2nd one is quite smart, and likeable, but the text is horrible. top 1 is just a square copied and pasted sev times, u can see distinctly where it starts/finishes. 1st = bad, 2nd = good
the yellow P-hat is squished, anatomy is a bit dodgy. , girl on the lefts face doesnt have a nose, and 1 foot is smaller than the other. the D stuff on the wall is flat too.
the render isnt blended at all, its not transparent, and the text is poor and altogether hard to read due to scanlines. theres a random black/white bit on the bottom left, and theres a random circle at the bottom of the white bit which should be transparent.
its nice but not ur best. #2 is def better, probably coz it has colour. ur current sig is much better than either of em. GJ though, not much C.C to give.