Iglw Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 Heya, it's been a while since I came here. Working on something new. What I have so far: The hands, swords, and bottom half of the armour aren't done. (And I got really lazy with his right arm cuz I didn't know how to do it. I'll probably redraw it so it's more consistent with his left arm.) Just hoping to get some CCing in before I continue. I think his legs might be too short... or something. Thanks a bunchas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 It looks pretty nice so far, definitely fix up his right arm. Is he going to be holding something? Also for the dragon I would say make the eye a bit smaller. It looks a bit to anime-ish atm. Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 Looks like really good linework to me, just fix up hi right arm. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hittori Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 well i always feel guilty criticizing art since i can't draw worth fudgemuffin, but if you insist, the guy's boots could use some work, and it looks like there are some random blue scribbles near his knee. other than that looks good must.... play.... runescape.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 Very nice linework. Looking really good so far. I do agree with the boots though. They definitely need some work, actually, I think all his leg does. The dragon lokos good, for lack of detail. So far, so good. Can't wait to see the final product. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 The dragon's head is a bit big, and the right arm is at a rather odd angle... Where exactly is your horizon line...? Oh, and generally there's a flap of skin connecting the first part of the arm(where it's connected to the belly) to the second(where it's connected to the leg) Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dangeresque Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 It sucks. Gtfo. Jk Iggy . Looks nice, keep it up ^_^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted October 28, 2008 Share Posted October 28, 2008 Guys, stop commenting on the legs/boots... he stated that he hasn't finished drawing those.... But yeah, fix his right arm, can't get lazy when you've got something good like this going. ;) 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted October 28, 2008 Share Posted October 28, 2008 I agree with most of what has been said, and I also think the dragons legs are quite skinny. Pretty good overall though. Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iglw Posted October 28, 2008 Author Share Posted October 28, 2008 Guys, stop commenting on the legs/boots... he stated that he hasn't finished drawing those.... But yeah, fix his right arm, can't get lazy when you've got something good like this going. ;) I was wondering if anyone was going to say that :lol: Thanks for all the suggestions. Gr, I'll have to wait until I have more free time to work on it :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iglw Posted November 10, 2008 Author Share Posted November 10, 2008 I had some time so I worked on it a little bit. The colours are only for testing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selbbub Posted November 10, 2008 Share Posted November 10, 2008 Gears of War :D Cabbage owns, 'nuff said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dangeresque Posted November 10, 2008 Share Posted November 10, 2008 I lurve the colors igster! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted November 10, 2008 Share Posted November 10, 2008 Pretty good so far, I do think there is a lot that can be improved on with the dragon, try think of it's whole structure even behind the wings. Also it's neck seems twisted to the right uncomfortably. With the guy you seem to be doing alright, only crits atm i'd say is that he doesn't seem grounded enough. Feet maybe too small. Well just a quick adjustment to show what I mean, hope it helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badphooeybad Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 I love the Lancer lol, Don't know how that really fits in with the dragon.. but it looks amazing so far. : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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