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yep first part is right, and i untherstand the battle thing. I also try'd some thing with a battle'ish look but it never looks better then now :anxious: If u have an idea how i possibly could make it look that way, please tell me :

ok guys thanks for the comments, and i have a V2.1 since almost everyone thinks V2 was better.

It looks realy nice, but the purple part on the (i think) C4D looks rare in my opinion :? But its a nice sig i think :P :

There is a V3 with a border :wink: and its in there already 20-25 mins.. :P

ok ill put these 2 in the new version :P Thanks for the comments :

ok i'll try the color idea. Thnx for the comment

Ok so i'm worki ng on a new website design for a friend. He asked me to use orange/brown and 2 sprite's in it. So i just started and this are the 2 versions i came up with: V2 V2.1 - border (first read edit) V3 EDIT: Ok so since V1 was bad, V3 with border is terrible i have a v2.1 with border. I hope this version is a bit better :anxious: Yes i know its a pretty easy to make banner but its what he asked :wink: Also that "the power" is what he wants in it. C/C and comments :

This one got my vote, because it looks pretty simple but good. darn haven't seen that this was my 700th post #-o

Ok i'm home now an i have noticed a few things: * If you looks good at the mockup, i think about 100-150 pix below the grass there is a part in the rocky area where u can see some sort of line. Maybe get that awey. Also a suggestion: add some fossil's in the rocks or maybe magma :wink: * Get more sort of tree's and rocks maybe only 2 sort of tree's and 2 or 3 sort of rocks make a big difference i think, because this realy looks copy/pasted. So... i hope u have enoguh time for some chances like this, because i realy think it makes a big difference :) * The person is against some background i think pretty hard to see. With his black trousers and black hair. * The red outlines are a on some parts to outcoming (i hope i say it clearly enough :S). If u want i'll mark the parts that i think are to much. * Zoomed to x2 or even better x4 i have realy noticed something that bothers me with alot of RPG's : With all those copy/pasting things alot vertical clearly visible. With this mockup its on every edge on the right or the left (i can't say it exectly) there is 1 vertical blue line just untherneath the grass, and thats copy'd everytime. I hope u see what i mean :wink: * On the left part there are some small parts that get higher every time, but somehow it looks like they get closer everytime :? (only if i look from the left to the right) are the first things i noticed. A few idea's: - Maybe make some diagonal parts and not only high/low difference. - Maybe make something like a pet that follow's him. It could attack or not, but there are more things then only enemy's and the head character in there then :wink: - Don't make at the end an Big Boss or something, but just something else. I dont know what you could put in there then, but its over used to my idea :wall: ( i don't know if u were planning one but just thought maybe say it) Ok i hope this is enough help for now, and lolz.. i have put 25 mins in just 1 post, my new record :lol:

It looks good, but like already said: maybe work a little more at the background, so it looks a bit nicer :wink: And atm i dont can give to much advise since i'm in school :(

plz tell me the dimensions... like 750x150 or something?

Look through this tutorial to learn something about anatomy :wink: If u want another tutorial just search for: human anatomy tutorial :wink: Goodluck :

Looks realy, realy proffesional DM =D> Only a few things: chance paswoord (Bad dutch -.- ) to wachtwoord, the search engine is placed on a pretty rare place, because the most search engines are on top of the page and the most people took there for them :wink: And a thing that could possibly get anoying for some people: With only 9 places you will always have to go to a new place, but with maybe a few hundred singles that could be pretty anoying :wink: Maybe exstend it to 15 or something thats alreay alot better i think... Also good luck with your project, i have done something simular a year ago for fun (and for a good note or whatever rapport is in english...). I hope ur mates dont hate u becouse u already started without them :P and goodluck with this :

ok personaly i realy like t he sky now and the shading on the path on the edges But: * The lines on the path are wrong positioned, they nood to be more horizontal , Make some grass on the edge of the path so it already gives a bit more grassy fealing. * Plz let the next thing you chance, be the edges of the hills, they just looks so rare and square :? * The guy his head is in a rare shape. Go look at deviantart for an anatomy guide so u maybe can chance the person a bit :wink: Ok so thats what realy needs to be chanced :

What needs to be the size? Here is just a regular form fill it in and paste it in your first post: Size: (for exemple 400x150x30kb Tip.it max size) Type: (for exemple: grunge, abstract, or something else..) Colors: (red, green, blue...) Render: (if u dont have renders yourself or dont know where to get them go for exemple to: http://www.planetrenders.net, or just no render) Font: (for good fonts go to: http://www.dafont.com, but this isn't neccisary just say something like: What fits best) Main text: (for exemple your name..) Subtext: (for exemple: the undefeated warrior) Extra's: (something what isn't in the other parts of the form. Hope that helps :wink: :P Also i might make this one...

there are different "normal" sizes of banners. Some: 800x150, 800x200, 750x125........ So be little more more specific :wink:

no problem :wink:

first sry for the double post, second imageshack still isn't working for me so i uploaded the sig with tinypic, so here is the good version, that other one just was a W.I.P. http://i12.tinypic.com/3zqyb8y.jpg Personaly i like this 1 better then the other one and i hope u to :

plz read the edit...

ok so here is what i have made from it: http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/6821/v1mitsubishi64rk8.jpg its abstract enough i hope? And sry that i didn't used your font but it realy didn't match the sig :? EDIT: oh darn i don't have the new version uploaded and imageshack has problems again with me -.- Ill edit the sig as fast as possible.. i realy dont like this version :x

well i'll start now, and i think it dont takes to much time. Maybe 10-20 mins :wink: EDIT: is it realy bad if the sig is like 400x125 or something?

i'll make you 1 :wink: if u want to know if i can make something look at my current sig :lol:

liek said: learn anatomy. a few points; (not much because there is almost nothing to comment on) * Never make a street straight because they don't exist... * U made the hills in the background to easy. Because they never have exact straight parts and then a part that is... bumpy or something... :? * The sky has to go from dark in the front to light blue/greenish in the background. Most of the time There isn't that much green in it just a little. That are some points i have noticed untill now. I hope this helps a bit :wink:

Ya, but I'm not a member of that forum... become one :wink: and i have had something simular a while ago... i thought by myself: what idiot exept me has the name acristic? and the guy also had some of my old sigs for sale :anxious:

well actualy it isn't brushing just some smudging... and i post an version behind the border so you can see what looks better ;)