My best pixel yet gimme tips on how to improve and any c&c..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

B.U.M.P

i'd put more action in it, it seems like only a bg

 

 

 

also, make the water look more active, it looks like it was just turned on, make it go all the way down

its boring...

its boring...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats what i was going to say.......... its very boring there needs to be a focus point and there just is not one....

Its a relaxing sig :D, but ya its a bit inactive :( .. If you want it to be just a background Id suggest using a deeper understanding of texture, colouring and shade so theres more to it (the sky looks like just one block colour).. Or (I dont know if this was just lazy colouring) you seemed to have chosen very cartoony bold colours so what I recon is that you might want to make more of a cartoony theme, create an original style of character for your sigs like axe does (you can tell its his sig cus of the style)..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dont let ppl get ya down, if theres something majorly wrong with your sig ppl tend just to ignore it or say its rubish.. But theres only really a lack of experience here, im sure you'll get better so just keep in mind what area's you need to improve on.. :wink: ..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goodluck with the next sig, that is if you are doing one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Terley

Never put sun in the corner.

 

 

 

And one colour sky is a no no.

Never put sun in the corner.

 

 

 

And one colour sky is a no no.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

really? since when? :|

This looks like a preschooler picture

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sun in corner

 

 

 

Puffy cloud

 

 

 

Tree trunk maasivly out of proportion to the amount of leaves

 

 

 

Water fountain looks like a solit [bleep]ey thing and not water spurts

 

 

 

The bench is to a different perspective to the fountain.

 

 

 

Theres no proper horizon. Solid Sky

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fix all those for a start.