tomdavies90 Posted April 17, 2007 Share Posted April 17, 2007 Newest one Older one i also have the on in my avvy Rate out of 10, oh yeah and please DON'T (unusual eh) give C/C well you can if you want but i wont take it, it may seem like a small thing to fix for you but even the most minor thing would take like 20 mins EDIT: also check sig for latest animation Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_OnE Posted April 17, 2007 Share Posted April 17, 2007 3/10 - I won't tell you what to change, but I will say what to improve for next time. Your animations are too jumpy. There isn't enough transition between frames. It may seem hard to put so many frames in for smooth playing but thats what comes with graphics. You won't get good results without tons of effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fona623 Posted April 18, 2007 Share Posted April 18, 2007 The first one's text is a little hard to read. The second one is just disturbing...... :uhh: Thanks to GoldWorks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_god_of_soup Posted April 18, 2007 Share Posted April 18, 2007 quite frankly, i love the first one, and am seriously scheming how to steal your avy. i love the guy with dragon, howvever the arrows are a bit hard to read. The spelling and grammar of that email was that of an 11 year old palestinian goatboy who is speaking english for the first timeQuite simply, Facebook craps on Myspace. Then makes it eat the crap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted April 18, 2007 Author Share Posted April 18, 2007 well they are gonna be jerky..i do have other things to do with myself i can't spend 5 hours making a perfect animation, plus you gotta add in the fact that my scanner is not permanantly connected to the computer, the fact i have no proper animation tools, a pathetic program with which to animate no tablet, the list could go on for hours, i don't think they are that bad for a 3/10? have you seen most other animations around here, they are stick men, what are you comparing this to? a real animated cartoon? well of course they won't be as good, it's their job.... sorry about that....but i just had to get it off my chest new animation by the way, sorry if it's too jerky Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted April 18, 2007 Share Posted April 18, 2007 Haha, the last one's brilliant. Rendering could be better, but it suffices in display the wonderful joke. ;D The shifty eyes are a great touch. ;P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted April 18, 2007 Share Posted April 18, 2007 the "das ist gut" (thats good) in the first one is hard to read... Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miracleman58 Posted April 18, 2007 Share Posted April 18, 2007 sad nub \ all that exp u ould of got instead... :uhh: but it is good well the sig is not the 1st 1 :XD: 1593th to 99 Farming - July 08. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted April 18, 2007 Share Posted April 18, 2007 is the words in the 1st one (made by the 'arrows?') a diff language? cos i only speak english and a little bit of french / german and i got no idea what it says =\ My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted April 18, 2007 Author Share Posted April 18, 2007 is the words in the 1st one (made by the 'arrows?') a diff language? cos i only speak english and a little bit of french / german and i got no idea what it says =\ it's meant to say Da Ist Guut, which is the name of my new Rs character, was gonna make it sig sized but couldn't be bothered so i made the sig i got now which i prefer a lot more Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted April 20, 2007 Author Share Posted April 20, 2007 bumpus maximus Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted April 22, 2007 Author Share Posted April 22, 2007 ................. Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jepa69 Posted April 22, 2007 Share Posted April 22, 2007 omg nice aninimation! At the moment i can't really see the full form of the muffin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boomzoom Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 1) what program did you use? i dont think it was flash but im jw 2) how do you post images on forums?? please help :XD: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 2) how do you post images on forums?? please help upload an image to the web with a hosting site like imageshack. the image will now have an URL. use the following code to post images in forums: [img=INSERT IMAGE URL HERE] Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INLINER Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 If you cross your eyes, you can read the first one real well :D:lol:. They are kind of jumpy, the second isn't horrid. Personally, they could be better but they are fine as they are. Your sig is better than the rest, and best by far. :wink: 3,331st to 99 Fishing - 9-18-07 | 25,851st to 99 Cooking - 10-6-07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Made0f12une Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 They're all pretty decent. If I may have some suggestions try working on your charectors a little bit more. They're all very rought and have jagged edges which = bad An improvement on your recent one ("Hey Nice Hat") you should do more with the arrow/shooter and slow it down a bit. At first I was confused because all I was was a bow and arrow then it instantly jumped to the "somewhere else" part 8.5/10 average For Qaulity 9.5/10 For Animation/Smoothness 8.75/10 For Everything Overall ^^ClicK^^"I backed my car into a cop car the other dayWell he just drove off sometimes life's ok...Alright already we'll all float onAlright don't worry we'll all float on" - Isaac BrockDays Hunting:4 - Kingly Imps Caught:2Money Earned: 4.5-5m Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted May 1, 2007 Author Share Posted May 1, 2007 the characters on the new one only have rough egdes because they aren't pixelled, i drew them in pen so they are gonna look like that. new animation coming whenever i make it, attempting to animatate madeof12unes avvy Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
themaninblack Posted May 2, 2007 Share Posted May 2, 2007 in my opinoin 6/10 but your sig is the best one :thumbsup: http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2507 ... andne9.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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