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you suck at translating I want my money back gaurantee :evil:

My name is Lil PeePee and I'ma stick it in your CleeClee

The Outsiders and that's fictional

I'ma name my son roflcopter and my daughter lollerskates and I'm hoping when it happens by then internet acronyms will be forgotten when they go to school....imagine their math/science teachers...."Roflcopter Bollmeyer!" -teacher proceeds to rofl-

Classified-It's Just My Opinion

This just in, the Allies have won world war II! I heard cavemen have developed this new device, they call it "the wheel" magnificient device I should say, I mean it rotates and can move you from place to place!

[hide]screwable[/hide] But on the real, she gotta be nice looking, hair doesn't realy matter except red....ugh can't stand red hair and can't be short unless it looks good on her. Nice backside, chest doesn't really matter, intelligent enough to not sound like a rotten apple when talking...and someone who can appreciate my music I produce and the late nights where I stay up til 3-4 to write lyrics :P That's about it

what kind of music your into Hip Hop, Rap, any form of it is cool unless it's a whack verse overall how does your music help you Gives me ideas for my own lyrics I produce and gives me inspiration to continue to work even when everyone shoots me down and says I'll never amount to anything how do you relate to it Depends, if it's a club song then there's really no relation, it's just to dance to. If it's some more deeper meaning song it can give me an idea on how to use metaphors, double meanings and stuff, pretty much I use other MC's work to improve my own but I also enjoy the story telling aspect of some songs like Hip Hop Police and relevant songs like Evening News(both by chamillionaire I know) how does it make you feel I pretty much covered this, inspired, can make me feel good when jiggin(not literally, don't do ex :P) to A Bay Bay or another club song

I DO realize I dug a huge [wagon] hole here(literal hole, not...that...:\)....I really don't know what to say tbh and merc, idk, I just thought I could share and possibly get any feedback from anyone besides the usual lololol nice!!1!!

10 times better then my last one and makes ALOT of sense(beware, it's following the hip hop is dead movement :P) Wordplay is sick imo and will be recorded ASAP cause my friend is moving his studio equipment back over to the northshore from new orleans so I'll be recordin my music over the weekend at his place. This is a collabo with the other man on our team, Enron(my friend who owns the studio equipment is Max,incase anyone is going to follow our story or lyrics :)) Flip the switch to the house but no lights come on hip hop musn't be home or creativity left the dome Whichever happened talent's been brought back pop the top off the syringe n load it full blast in the [wagon] I thought the dead don't come back but I feel 2pac in my veins but Chaos is speakin so let Chaos reign My formula contained is like Salt flavors your brain when fused and still would have ya slain taken apart The beat don't make the lyrics the lyrics make the beat unless you ain't hear it right or ya feedin lies to the street I'm pushin different weight to make my gwap shoppin carts at a grocery store named Winn dixie while makin hip hop like Whoopie the connection is love murk you rookies skin ya hides for rugs mount ya head up above on the fireplace where you should be no higher place n if that's the case when I die cremate me rather then put my art to shame

I'm not arguing, I'm stating my view and my opinion, don't like it? private message me, the only difference between me and a mainstream artist is they have a record contract. I could say that hip hop's my profession which it will be once I'm recording my [cabbage] on a quality mic at my friend's house and I'd say my lyrics are pro but...you know what [bleep] it, I'm not gonna argue, [bleep] IT, I'm done typing and this is making my blood sugar go low so yeah, [bleep] it

Nadril- There's a difference between being pro and having a record contract, really I don't even think the word pro is used in music, it's either someone loves you or someone hates you and if you receive both, you're doing something right :P CTP- Sorry, my bad, it's the net and I can't read how you meant it, I prolly come off arrogant with my posts and I realize this, sorry but do you listen to underground artists also? Like, and I realize this can apply to some mainstream lyrics too, with some lyrics you have to do some research to find out what they mean really. Take for instance alot of the times in Slug from Atmosphere's lyrics he metaphors about his ex-girlfriend Lucy who said not to talk about him but if you listened to his lyrics without knowing you'd be like, oh it's just some old tramp he used to date....no, since you know who he's addressing it becomes a personal line and makes it all the much sweeter. It's so easy to know what most mainstream artists are talking about because they are usually about the same thing, sex, guns, drugs and/or dancing Hob- A comma signifies a momentary pause to me thus that doesn't help really for me, I copied and pasted from notepad where I wrote it and about the syllables, it's a smart move/should be done but IF you can manage to switch your flows and cram words and breath right on the track it's possible to not have to match the syllables at every moment, also finding the rhymes is piss easy....to me I guess and to some people also easy, meh

Right, was outta line when I said that...I'm used to alot of [cabbage] in this section...and really alot of [cabbage] overall And Bubsa that doesn't make them "pro", they got record contracts, they're not pro. Many other "amateur" rappers could destroy them and HELL a 6th grader would stand a chance at battling either of them and the crowd would have a hard time making the decision over who won. But I never intended for this thread to come out like this so could we please drop the offtopicness of that the thread seems to be directing in

ctp....lol...where you draw gangsta from, i don't know but it seemed really unneccessary to try to start some flame war

People obviously haven't ever been to a text battle forum :P Not, complaining about you guys but I was more looking for criticsm about the lyrics(could there be a better alternative to a certain word to make a better multi,was my wordplay aight? or something along those lines,but there is also the share factor and I understand your views), not my flow, my flow's perfectly fine on the mic and how good it sounds is all in the production though sadly none of my work will be started that I've written(3-4 songs so far lol I keep myself busy :S) until I get to my friend's house and jump on his way better mic and computer, basically it's like a studio with ghetto foam/bed matresses lol.

then why does he still cut himself?:\

Yeah I realize that I didn't know that some words didnt get censored :S

SIGH some people don't understand metaphors but it needs a lil background info...I'll even caps the rhymes since you can't figure it out when it's piss easy 300 men strong DIVIDED by a hundred like SPARTA we'll SPARK an IDEA you NEVER THOUGHT OF The white hip hop movement DOWN HERE IN THE SOUTH speaks Chaos without any movement FROM MY MOUTH You're losing GROUND with every SOUND SPOKE grants to pay for all ya future ALBUMS are bein REVOKED Real TALK son all eyes on ya MOTHER how ya SWAM from HER MOUTH to DOWN UNDER still ain't been DISCOVERED Possibly a RANSOM for a HANDSOME LUMP of CASH from the FATHER incase the BASTARD tried to move FARTHER AWAY I don't BLAME HIM LADIES THESE DAYS all wanna MAIN US MEN to get PAID from sexual FOREPLAY to cover RENT Lower ya DEFENSES overcome by a MOTIVE that's SENSELESS who know's what diseases LURK in the UNEXPECTED Are you WRENCHIN ya HANDS AT MY WORDS ANGER FROM DEEP DOWN I'VE DISTURBED but don't hate ME for EXPOSIN your WORTH Now for the explanation I sent to my friend on myspace: The first line is me, Max, and our other friend who's rappin, comparin us 300 and sparta and I never saw the movie but wasn't them 300 vs a hoard of like 10k? It's like saying, we're lyrical and we're fightin against all these gangsta rappers and we haven't the slimmest chance of winning, oddly I never had that intent of the line til now lol. Second line is self explanitory but it plays off my name Big C, AKA Big Chaos, if you asked any hardcore street cat if a southern white kid would make it in a music scene like hip hop they'd laugh in your face :/ and I'm sayin our movement will cause chaos just by the fact we're white, from the south and rap how we do Third line, sayin we're breakin down the barrier with every rhyme we make and basically it means their label is losin faith and would rather not put out money for their album but focus on us Fourth line kicks in with the diss, basically meaning your hooker of a mom should've swallowed your....existence(making it tip it friendly) instead of creating you, to put it in a blunt perspective(that was an explanation, not talkin bout you lol :/) Fifth line, talkin bout how women cheat most men out of cash by making babies, like you know how the fathers always run off when the kid comes in and some women go to the length of gettin the cash they need for the kid rather then being [bleep]ed over Sixth line, I can say I don't blame the guy who ran cuz of the above reasons but the seventh line is sayin you're an idiot for even not wearin protection(thus diseases and babies are created)...but this is in a diss format, makin it all seem bad to whoever I would be dissin, hope you understand that :P Last line is what makes the other lines the diss, or make it apparent that it was a diss cuz you're supposed to be pissed that I said that about you and people deny [cabbage] like that and say their step dad is their real father and their hooker mom is cool and not a hooker but if you react all pissed off you prove the point of exposing your worth....worthless HOPEFULLY that all made sense as it's late and you might not be understanding things fully, I know I'm not right now cause my body feels like it's drunk from my low blood sugar lol

I saw an emo cringe at the sight of his own blood I've seen a 300 re-enactment across my street I saw eminem sing mary had a little lamb in the shower....okay, I didnt see him in the shower I just heard him, I swear!!1!!1 :oops:

age doesnt stop your older friends/siblings to buy your booze....peer pressure ftw, of course I'm 4-5 years older then you depending on your birthdates :P

Possible offensive material to some.... 300 men strong divided by a hundred like sparta we'll spark an idea you never thought of The white hip hop movement down here in the south speaks Chaos without any movement from my mouth You're losing ground with every sound spoke grants to pay for all ya future albums are bein revoked Real talk son all eyes on ya mother how ya swam from her mouth to down under still ain't been discovered Possibly a ransom for a handsome lump of cash from the father incase the bastard tried to move farther away I don't blame him ladies these days all wanna maim us men to get paid from sexual foreplay to cover rent Lower ya defenses overcome by a motive that's senseless who know's what diseases lurk in the unexpected Are you wrenchin ya hands at my words anger from deep down I've disturbed but don't hate me for exposin your worth

WARNING TROLL POST AHEAD You've been warned. I now ask why you avoided to list every other genre, I mean you don't even list Rap/Hip Hop or Classical(only 2 bigger genres tip iters might listen to, atleast I think, unless you don't group all the subgenres of rock like emo and stuff....I hope I'm making sense). Right, so explain to me WHY screaming at a microphone and plucking strings, and slamming metal and plastic makes it any more talented then making a completely metaphoric and multiple syllable 4 verse song? Really, how do you relate to metal? You just like to hear the actual music part of it? DOES metal EVEN HAVE a point in their songs? I can't be assed to keep typing so answer what I've already written before I come back for the second round.

Might as well make a serious post, no particular order and really is what I'm feelin/listening to the most right now I DO get bored of songs after awhile so my list changes every few months: 1.Atmosphere-Smart Went Crazy 2.Atmosphere- Secret 3.Hurricane Chris feat E40, Angie Locc, The Game, Jadakiss, Lil Boosie,Baby-Aye Bay Bay Remix 4.Keith Murray- Can't Nobody Do It Better 5.Chamillionaire- Evening News 6.Kanye West- Stronger 7.Lil Wayne- Sky's The Limit 8.2Pac- Hit Em Up 9.Atmosphere- They Call It 10.Atmosphere- Multiples

most defiantly, I felt like the only one on these forums to listen to them :\

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