1. I'm guna take a guess and say thats a bunny coming out of a burrow and not a dog doing his business. lol 2. I like the fence. Cliff, waves, sun, and the bouy look fine. *Remember this is constructive* 3. Think the shading could use one angle and not several. Also the ppl, rabbit, and bushes havnt been shaded. 4. Sky, for some reason it don't look right for the brighter to be at the horizon when the sun is 35% above it and the upper sky is darker where the sun is. 5. Maybe the portholes could show some metal stairs or something interior or stained glass. 6. Door handle. 7. Would use the vines from the right side on the left, and use the left on the right side. (Sunlight/brightness/shading/w.e) 8. Noticed how you gave the grass some life round the fence and was wondering if you could somehow do that to the rest w/o making it look funky. The lil waves from the ocean make it look better rather than just leaving it plain. 7/10 for a first Have fun, Heartz Don't be afraid to give crits Heartz it's what the threads for. I'm not gunna eat yer fingers off like this guy :ohnoes: . And the people and rabbits have been shaded, but lightly. Thanks for the crits, i'm starting a more runescape-ey one now.