Kudos to Strav for playing plastic surgeon on my person...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't really like the bow or the sky, but I don't know how to fix them. =\

That's quite good, actually.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The bow isn't that bad, work on the anatomy of the person first.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The right arm is much longer then the left, and add detail to the hands, don't just use circles.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kudos to Strav for playing plastic surgeon on my person...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't really like the bow or the sky, but I don't know how to fix them. =\

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the hand holding the bow should be behind the wood with a thumb infront of it O:) like the girl holding the shark in my newest pixel

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also the womens skirt. too wide

lol you just wanted to show off your new pixel dk haha..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its the background thats annoying me, or lack of.. its like the earth ends behind a stone wall.. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks great tho.. keep it up

@Dk - How He she/(He?) has the hand could be correct by having the fingers covering the bow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

\_ | \\ <- Thumb

 

 

 

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^ Fingers

 

 

 

__^ Bow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If the fingers went past the bow then It would be correct if you added a thumb.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back on topic

 

 

 

It looks pretty good. I agree with Dk on the skirt and maybe add some crinkles in the skirt. I would change the outline on the wall (?) . Apart from what has already been mentioned, That's all I have to say. Good Job. :)

it is good shading :lol:

Looking good there Allie, just need to put something in the sky because it looks too plain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Bloodangel

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That looks more like she is holding the bow, rather than it's just stuck to a circular object forming her hand.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If I take much more off the skirt she won't be able to walk. Thanks for the lending a hand, Pyro. :P

Niceness Allie, gotta love it. You could add some plants in front of the horizon, make some more clouds and make the sun a lil bigger, brighter. The darker line seperating her right arm from her chest could be removed partially, should make it neater. Good lucksies. :

 

 

 

Oh, and don't forget a border, however simple. :D

It's nicely colored, the only thing I see missing is a background besides the sky. Perhaps add some hills in the back, or a forest, or town, up to you. :P Maybe a few more clouds so that one isn't so lonely. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Finally, a border to finish it up would be great. :)

I know you can draw better cabbages :wink: