Kuroi_Ame

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Why is it always three judges? :? I say we make it 2 this time :thumbsup:

Could I be a judge? :D O_O 666 post count >.<

http://www.mreclipse.com/SEphoto/TSE1991/image/T91wide23w.JPG Lightest is near the sun. You're right, near the horizon, it is somewhat bright, but not the brightest. Just like I said.

Hmm..not the best, but not too bad. Good things: -Chose correct colors -Have a border (I think) -Okay font Things to work on: -The filter you used doesn't look good -Random brushes rarely work out well You could look at some tutuorials here, on the forums that are really good, Cadburys_Egg has some good ones out there you might want to try. The Render looks like you at least tried to blend it, which is good.

Oops, fixed it, lol. Thanks for the good comments, remember to tell me if there is anything that needs changing/fixing, always open to crits. O:)

I haven't noticed any change.

Second time with render. v2 Render: http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-16042 Rate and c/c please.

I liked the green one, too, but no one else did. Would you mind telling me what to improve on the green one? I'll repost it if you need to see it again, I'd really like to make it look better.

The sky is fine...the lightest is near the sun, because the sun is where the greatest light source is. I think you need to look outside one day.

Got rid of the green signature, it was very bad...Replaced it with a render'ed grunge.

Could you post on my new one that I made, please? This is an older one and isn't that good, I know. It's the one titled Green~A signature~ That one I learned from the crits here, sorta.

I think it would look lots better if you only had the circley brush on the left and the brush that went under the name. In my opinion, that would look more minimalistic. The font is nice, though, could be better.

Take off the lens flare, if you can, it looks really bad. The whatever in the box to the left thing isn't that great either. I think it might look better if it was a little bigger, had some meaning, and wasn't overlayed with green, which doesnt' fit the signature anyway. IMO, red would work better, and yeah, add a border.

"Green" v2 v3 Rate and c/c please.

"Green" v2 v3 First time with a render. Black border: Render: http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/5334/deathangel4gk.png Second time with render. v2 Render: http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-16042 Rate and c/c please.

Thanks, I like it, too, but it is a little messy. By the way, if someone wants this, let me know and give me a text to put on it and I'll give it to you.

I really like the text placement on v3, personally my favorite. Although, I don't really care for the huge white pillars on either side. Kinda looks like you have bad cropping skills. :?

The eyes bug me so much, lol. Especially the pupil, which looks like random scribbles, and the eyelashes, which are too thick imo. The lips are good, do that for the eyes, the shine, I mean.

I did do that..It is too messy, but I can't make a good minimalistic signature, or have one with a focus point, which I'm trying to do, but not really achieving that. I've tried adding a border, in fact, it says I have a border on it, but isn't showing up, I'm not sure why, but it does have a border on it..somewhere. o.O Thanks for the crits, I'll try to improve off this.

C/c please, the real stuff, plawks. O:)

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I'm not going to sugar coat this, it's not the best thing in the world. But, it's a start, and that's all anyone can ask for. The door is a bit small for it's width and the height of the room is a bit, well, too high. I see you're trying isometry. There's some great tuts out there, the basic one, which can help you a lot is: SpriteArt. Right now, the main problem I see is your diagonal lines. You should try keeping them consistent (either 2:1 or 1:2 or something like that). It looks like you just used the pen tool and connected line A to line B, which doesn't look good. You should also try to challenge yourself, you'll never get better if you don't. It's really basic at the moment, a bed and a door in a room? Who couldn't do that? Put the bed in the front of the room, put a computer in there, add detail, put color! There's so much you could do, just don't go easy on yourself. Hope this helps. If not, I could come back and tell you how crappy it is, or how great it is. :XD:

He's talking about F2P..And, no, they don't drop death runes..I updated my guide so that it says that. i was refering to the coment about the ring of wealth i know there are no runes droped in f2p i was not disputing that fact Oh, I didn't read his entire post. I've never used the Ring of Wealth, but I'll put it in there as a suggestion.

Are you 100% sure that free to play users get absolutely NO Death Runes? They're F2P items and they're F2P monsters in a F2P world..I'll double check your word tomorrow. they really never drop them, i have never met a person down there that got deaths when i was f2p. btw, you may want to mention that rings of wealth are NOT suggested. i spent 2 hours down there with one equiped and all i got was coins coins, coins. when i took it off i got 5 times as many runes as having it on. imo its definatly not worth it. weird when i had my row of i got 250deaths and 241bloods (actual figures) in one trip next trip without it (forgot to equip :wall: ) i only got 150 deathsnd 100 bloods He's talking about F2P..And, no, they don't drop death runes..I updated my guide so that it says that.