for mdogg's competiton, hopefully he likes it.. but with some crits maybe it'll be betta..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

with glow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

without glow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

any crits welcome.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ter

Very nice. I think that you've done the skin maybe a bit too soft, ie the armour has a heavy outline but then the skin has none and it makes it a bit hard to distinguish the skin. Also the green highlighted arrow on the left diverts too much attention from the centre piece (the whip guy and barrow ghost).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But those are very minor things, best of luck in the comp.

Good stuff mate, good effect on the transparent brotha...ya know.....dawg.....fo shizzle......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

 

 

 

:lol:

This one seems to be below the quality of some of the ones you've made recently, some of the characters in it looks a bit awkward, mostly the archer and the pink fella :P. I like the one with the glow more, makes it look like a skylight.

the archer's pose looks bad.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

other than that its good

thats cool terley very nice im not a member so whats that thing in the pink it looks very well shaded

Wow is all i have to say. Once again u have left us all speachless 8)

Great composition and atmosphere. Unfortunately, the lighting and cast shadows isn't correct and a lot of the linework seems sloppy. The stroking is too light IMO, and isn't giving enough emphasis on the characters. And it looks like you're trying to cram too much detail into such small spaces - like the face of the man on the bottom.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I love the rich textures on the floor and walls, simple but very effective.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep it up, hope to see more from you. :)

I love it... but I think it could use more contrast in the room itself.... but I really like all your work, keep it up. :)

Wow man, i love it. Its really good, but man..I like your texture, the way you do thingss. Its so realistic, kind of like godslayers. Although yours are alot better (no offense GS my first few sigs were from you..and they owned)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its so hard to make a pixel, with that much detail. I have got to admit, you are one of the best sig makes on tip it (pixelers). Your style differs, from what i said before because you like more realistic i can tell.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For example, MxM. His isnt cartoonish, but its not realistic. The charachters are still big, with that look on there faces. Yours, well all i can think of is that its realistic.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I really like the sig, nice job. That must have taken forever, but you might want to add a few other monsters in there like the bloodworms and stuff, because it looks a little empty so far.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know im not really known on media board, but i still check this place out alot. So dont take me wrong, your an awesome pixeler. Keep it up man. 8)

nice.......i like it more than the one that won on the comp..........its truly a loss......but if u giving it away agian like the other 2 u did i got first debs..... :D ............really nicely done terley

i think its preety good. the only problem i see in it is there doesnt seem to be a main character. there are many different people in the sig. yet they are all sort of equal in size. the main guy should stand and be the main attention graber of the sig. this sig is set up giving attention to the entire sig equaly, not giving u a chance to notice any one more greatly then another. basicly the only reason you lost the comp. other then that it is very very good.

good stuff, i really like how your doing those atmospheres now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well my advise is to remove the "special" and shorten the guy with the big axe's arms.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and that mage out front doesnt really fit in perspective.

I want it! :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's good, but as it has been said, there's needs to be a main focus on the middle char. the transparency is great. But the archer needs a better postition. Overall it's a great sig. :wink:

ill sort things out in the sig

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thx for the advice :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw wen its finished im auctioning it off starting bid will be 200k

Just to reiterate what most have already pointed out, the arrow special just draws attention away from the fight in the center, the mage guy look like someone chew him up and then spit him out :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't know why some say there is no focus though, I am looking at the 'glow' sig right now and the fight in the middle stands out quite a bit and the colouring of the wall in the background gives it a feeling of gradual darkening as it reaches the edges so focusing again on the fight in the middle.

....OMG......amazing!100/1 :D

Awsome sig, your combination of shading and texture worked out really nicely on this one. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just the ranger, he's in an odd pose for shooting an arrow.

Terley, you are amazing :P

 

 

 

You have improved greatly, that sig is really perfect, the lights, the shading, the linework. Everything.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Congrats :)

yeah, the arrow special does draw attention, and just emphasizes that he is shooting from the hip...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

great work on the back wall especially, and keep the glow.