ehh, its Good, just a few things, the head of the staff is a little misshaped, and the way youv shaded his chest it looks like he has boobs? And umm.. just a segestion, maybe put a strap around him so it looks like somthing is holding the staff thats on his back. Good luck=D
Is this not clearly ripped to everyone else? You croped the character from someone elsees sig, the camels, well you cropped them, badly, from somthing and then you sprayed yellow all over the place.