Yea, jus dled c4d so i tried it out. Its not the greatest, but jus remembers it my first :)

 

 

 

That is an awesome first try! Very impressive :shock:

Preaty good first try, but the text is realy anoying, and gets in the way.

the tint look should be used in moderation. :P

i think it's very good. just don no about the colour.

mmm, i like bg (background)! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but text, u should change font...

 

 

 

AND maybe darker...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6.5/10

the tint look should be used in moderation. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Agreed..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is C4D? Never heard of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Interesting piece of work though, but I would reccomend using this as an experimental piece and maybe incorporate some new ideas into it before you use it.

 

the tint look should be used in moderation. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Agreed..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is C4D? Never heard of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Interesting piece of work though, but I would reccomend using this as an experimental piece and maybe incorporate some new ideas into it before you use it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

C4D is kinda like 3d Studio max :P which is a 3d modeling program, usualy alot of artist's will use it for Abstract's though :D

omg looks cooooooooooool way better than i did for first try! :shock:

Not bad at all, but the text needs some work

C4D is kinda like 3d Studio max :P which is a 3d modeling program, usualy alot of artist's will use it for Abstract's though :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ooo, that's something I might enjoy :) thanks.

 

C4D is kinda like 3d Studio max :P which is a 3d modeling program, usualy alot of artist's will use it for Abstract's though :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ooo, that's something I might enjoy :) thanks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

heh np. I belive they have a trial of it on their main page too :) I've been thinking about checking it out :D

Thanx all. You can get a trial of c4d at http://www.maxon.net.

Yea, jus dled c4d so i tried it out. Its not the greatest, but jus remembers it my first :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lemme guess... Matrix extrude on a torus? Matrix extrudes are so much fun!

i love background, good job!

Background - 8/10

 

 

 

Text - 3/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

==ice==

Lemme guess... Matrix extrude on a torus? Matrix extrudes are so much fun!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Matrix extrude on a few things, cant remember atm. Matrix extrude is kool :)

hmmm very interesting. :o

Preaty good first try, but the text is realy anoying, and gets in the way.

 

 

 

After your first 200 sigs, I don't know if you're in any position to be critiquing other people's text, regardless of how bad it is. lol :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Chicken

i think nadrils made more than 200 sigs im sure

 

 

 

cant belive you said that tho

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol nadril just wait till you see that post

i think nadrils made more than 200 sigs im sure

 

 

 

cant belive you said that tho

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol nadril just wait till you see that post

 

 

 

You clearly misunderstood me. I don't think you'd know what I'm talking about anyway, it refers to the first several months of nad's sig making, many months ago.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Chicken

 

i think nadrils made more than 200 sigs im sure

 

 

 

cant belive you said that tho

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol nadril just wait till you see that post

 

 

 

You clearly misunderstood me. I don't think you'd know what I'm talking about anyway, it refers to the first several months of nad's sig making, many months ago.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Chicken

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

More like a year and a few months lol :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah... but ah well, i'm just trying to pass on what i finaly learned after those months >.< :x lol

Really good for a first try but change the text. 8/10

Awesome man... i think you should just change the outline on the text to white... and it'd be be-a-utiful....

the text needs to stand out more.... Try diffrent color combinations.