C/C please :ohnoes:

The hand is a bit too............bendy at the joint. Not sure how to fix it though. Like the idea :twisted:

Hello ;D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anatomy >_<

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Colour choice seems good so far, keep going with it.

Wow.. That guy has a lot of fat on his forearm. One quick question. Why is the guy just looking down at the sword that has been run through his heart? Shouldn't he as least look like he's in pain before he dies?

whys there a sword through his shoulder when it loks like hes holding him hostage, and the guys arm is FAT. like buddha fat.

If there is a sword going through the foremost guy, he should be dead or at least bleeding. The guy with the black hair has very noticable hand/arm problems. His right hand looks completely unnatural, and his left is twice as big as it should be. You need to either add platemail to his arms (like the other guy) or chainmail, at the moment it looks really weird. Your basic anatomy is quite well compared to some of these other WIPs I've seen lately. Linework is very neat, as well. You did a good job so far, other than those minor mistakes. Keep up the good work, I hope to see this finished soon. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kuroi Ame

That's pretty good. The only thing that seems off are the arms. It reminds me of noodles...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Erm, anyways don't forget that people have joints and don't just "curve". And pretend someone was wrapping their arms around something. The hand doesn't suddenly curve around it. Just something to think about, but i like it so far. :D

Thanks for replying guys, i'll try to fix the arm and the hand 8-)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hi lovely :wink:

Guys ever heard of a first go?

It still keeps amazing me that the guy getting stabbed just stands there still when he gets run through? I mean, that If someone would stab me with a sword I would atleast twitch in shock or make at least some movement.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'd suggest you to make some bigger event to the background, like a clan war or something, as that stabbing scene looks like they are hiding from something.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yay, at last someone uses the real runite color, not cyan.

It still keeps amazing me that the guy getting stabbed just stands there still when he gets run through? I mean, that If someone would stab me with a sword I would atleast twitch in shock or make at least some movement.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'd suggest you to make some bigger event to the background, like a clan war or something, as that stabbing scene looks like they are hiding from something.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yay, at last someone uses the real runite color, not cyan.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm gonna make like 3 of his friends looking for him on the background.