January 6, 200719 yr 3 Days, finally finished. http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8485/dragworkur4.png Some things are best left unexamined.
January 6, 200719 yr Texturing and colouring is really good but the dragon linework is off. It's body is way to thin, looks like a lizard instead of a mighty dragon! needs bigger horns and bigger wings, longer body, bigger front legs. It's like the head and neck are really good then it merges into a really small dragon that doesnt fit, but it is your first attempt at a dragon so naturally there will be some anatomy issues, but good luck on your next one and great colouring just BEEF IT OUT \ Lowgravity, I want to be just like you. But...I never will be as 1337 as you. :(
January 6, 200719 yr that my friend, is a fine piece of work. i can tell you've tried alot on it but yeah as LG said, the body is a bit off, try and make the dragon a bit more fierce in retrospect, maybe add some fierce [bleep]es on its wings and tail like so: sorry, i could only get my SMALL point across through imagery, hope you dont mind the edit O:)
January 6, 200719 yr he needs to be bulky, more muscular! stop feeding him all them damn vegitables! wop wop
January 6, 200719 yr Author I added the [bleep]es onto wings, and shoved a guy ontop of the dragon for the hell of it. Some things are best left unexamined.
January 6, 200719 yr Author Never saw the movie, plus I don't really enjoy junk like that. Movies kill your books, mainly because it forces your imagination into the movie, there by destroying what you pictured what the book "should've been" To sum all of that up. I just read the books : Some things are best left unexamined.
January 6, 200719 yr Never saw the movie, plus I don't really enjoy junk like that. Movies kill your books, mainly because it forces your imagination into the movie, there by destroying what you pictured what the book "should've been" To sum all of that up. I just read the books : i take my hat off to you mac :P i agree completely. anyway, you/we/they/god :lol: should focus on the size of the dragon :pray:
January 6, 200719 yr You need to make the wingspan much longer. Number of maple logs left to burn until 99 firemaking: 95,185 (@)_(@)
January 6, 200719 yr Never saw the movie, plus I don't really enjoy junk like that. Movies kill your books, mainly because it forces your imagination into the movie, there by destroying what you pictured what the book "should've been" To sum all of that up. I just read the books : are you by any chance some evil monster that has come down or uhh up? or from besides? diagonal angels? to taunt is with your evil "books" ? you can't listen to books man, it makes them utter silent and seriously that kills my brain.. + there's no energy in them! the scales on the neck need some work, plus the size of it.. naturally.. might do good with a bit moe of a belly? you want your dragon to scream MIGHT POWER! so you have to make it big muscular and well go wild on that.. the wings are at a wrong angle, considering your viewing from a diagonal view from bove, then what is now the let's say upper side of the wing, should be down!
January 6, 200719 yr Never saw the movie, plus I don't really enjoy junk like that. Movies kill your books, mainly because it forces your imagination into the movie, there by destroying what you pictured what the book "should've been" To sum all of that up. I just read the books : that book there my friend is a quilty book!!!!!but i do admit they should have never made it into the movie ne way the dragon kinda seems anerexic like even i could take it in a fight!!! sig and avy by born2die
January 7, 200719 yr Never saw the movie, plus I don't really enjoy junk like that. Movies kill your books, mainly because it forces your imagination into the movie, there by destroying what you pictured what the book "should've been" To sum all of that up. I just read the books : Hear hear, had to see the movie for my sisters b'day, honestly, one of the worst i've seen. It had so little to do with the book and the overall plot it wasn't funny, i was practiacally moaning the whole way though at the incorectnesss. Lovin the pixel, although, as said he could be bulkier, and the wings look a tad odd, it'l be interesting animated, what will be? "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business"
January 7, 200719 yr Updated. Will animate. I can't wait for animation. 8,325th to 99 Firemaking 3/9/08 | 44,811th to 99 Cooking 7/16/084,968th to 99 Farming 10/9/09 | Runescaper August 2005-March 2010Tip.it Mod Feb. 2008-Sep. 2008 | Tip.it Crew Sep. 2008-Nov. 2009
January 7, 200719 yr Never saw the movie, plus I don't really enjoy junk like that. Movies kill your books, mainly because it forces your imagination into the movie, there by destroying what you pictured what the book "should've been" To sum all of that up. I just read the books : I read the books too, my favourite books of all time! I hear they are bringing out a new one soon! :
January 7, 200719 yr Texturing and colouring is really good but the dragon linework is off. I disagree... from my point of view it looks like the dragon is flying sorta at a 3\4 angle towards somthing not across it... therefore the dragon would be smaller at the end... espically if it was a large dragon... I pesonally think this is you best work yet... props to you! love the sky =P~ New sigzor^^
January 7, 200719 yr ^^^ As Nazgul said, the dragon isn't flying at you its flying diagonal so the head would be closer to you and would be bigger and the tail is further away so its smaller.... Great pixel btw. :)
January 7, 200719 yr Texturing and colouring is really good but the dragon linework is off. I disagree... from my point of view it looks like the dragon is flying sorta at a 3\4 angle towards somthing not across it... therefore the dragon would be smaller at the end... espically if it was a large dragon... I pesonally think this is you best work yet... props to you! love the sky =P~ NO! No no no no! damnit man NOT at this angle! not THAT extreme! and NO that dragon does not look mighty or large! it looks like a [bleep]ing humming bird with a long neck and a weird head. sorry man your giving false critisisme here and are giving disregard to correct critisme. the tail would grow smaller in the distance, but only slightly because of the angle. i will no repeat my CORRECT critisisme, critisisme that i have done research for, yet was ignored? this Dragon needs a belly, yeah a belly and a big mighty chest, and muscular legs, because right now this dragon.. if it is a dragon looks like it's anorexic.. or a big sissy or not that big, it's how you look at it. plus i think the dragon broke his inexsisting back. sorry to come off agry but listen to me..
January 7, 200719 yr Texturing and colouring is really good but the dragon linework is off. I disagree... from my point of view it looks like the dragon is flying sorta at a 3\4 angle towards somthing not across it... therefore the dragon would be smaller at the end... espically if it was a large dragon... I pesonally think this is you best work yet... props to you! love the sky =P~ NO! No no no no! damnit man NOT at this angle! not THAT extreme! and NO that dragon does not look mighty or large! it looks like a [bleep] humming bird with a long neck and a weird head. sorry man your giving false critisisme here and are giving disregard to correct critisme. the tail would grow smaller in the distance, but only slightly because of the angle. i will no repeat my CORRECT critisisme, critisisme that i have done research for, yet was ignored? this Dragon needs a belly, yeah a belly and a big mighty chest, and muscular legs, because right now this dragon.. if it is a dragon looks like it's anorexic.. or a big sissy or not that big, it's how you look at it. plus i think the dragon broke his inexsisting back. sorry to come off agry but listen to me.. it might be a bit steep at the end maybe it should be SLIGHTLY... large at the tail... but not by much who says a dragon has to be powerful and strong you can have sleak small dragons... :roll: I would say the far wing needs to be ajusted... and yeah the neck could use a bit of work for future reference... but i still think the dragon as a whole looks pretty nice... only thing i would say needs to be changed - like really needs to be changeds is that far wing... and maybe the near one also New sigzor^^
January 8, 200719 yr Author Well, I went ahead and finished it : I'll use the crits for the next peice I draw. Some things are best left unexamined.
January 8, 200719 yr There's no TRUE DRAGOn ANATOMY , a dragon is a fantasy creature and Mac has the full right to draw a dragon how he imagines a dragon to be and i personally like his dragon and dont find anything wrong with it. Join the movement^
January 8, 200719 yr Nice work, although the animation could be alot smoother. Same delay between lightnings, but more frames, ofcourse thats a bigger filesize but it'l look better. "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business"
January 9, 200719 yr I like the sig alot man, i dunno why people are whining about the dragon looking like a lizard.. Who wants an overweight dragon anyway? :o Never saw the movie, plus I don't really enjoy junk like that. Movies kill your books, mainly because it forces your imagination into the movie, there by destroying what you pictured what the book "should've been" To sum all of that up. I just read the books : Also, i can't agree with you more, i love reading the Harry Potters, the book is great, but the films aren't so good :( Currently awaiting the arrival of the 7th book :( Hurry up J.K.Rowling! :( Tough times don't last. Tough people do.
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