Veiva Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 /me yawns Please lock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mister_moocky Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 I mean this in as a constructive manner as possible, it looks like junk. If this this a a practise thing, good, but if you consider this art (which, assuming you know the rules here, you should to be posting it) it's time for some tough love. quit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 I mean this in as a constructive manner as possible, it looks like junk. If this this a a practise thing, good, but if you consider this art (which, assuming you know the rules here, you should to be posting it) it's time for some tough love. Agreed, but I am going to give the benefit of the doubt and assume that he was just showing us his rending program. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veiva Posted September 9, 2009 Author Share Posted September 9, 2009 I mean this in as a constructive manner as possible, it looks like junk. If this this a a practise thing, good, but if you consider this art (which, assuming you know the rules here, you should to be posting it) it's time for some tough love. Quite right. It's junk. I agree... Wait no! This isn't insult land! It's not junk. That's not constructive; there's nothing constructive about it. Frankly, I'm tired of people like you who have nothing constructive to say, but put their comments under the facade of "constructive criticism." Spot the troll!: Hey, it could do with some work. The is not looking right..perhaps you could work on it? It sucks, frankly, and I have nothing else to say. Your comment falls under #2. It seems every time I post something, another person who is in dire need of an ego trip decides to troll my thread; happened with all my vectors I've posted, everything. What do you particular, interesting people (aimed at people like you who offer no proper criticism, and merely mock others) intend on accomplishing? I mean this in as a constructive manner as possible, it looks like junk. If this this a a practise thing, good, but if you consider this art (which, assuming you know the rules here, you should to be posting it) it's time for some tough love. Agreed, but I am going to give the benefit of the doubt and assume that he was just showing us his rending program. Oh and look! It's someone else joining the fray of no constructive criticism. Let me ask you two: what's wrong with it, besides the "fact" it looks oh-so much like junk? Do you know what I'm basing this off of? What have you eaten today? Please, learn to offer constructive criticism instead of being bent on being pretentious...people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 Please keep the flaming to a minimum. I do, however have something constructive to say. I think the dragon does actually look pretty cool, i like the cartoony style of it. I do think though, that it needs to be much more detailed, even though it would be in a cartoon cel-shaded style. That could do with work, adding detail via textures is always a good thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veiva Posted September 9, 2009 Author Share Posted September 9, 2009 Please keep the flaming to a minimum. I do, however have something constructive to say. I think the dragon does actually look pretty cool, i like the cartoony style of it. I do think though, that it needs to be much more detailed, even though it would be in a cartoon cel-shaded style. That could do with work, adding detail via textures is always a good thing. Thank you! I'll see what I can do about the detail; shouldn't be too difficult. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 Are you gonna use that as a base for a proper one or something? Also, learn to take C&C please.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 Are you gonna use that as a base for a proper one or something? Also, learn to take C&C please.. Read the above post, all your questions answered and i dont quite agree with you on the statement, hes right, theres too much trolling in here. [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veiva Posted September 9, 2009 Author Share Posted September 9, 2009 I made my rendering program apply two passes of a basic Perlin noise to the texture and this is what I got: I think it looks better than before, but I don't know what it is missing... Anyone have any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 I made my rendering program apply two passes of a basic Perlin noise to the texture and this is what I got: I think it looks better than before, but I don't know what it is missing... Anyone have any ideas? Eyes horns mouth nose claws, start with that [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mil Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 Heh, these trolls don't seem to understand what you're actually doing. I'd say you've made a great start, especially for a program that you've written yourself. Just a thing for the actual dragon, I think the head is a bit too big! ;) It'd be great if you do a bit more polygons (I don't know too much about 3d design), but if you've got to this stage, may as well go for it and make a pretty cool dragon :P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 So worth PMing Nadril to come post.... You arn't being very smart.... Coming into the gallery... then posting... and being all stuck-up, not a good combo. No one here is going to kiss up to you and say that is good... IMO. (Correct me if I am wrong) MrShiny was just to make you shut up from flaming... You want crit here it is. 1. This took what, a grand total of 3 minutes? I mean really, what effort is shown in it. 2. The texture, all it is, is a cloud filter overlaying the model. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 I think the texture could do with some work and that other people need to stop being stuck up and giving crap 'advice'. I'm not sure, but in my limited experience with 3d modeling programs you can map textures to the object and I think that would look better than the blanket cloud filter. If it's actually mapped to individual surfaces, you can't tell because of the sort of texture the cloud is, so I would find a more scale-y texture and put it only on the body if possible. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veiva Posted September 9, 2009 Author Share Posted September 9, 2009 So worth PMing Nadril to come post.... You arn't being very smart.... Coming into the gallery... then posting... and being all stuck-up, not a good combo. No one here is going to kiss up to you and say that is good... IMO. (Correct me if I am wrong) MrShiny was just to make you shut up from flaming... You want crit here it is. 1. This took what, a grand total of 3 minutes? I mean really, what effort is shown in it. 2. The texture, all it is, is a cloud filter overlaying the model. Must I go through this dance again? I do not except anyone to come here and say it's awesome, it's the best. I do expect people to show respect, something that many people here apparently seem to lack. Constructive criticism is not saying something is junk--that's just trolling. The rendering program took a day to write. The model took a few hours (3 to 5). There is no cloud filter; no need to be stupid, it's Perlin noise that is applied to a texture in two passes. That's far different than "a cloud texture." It's generated using a program and its output can be changed with a few variables; radious, randomness, etc, etc. If anyone is being "stuck up," it's you and your troll buds. You think because you're the few who use this forum regularly, that most people who do not show utter perfection that some deity would be pleased with are not worthy of posting, and therefore, are flamed. I am not trolling nor insulting anyone here. I didn't at all. I am merely stating why you, and others, are not the magnus opus of this forum. People who are, or better put, were, did not flame me. No. All that are left are a select few who are bent on being pretentious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 None of these posts are trolling. Trolling means someone presenting an incorrect statement as fact in order to gain a response from the victim. Nobodies pretending it sucks for kicks, it just does. Read more tutorials as I have limited knowledge of rendering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 Internet Forum Lesson Forty-Two: That guy who posts his crappy 5 minute art and gets pissy when people tell him it isn't good. Your work is bad, no amount of your arguing will change that. I suggest you stop trying to defend yourself and actually read what people are telling you. I know what you're thinking as you just read that last sentence, and yes people have just told you it's bad and nothing else. If you call yourself an artist, or think you know anything about design, which you probably do, you will be able to look at it yourself and tell yourself what's bad about it. Improve it by your own view and decisions. Protip: A bad artist blames everyone else for their poor work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainy_Day Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 Locked upon request. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)RIP Michaelangelopolous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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