Ok...Other than the anatomy errors, you have major perspective ones, too. The line of the slope of the hill could be lowered a lot. Right now, it looks like I'm looking from below. The two girls are at different angles from each other and the nearer one's upper body has a different perspective than the rest of her body. The one that is farther away looks like she is somehow on a wall (almost, it's like an 80 degree angle lol). The tree roots are way off, they should look like they're going into the ground, and need to be thicker. I like the items, they're not perfect, but they are recognizable. The skirt is a bit big compared to the rest, and the waist area is way too small compared to the rest. I hope these girls will have clothes when this is finished, and I think you need to get rid of the thick lines, and do 1 px lines..They'll look better, in my opinion. Ok, now fix it up! :XD: [EDIT= no, I'm not going to say which girl is sexier, lmao.. :uhh: