My first real pixel character I drew was the one that's in my avatar at the moment, but i'd never drawn a background before like the one in this, I also think the characters have much more detail than in my other one, too. I know there's still a fair bit I can improve on, so any tips are appreciated. :)

 

 

 

Wow, you really do know how to make me look good :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lol :roll: It's sooo good baby :D :3> Especially for one of your first pics :) I like the dolphies.

Your pic isn't working

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I did, however, see the pixel pic that you posted on Tripsis's blog, and that one was pretty nice \

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: Working again :thumbsup:

It seems a little empty. Perhaps add a tree?

It seems a little empty. Perhaps add a tree?

 

 

 

Hehe, I actually tried to add a palm tree before I was finish with the shading, but couldn't get the palm leaves to work at all, here's a rough draft of the tree I tried, if anyone knows how I should try to add the leaves it'd help alot. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wow, you really do know how to make me look good :)

 

 

 

Lol :roll: It's sooo good baby :D :3> Especially for one of your first pics :) I like the dolphies.

 

 

 

Rofl, thanks :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your pic isn't working

 

 

 

I did, however, see the pixel pic that you posted on Tripsis's blog, and that one was pretty nice

 

 

 

Edit: Working again :thumbsup:

 

 

 

Not sure why it wasn't working for you o.O But thanks. :)

i cant help u with the tree but i agree that its a perfect pic! only a bit empty...

space seems WAYYYYYYYY empty, i would shrink the land are a bit, as it seems too big. some sections are gradient tool shaded (used software to prove this), which means they are not truely a pixel. plus 2023 colors is a little much.

The shading, especially the tree is way off. And seems a bit simple and naÃÆÃâÃâïve.

i see very little good in it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I would say try to do evreything yourself and try again..im not going to critique anything as..it would really take too long, and would pobably be in vain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Just wondering though, why did you shade the sun?)

I don't know if it's just your style but make the characters a bit bigger. Thats like The same size as your avvy

nice if not a little bit plain, maybe add some fish or something lol? dont ask

It's very good. Not much I can critique on this one really except that it's empty and simple. Remember, doing simple things really well is good, but always try and do something new in each of your pieces. Even if it doesn't turn out well you'll learn from it.