WutangFlu Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 little practice fixing up portraits and still getting use to CS2, havent used it much since i got it. Cs2 - 1-1 1/2 hrs to finish i screwed up a little on the collar of the shirt, but whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaziek Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 wow your really great with photoshop! although this should be in the gallery.. and im not sure whether or not it breaks the RL pics rule. Still, great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted May 24, 2007 Author Share Posted May 24, 2007 whoops... mis-post.. if a mod sees this please move to the gallery, thank you... And if it does break the rules, mods also feel free to remove. : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercifull Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 The clothing changes and the lips look good but the eyes look noticably fake. You took an already emo looking girl and made a caricature emo girl out of her. Shame. Mercifull <3 Suzi "We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StrOwez Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 You made that girl hot =] A friend to all is a friend to none. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThoseTheBrokes Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 It all seems too strong. However, I really like the eyes, They seem sharp and clear. I wouldn't have changed the colour of the tee though, the original matches the eyes, Which is good. IMO.. My dA account..retired, as of the 1st January 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 You made that girl hot =] Imo, she was far more attractive before the manipulation. The girl has midly assymetrical features, which you've softened nicely. However, you've made her look like she's wearing a lot of makeup. She's wearing far too much in the original photo. You've also taken away much of her facial definition, especially her cheek bones, and you've made her eyes grossly emphasised. Her mascara (seems to be around every pair of female eyes nowadays :( ) makes her eyes almost like a caricature of real eyes even without the manipulation, the manipulation just makes them look artificial. She has beautiful eyes. (pity about the mascara) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 the black on the eyeliner is too overpowering. apart from that the pics been much improved :P remove some of the wrinkles :thumbsup: btw is that u LP? O.o My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 the black on the eyeliner is too overpowering. apart from that the pics been much improved :P remove some of the wrinkles :thumbsup: btw is that u LP? O.o lolololololololol. Eye liner looks really bad LP, other than that its nice. Maybe a bit too overdone but nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 btw is that u LP? O.o who knows, as long as (she?) doesnt say its (her?) own photo, (she?) isnt breaking the rule that states that you cant post photos of yourself. nice manip, like many people said, the eyes are a bit overkill, but its still nice. by the way shes really hot Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 the black on the eyeliner is too overpowering. apart from that the pics been much improved :P remove some of the wrinkles :thumbsup: btw is that u LP? O.o lolololololololol. Eye liner looks really bad LP, other than that its nice. Maybe a bit too overdone but nice. shes taking the pic herself so i thought maybe it was LP so (s)he could practise ;P My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gold_Tiger10 Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 Off-topic: Can I get her number? :lol: Jokes aside, very nice. I know nothing about photomanips, but thats pretty good here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 the black on the eyeliner is too overpowering. apart from that the pics been much improved :P remove some of the wrinkles :thumbsup: btw is that u LP? O.o lolololololololol. Eye liner looks really bad LP, other than that its nice. Maybe a bit too overdone but nice. shes taking the pic herself so i thought maybe it was LP so (s)he could practise ;P LP is a he dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted May 24, 2007 Author Share Posted May 24, 2007 i am a dude. so no.. thats not me. thanks for the tips also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroi_Ame Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 The eyes bug me so much, lol. Especially the pupil, which looks like random scribbles, and the eyelashes, which are too thick imo. The lips are good, do that for the eyes, the shine, I mean. do u wow?Cassiius|Level 70 Night Elf Preist|RunetotemSambora|Level 37 Tauren Shaman|BurningLegion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted May 24, 2007 Author Share Posted May 24, 2007 The eyes bug me so much, lol. Especially the pupil, which looks like random scribbles, and the eyelashes, which are too thick imo. The lips are good, do that for the eyes, the shine, I mean. Yes, this was the first time ive really tried retouching a portrait. I had seen a tutorial on Deviantart about retouching eyes so they stand out more and are sharp. I tried doing it without looking at the tutorial and thought they turned out ok, but they can be better, maybe soften them up more. As for the eye lashes I wanted them there to draw attention to the eyes, but like some of you said I may have over done them a little bit. I was using a 90% opac brush when doing them, so next time ill bring the opac. down so they are softer but still draw attention As for the softening of the facial feature thats a common thing people do especially in magazines etc. I wanted to lighten up her skin to, as she looked a little sun burned and i didnt like that very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted May 25, 2007 Share Posted May 25, 2007 should have done a gradient map for the eyes rather than scribbling away at em. My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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