Right here it is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bear in mind this is my first crack at it and I even think it's pretty plain, so please rate 1/10 and where i could improve, plus things i could add :

1 thing... bad :(

Could you put that answer into a more helpful one?

The text placement is totally wrong, its allways left above, right above, left below or right below (It depends on what your making, in abstract sigs sometimes they can be placed in the middle.)

 

 

 

The rest isnt that bad, but the gray background looks to much like ''blocks of color''.

 

 

 

So I disagree with pomar, it isnt bad. :wink:

1 thing... bad :(

 

he didnt say it isnt bad

 

 

 

text needs work badly. the guys armour is good, but the BG is a mess. keep working on it and itll get better

Hmm.. the ground could need some more rocks, and overall it needs filling. Its quite good for a first, i like the ammy most :P.

 

Shading is good on most things.. but remember that rune is a metal, thus it needs to shine a bit more.

 

Text is wrongly placed.

 

 

 

i'd rate it an 7,5/10 for a first, there are some faults on shading, the moon looks a bit odd, and its empty

Thanks guys, that abit more helpful than just saying "bad"

Well, your text placement isn't good, as said before.

 

Your protagonist has rune pants #-o

 

Also, keep the shading style consistent, the moon is too different from the rest and it looks like a rip. Not that it is a rip btw.

Okay..busy at the moment with codes on the site.

anatomy need some heavy work, as his left arm is bent painfully and his right looks non existant with his legs, the position is impossible as it looks painfull. along with that, the sig is way too large and way too empty....

Looks good but your guy has no fingers. :-w And put some little circle things by the knee capse to make the legs look lik platelegs instead of pants.