This one's for Shad's competition.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Some constructive crit would be nice, I'm always looking to improve (unless the improvement takes too long :lol: ).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First Version:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Second Version

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cheers

Nice as I said already. Some more shading on the rune armor would be nice. The wooden cross on the kite would be nice too. Maybe make the sign a different color so it will stand out more.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You rock though, plus I'm a drummer also, so that's awesome.

sky looks to pleasant for the wilderness. darken it up some, make it look sinister :twisted:

the skull on the necklace looks pretty awesome. He looks a bit chubbly, other then that, it's pretty good. Just work on some bits here and there that have been pointed out, and you'll own :wink:

your sigs havent been as good since you returned i think, maybe a little rusty? one you made for me in my opinion kicks [wagon] though

Nice sig, doesn't look like it is in wilderness though. Major crit is that kite, I just don't think it is any good..no offence.

Your other sigs have been much better... theres no muscle tone on the ranger, hes just a cylinder. And the bg had no detail, it looks very empty. And more detail on the runer and mage would be nice.

Your other sigs have been much better... theres no muscle tone on the ranger, hes just a cylinder. And the bg had no detail, it looks very empty. And more detail on the runer and mage would be nice.

Thanks for that, yeah I couldn't really see how I could get muscle tone to come through armour. Could you elaborate with the detail in the background / 2nd characters? Some ideas?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks

very nice!

Thanks for that, yeah I couldn't really see how I could get muscle tone to come through armour.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

adjust the shape and depth.

 

 

 

simply change of outlines helps allot aswell.

wow man... thats amazing!! The guy in the rune plate is kinda, mmm, touch and go if u know what i mean, maybe trim it or add more shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but apart from that its one of if not the best sig ive EVER SEEN.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

compliments to the chef :lol:

The ranger seems a bit portly for his class. Also, his armour doesn't really look like leather, the bow could be a little bit thicker, and both the hands need some work. Try extending the thumb of the hand holding the bow to be above the index finger, and a bowstring is usually pulled back with just the index and middle finger, with the arrow wedged between them. Finally, the warrior could use a little more detail and the sky doesn't really fit the the wilderness...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than that, it's a nice sig. I really like the ranger's hair, he reminds me of Valygar (sp), a ranger from Baldur's Gate II. The linework and shading are also very clean.

I've updated the sig, thanks very much for the crit guys, I have adjusted accordingly. I think it looks much better. 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I remember Valygar, wasn't he the traitor? Or was that one of the others... :? I loved that series, as well as Icewindale I and II and Neverwinter Nights. :)

looks really nice

 

 

 

kites aren't triangular though, they sort of have a flat top (which u've done) then go straight down, then come in at the bottom, know what i mean? but other wise its great

looks really nice

 

 

 

kites aren't triangular though, they sort of have a flat top (which u've done) then go straight down, then come in at the bottom, know what i mean? but other wise its great

Oh I see it in your sig. Uhhh... :(

Wow, much more improvement. GOOD JOB! :D