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Varda

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Even though thisi s a pretty akward pose, I can still tell that her legs have flawed porportions... I'll update this in a few minutes to show you what I mean.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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(Mainly it was shading problems that made the legs look weird, not lines)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't take it the wrong way, it all looks really good :thumbsup: , these are just a little touch ups you could do to make it better and slightly more realistic.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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(notice that I edited it so you could see the backround in between the legs)

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Awkward pose yes, but it was a brain-teaser.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks anyway. I'm not really happy when people draw right on the image, like correcting colours etc, but yours was ok :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Need to wake up, before I continue.

 

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Read her fine print.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways.

 

 

 

Looking at it, her right forearm seems to be small and out of proportion with her upper arm. And her left arm is just odd.

 

 

 

But they do look like that in the picture also, so I'm going to stop looking before my brain hurts.

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Yes! Yes! Yes! :thumbsup:

 

 

 

:lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The legs and arms look perfect now (well atleast to me), e dress looks alot more elgant and fancy than before ,and the pose of the legs can easily be seen and understood.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hope you make the backround as well as the dancer.

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Aah, anatomy is bad. I don't know it so much.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the crits guys. I'll work more on her. ::'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Small update, fixed the body a little..

 

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I think it looks great so far :) You've made a lot of progress since the first image! I am one of the few lovers of digital painting, so I'll keep my eye on this :wink:

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loving the ballerina but i don't like the ranger so much i think it's because it doesn't look as real it's still awesome but not as good as your other which basically looked like the pictures, also the rangers eyes are kind of weird, just a pointer there

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loving the ballerina but i don't like the ranger so much i think it's because it doesn't look as real it's still awesome but not as good as your other which basically looked like the pictures, also the rangers eyes are kind of weird, just a pointer there

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was not supposed to be real. And did you read my last line on the comment? I guess not.

 

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