that when i was just looking at it, it looks as though the finger nails are upto the joint (should be about half that size) Still looking very nice Black flat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Fixed it, will post when i fix more up. :) Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 UPDATE x2: :) Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
t_hrowie_s Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 looks good, dont forget the adams apple...wow that sounds stupid, anyways -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verminox Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Maybe put loads of marshall stacks in the background, looks really good so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 the shading on the t shirt looks kinda poor, but apart from that its awesome. GJ My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Fixed the shirt, working on the face and logo for shirt. Any other comments. Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugger_88 Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 I didnt really see notin... Other then the fingernails are a little to big... Other than that very good job Bam =D> =D> =D> - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Updated. Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slayer_Adam7 Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Looking good so far http://www.boom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Anything to improve? I'd rather 2 comments full of cnc then 1000 with "suhweet dewd". :roll: But thanks. :anxious: Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slayer_Adam7 Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 make him in a bedroom maybe? And a face? http://www.boom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navyplaya Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 No other comments other then that is awesome man, gj so far! -All sigs by me.[My Gallery] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 Taa-da.! Well thanks navy, i'm glad one of my good friends on here likes it. Anyways cnc on the new updates? Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navyplaya Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 Really the only thing i can see that looks a little weird to me is the hair on the left side after it extends from the head, it just seems way to thinned out way to much. Thats really all i see thats even the slightest bit wrong. (oh and im guessing the shirt says alexisonfire?, i should get a cookie or something :D ) -All sigs by me.[My Gallery] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 Rainbow cookie for navvy :) . You mean his left or our left? Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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