Well rate it, I'm proud of it lol. If you got criticism, well hit away. I'll take it.

nice shading but the man..it's so...simply...?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10

Niceness :) But some of the stars just seem too close to each other. Try to fix that, and maybe also surround each star with a lighter, blue-ish white so it looks like its sparkling.

im assuming u mean ur current sig?

 

 

 

its good but there isnt really much going on, the stars are too close.

 

 

 

7/10

Stars need AA and variation. Save my avvy and zoom in on it if you're stuck. Also you might want to choose more saturated colours.

rofl... thats not your avvy... ripped?

rofl... thats not your avvy... ripped?

if u mean gorgoyle it IS his avvy i remember it was made (for or by himself) just be4 the rs market closed here.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ontopic: sry to say but i don't realy like it its plain i think the shading needs improvement but just start again and i hope u will make great things 1 day : :thumbsup:

Thanks guys, well I might work on the stars and animate them. I also may make the text fade in then out. I'm currently setting off to make a new one though.

Could have sworn that avvy was MD66's or something like that...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways I like it but the trees roots are messed up.

I like the star closeness...you ppl ever see stars evenly spaced before?

I smell photoshop

 

 

 

Dont use it for pixels

 

 

 

that glow on ur character is done with photoshop "outer glow" in blending options

 

 

 

this is not called pixel

 

 

 

pixel is when u place each pixel, not filter it

 

 

 

After zooming i see its not even close to being a pixel

 

 

 

That background looks like a result of photoshop gradient tool

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now dont say that u added the glow urself

 

 

 

If u would have been skilled enuf to make a perfectly anti aliased glow to a poorly designed character, this wont be ur first pixel and it wont be so badly done

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok i know it may feel like i m flaming but its what i saw

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Everything is done like I would expect a beginner to do like - no cleaning of lines, wrong anatomy, broken whip ( zoom in to it ), bad prespective, etc.

 

 

 

So nothing new with it

 

 

 

But dont call it a pixel unless its actually one

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Another thing, most of the stuff is pillow shaded

 

 

 

Looks like you made everything in layers, selected one object by selecting a layer, then did Select > Modify > Contract ( or something like that )

 

 

 

Then you decreased it by 1 px, filled the new selection with a lighter color, and repeated

 

 

 

and resulted in non-pixeled pillow shading

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Even the text is added with photoshop

 

 

 

Perfectly anti aliased

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I suggest you go see tutorials

 

 

 

and dont use powerful stuff like photoshop

I smell photoshop

 

 

 

Dont use it for pixels

 

 

 

that glow on ur character is done with photoshop "outer glow" in blending options

 

 

 

this is not called pixel

 

 

 

pixel is when u place each pixel, not filter it

 

 

 

After zooming i see its not even close to being a pixel

 

 

 

That background looks like a result of photoshop gradient tool

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now dont say that u added the glow urself

 

 

 

If u would have been skilled enuf to make a perfectly anti aliased glow to a poorly designed character, this wont be ur first pixel and it wont be so badly done

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok i know it may feel like i m flaming but its what i saw

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Everything is done like I would expect a beginner to do like - no cleaning of lines, wrong anatomy, broken whip ( zoom in to it ), bad prespective, etc.

 

 

 

So nothing new with it

 

 

 

But dont call it a pixel unless its actually one

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Another thing, most of the stuff is pillow shaded

 

 

 

Looks like you made everything in layers, selected one object by selecting a layer, then did Select > Modify > Contract ( or something like that )

 

 

 

Then you decreased it by 1 px, filled the new selection with a lighter color, and repeated

 

 

 

and resulted in non-pixeled pillow shading

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Even the text is added with photoshop

 

 

 

Perfectly anti aliased

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I suggest you go see tutorials

 

 

 

and dont use powerful stuff like photoshop

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Photoshop is fine to use... you shouldn't use the tools on it though :?