Hmmm, if you want to improve it you could make it larger add dark edges instead of lines and improve on the animation - maybe that wouoldn't fit into requirements though. I love it nonetheless
Paw claw it's a new way of making a signature. For all you know it could be easier than drawing linework first. Give it a try first before jumping to conclusions
mxm sometime that causes quality loss of the picture, and loses detail. Try http://www.irfanview.com it's a free download and can change any file to a different format.
Your perspective is all wrong, it looks as if you've tried to get the background in to make it look like the fishers guild rather than being careful with perspective.
The ranger looks as if He can't fit into the lens of the camera and is trying to lean over to make up for it. Otehrwise I like it. I always like your signatures and with the amount you're making it seems you're working hard to become the best :) gl in the future
correction to that.. it looks like poo mixed in a blender.. and if i recall correctly chocolate is much tastier then that. What colour do you suggest I make chocolate, yes a very bright fluorecent pink will do. Not all chocolate is tastier than that (very dark chocolate = not nice) - Btw happy new year