Not bad, with a bit of luck you will make the 30 mil... You should try to get a chapel and a kharyll portal in your house, It does save alot of time, But you can do that when you start to make alot of money ;). Your setup isn't that bad, In my opinion I would splash out a bit on Torag's and Karils including the X bow,you get alot of free ammunition from barrows, don't get a coif. (and ahrims, no hood or staff, if you decide to use ancients)