Rate and C/C welcome

 

 

 

this is like my second pixel

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I re-done it a bit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Re-done it again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Again Redone can anyone help me with shading?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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ReDone Again! Face is more realistic

 

 

 

to be honost... AARG!!!! my eyes burn out of my head!!! :XD: default colors, REALY WORSE linework, and are those ment to be stars or snow :-s

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

please first go and search some tutorials and practise more before u post. Also be sure that u think its ok yourself, if so don't mind critisme from other people :wink:

dude! go away and practice. If I were you redo the linework. If you need shading practice ask for linework in art bazaar. also to get decent linework by yourself draw on paper and scan onto pc ( or copy but I find that real tricky ) take a look at my sig. Its my first pixel and to get it good I read like 50 tuts. on various websites. There are some great tuts here on tipit like terlys, punkages and imhomers. try 'em out and post when you like the look of it. this is what may first sig started like:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bad huh? I didn't really want to show that since it sucks so If I were you five words: practice, practice, practice, tuts, post

to be honost... AARG!!!! my eyes burn out of my head!!! :XD: default colors, REALY WORSE linework, and are those ment to be stars or snow :-s

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

please first go and search some tutorials and practise more before u post. Also be sure that u think its ok yourself, if so don't mind critisme from other people :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

they're not default colours plz go and check b4 critsizing and its snow! use your brians if you had some!!!

 

to be honost... AARG!!!! my eyes burn out of my head!!! :XD: default colors, REALY WORSE linework, and are those ment to be stars or snow :-s

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

please first go and search some tutorials and practise more before u post. Also be sure that u think its ok yourself, if so don't mind critisme from other people :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

they're not default colours plz go and check b4 critsizing and its snow! use your brians if you had some!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...They look like both snow and stars.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But seriously, the rules imply (if not say) that if you don't think your work is good (and if you do there is something wrong, sorry) you shouldn't post it.

 

 

 

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  [*:227qjxku]Anatomy and shading are your biggest problems here.
   
   
   
  [*:227qjxku]The perspective is also wrong on the presents. Its like you are looking down on them while you are looking straight at the person.
   
   
   
  [*:227qjxku]Look at someone, anyone, and see how their body is formed. Do their shoulders come to a T like that? Is the human torso like a square/rectangle?
   
   
   
  [*:227qjxku]Where do the bones bend?
   
   
   
  [*:227qjxku]Do feet naturally jut to the side like that?
   
   
   
  [*:227qjxku]The light source is the moon (I am guessing anyways]. There isnt really any shading to prove that.
   
   
   
  [*:227qjxku] Infact, there isn't any shading at all. :?

 

 

 

Just a few questions you should be asking yourself.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And frankly I don't attempt pixels because I don't have the ability to give a good, graphic answer to those questions.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hope you in time learn to answer those questions and become a better pixeler. :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good luck! :)

 

to be honost... AARG!!!! my eyes burn out of my head!!! :XD: default colors, REALY WORSE linework, and are those ment to be stars or snow :-s

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

please first go and search some tutorials and practise more before u post. Also be sure that u think its ok yourself, if so don't mind critisme from other people :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

they're not default colours plz go and check b4 critsizing and its snow! use your brians if you had some!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rofl... might be easier to take that seriously if you didnt use l33tsp33k in your post lol... grammer helps too... "use your brains if you had some" rofl that was the funniest... you made yourself look like an idiot. basicly everything i have to say is summerised in riks post.

 

to be honost... AARG!!!! my eyes burn out of my head!!! :XD: default colors, REALY WORSE linework, and are those ment to be stars or snow :-s

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

please first go and search some tutorials and practise more before u post. Also be sure that u think its ok yourself, if so don't mind critisme from other people :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

they're not default colours plz go and check b4 critsizing and its snow! use your brians if you had some!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He gave what you asked for, so you shouldn't insult him back. I try never to use pure white or black, but different tones of it. Anyway, there are great tutorials here on tipit that you could learn from. Anatomy, Shading and cleaner lines need to be fixed. The moon could use a bit of work as well. Try not to post your first few pixels unless you think it's really good.

Yall really need to stop flaming...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Work on your anatomy, and the gifts look kinda... WiErD They arnt default colors, and to shade use three different colors that match (kind of) and layer them ( I only used 3 when I started, but I use 7 or 8 now)

it's the dietokill2 of pixels :ohnoes:

it's the dietokill2 of pixels :ohnoes:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im sorry....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bwaahahahahahhahahaha... ahha.... ah... that was good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bawh ahahaha hahahahahahaahahahahahah ahahahahah :XD: :XD: :XD: :lol: :lol: :roll: :roll: :mrgreen:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok i was buisy before, but now some cc.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- to thick of boreders of stuff

 

 

 

-no shading

 

 

 

-anatomy. use it.

 

 

 

-santa hats dont defy gravity

 

 

 

-prespective is wrong on the presidents.

 

 

 

-humans have what they call "hair" on their heads.

 

 

 

-he doesnt look like hes holding the fork thing

 

 

 

-why is he holding a fork?

 

 

 

-your starts are copied and pasted

 

 

 

-your stars look terrible in general

 

 

 

-your moon looks like play doh

 

 

 

-your sack... dont even get me started on that lol...

 

 

 

- eyes arent squares

 

 

 

- believe it or not, human mouths dont detach like snakes do.

 

 

 

-his legs are to streight

 

 

 

- his arms are... err... broken.

 

 

 

- defualt color attack!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

will edit in a sec, got something to show you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Noob Pixel Man - Tomdavies90

 

 

 

Noob spammer - Brad25891

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

defualt color attack + add1 to ban list = 1hit k0.

*sigh*...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do people have any resemblence or idea of what stuff even looks like anymore? half of these "first and second pixels" I see look like a pre-schooler in art class.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Serriously... fix, well, everything.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

@dk: This has been bothering me for a bit, but you don't need to post your "first" atempt and then say how bad it was and how much you improved. Its been 'buggin the hell out of me for a while.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And Qwality, dietokill2 actualy made a pixel. It was worse than this [is that possible?]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And to the OP: Yes, I am being very blunt. But honestly, the reason why people continualy post images like this are because they see others doing it and having it agreed with.

#-o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, first things first, most of his anatomy (if not all of it), is wrong. Try and make him look more human, than something that looks vaguely like a human.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And next. The sack. I don't think I've ever seen a bag that jagged. Try and smooth it off, and make it look more round.

redone again face is more realistic

 

 

 

as realistic as a face with only 10 pixels can be....ok ok so its not so much the face but try to make the body a little les...noodle-like please and make the sack look like its not a never ending pathway to the sky please?

 

to be honost... AARG!!!! my eyes burn out of my head!!! :XD: default colors, REALY WORSE linework, and are those ment to be stars or snow :-s

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

please first go and search some tutorials and practise more before u post. Also be sure that u think its ok yourself, if so don't mind critisme from other people :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

they're not default colours plz go and check b4 critsizing and its snow! use your brians if you had some!!!

they look like default colours because they are realy bad for your eyes, and if u want to make snow also first use a tutorial :wink: and stop talking trash plz, i didn't said that offensive( or however u spell it) just plz read first the rules of the gallery b4 u post here becuaase there is a "rule" for first pixels.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't post your first ever sig. To be quite honest with you, they are hardly ever decent. Remember, if you think it doesn't look good, it doesn't. For those of you who truely feel that you are hot stuff, ask for a second opinion such as family member, friend, or messenger buddy if you want a real opinion as to if it's any good. If they give good feedback, post away.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and that "rule" is just more a guideline so u dont have to get all that flaming. :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: that was a good one :anxious: No offence to die2kill or however his name is.

i did a two minute fix that makes it look a TINY bit better. i added a bit of shading on him the snow and a shadow for the bag, i changed his hat and made his neck thicker. i also attempted to make his d chain look different then a red shirt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

I gave up on the anatomy. i did this jsut as a little bit of help

i'm going to cry myself to sleep tonight.

 

 

 

Do people have any resemblence or idea of what stuff even looks like anymore?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I blame the schools.. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

About the sig. Print it out and burn it. If you don't, I will. I see more and more people becoming, at the least, decent pixel artists. When I see something like this, I wonder why your mother was anywhere near a large amount of radiation while she was pregnant with you. Since when does everything around us have black lines around them? GET RID OF THE BLACK LINES! If you want your presents to be in perspective, make a damn vanishing point. I suggest you read a book on anatomy. I'm not sure how old you are but I seriously suggest taking some art classes. This is a disgrace to pixel art. Before I give up here, I must say I feel sorry for your poor little guy there. He can't hear due to his lack of ears, he has a dagger glued to his hand, and he must be freezing out there seeing as how he's wearing metal in the cold.. Sorry to be an a* but this is one place I can stand to be one.

 

 

 

Noob Pixel Man - Tomdavies90

 

 

 

Noob spammer - Brad25891

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

defualt color attack + add1 to ban list = 1hit k0.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Woot im famous!

 

 

 

oh crap i just violated my own card noooo!!! im gonna have to get back ontopic so i can counter it :o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

on topic: The colors are a bit hard on the eyes, the atonomy is terrible. that so called 'atempt' at shading is horrible.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep practicing