R4my Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 C/C please :ohnoes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 The hand is a bit too............bendy at the joint. Not sure how to fix it though. Like the idea :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 Hello ;D Anatomy >_< Colour choice seems good so far, keep going with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deloriagod Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 Wow.. That guy has a lot of fat on his forearm. One quick question. Why is the guy just looking down at the sword that has been run through his heart? Shouldn't he as least look like he's in pain before he dies? Internet Marketing For Newbies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 whys there a sword through his shoulder when it loks like hes holding him hostage, and the guys arm is FAT. like buddha fat. My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroi_Ame Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 If there is a sword going through the foremost guy, he should be dead or at least bleeding. The guy with the black hair has very noticable hand/arm problems. His right hand looks completely unnatural, and his left is twice as big as it should be. You need to either add platemail to his arms (like the other guy) or chainmail, at the moment it looks really weird. Your basic anatomy is quite well compared to some of these other WIPs I've seen lately. Linework is very neat, as well. You did a good job so far, other than those minor mistakes. Keep up the good work, I hope to see this finished soon. :D Kuroi Ame do u wow?Cassiius|Level 70 Night Elf Preist|RunetotemSambora|Level 37 Tauren Shaman|BurningLegion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryoushinn Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 That's pretty good. The only thing that seems off are the arms. It reminds me of noodles... Erm, anyways don't forget that people have joints and don't just "curve". And pretend someone was wrapping their arms around something. The hand doesn't suddenly curve around it. Just something to think about, but i like it so far. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R4my Posted November 10, 2006 Author Share Posted November 10, 2006 Thanks for replying guys, i'll try to fix the arm and the hand 8-) Hi lovely :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Preditor Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 Guys ever heard of a first go? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 It still keeps amazing me that the guy getting stabbed just stands there still when he gets run through? I mean, that If someone would stab me with a sword I would atleast twitch in shock or make at least some movement. I'd suggest you to make some bigger event to the background, like a clan war or something, as that stabbing scene looks like they are hiding from something. Yay, at last someone uses the real runite color, not cyan. [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R4my Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 It still keeps amazing me that the guy getting stabbed just stands there still when he gets run through? I mean, that If someone would stab me with a sword I would atleast twitch in shock or make at least some movement. I'd suggest you to make some bigger event to the background, like a clan war or something, as that stabbing scene looks like they are hiding from something. Yay, at last someone uses the real runite color, not cyan. Thanks :wink: I'm gonna make like 3 of his friends looking for him on the background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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