Pencil Drawing UPDATED

[Sy_Accursed]

Well as some may know I have done some wirting previously so I got bored and finally decided to start doing illustrations of the lead characters.

 

 

 

They kind of similar to rs due to fantasy (this one coudle asily be dragon armour)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But anywhere here is my picture for

 

 

 

'Sonnet' the fire mage

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok so i denied it at first, But I have shrunk her breasts, enlarged her left hand and feet/ankles gave her a chin and tried (not very successfully)to fix the eye:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

comments and feedback welcomed

[MASTINO]

looks cool :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

make some rs cheacters and sell 4 some mills :wink:

[Zonorhc]

You really need to work on proportions. And chins. Everyone you draw, pixel or otherwise, seems to have a receeding chin. Also, her eye looks like it's actually her left eye. The lower line on it shouldn't be such a neutral curve. There's something wrong with the legs, but I can't quite put my finger on it. The feet are too small.

[Sy_Accursed]

thansk for the input

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but as previous times I don't uite get what u mean by the chin thing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The proportions do look weird in this one but they are correct, I made sure of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the ffet may look small, but she is a woman they generally have small ffet plus it is quite bukly armour over a not so bulky woman.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its hard to explain, but I know what I mean as I made the character up, it might make more sense once I draw her sister from the books as they r near identical other than outfits.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the eye, i don't see what you see, the way it is looking and the allignment of it with the other facial features makes it look correct to me. I can see your point thouhgt if the face wasn't so clearly turned for that to be her right eye

[teenageloser33]

thansk for the input

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but as previous times I don't uite get what u mean by the chin thing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The proportions do look weird in this one but they are correct, I made sure of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the ffet may look small, but she is a woman they generally have small ffet plus it is quite bukly armour over a not so bulky woman.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its hard to explain, but I know what I mean as I made the character up, it might make more sense once I draw her sister from the books as they r near identical other than outfits.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the eye, i don't see what you see, the way it is looking and the allignment of it with the other facial features makes it look correct to me. I can see your point thouhgt if the face wasn't so clearly turned for that to be her right eye

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok if those proportions are correct then all the women on earth need to be reconfigured and have the portions made right. Those proportions are horribly done. And regardless if she's a woman, her feet are way to small. She has no chin really. The armour is way to bulky and makes her look like she has like 48 QQQ breasts, need to trim it down. Her neck is to long, Left hand is way to small.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once again your proportions are all wrong and don't try and tell anyone there not. You'll make Godslayer have a caniption saying something like that. Also did she get hit in the face with a large metal ball or something to make her eye be skewed to the side like that. Generally a persons eye isn't glancing at her ear.

[The_Jeppoz]

 

thansk for the input

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but as previous times I don't uite get what u mean by the chin thing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The proportions do look weird in this one but they are correct, I made sure of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the ffet may look small, but she is a woman they generally have small ffet plus it is quite bukly armour over a not so bulky woman.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its hard to explain, but I know what I mean as I made the character up, it might make more sense once I draw her sister from the books as they r near identical other than outfits.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the eye, i don't see what you see, the way it is looking and the allignment of it with the other facial features makes it look correct to me. I can see your point thouhgt if the face wasn't so clearly turned for that to be her right eye

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok if those proportions are correct then all the women on earth need to be reconfigured and have the portions made right. Those proportions are horribly done. And regardless if she's a woman, her feet are way to small. She has no chin really. The armour is way to bulky and makes her look like she has like 48 QQQ breasts, need to trim it down. Her neck is to long, Left hand is way to small.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once again your proportions are all wrong and don't try and tell anyone there not. You'll make Godslayer have a caniption saying something like that. Also did she get hit in the face with a large metal ball or something to make her eye be skewed to the side like that. Generally a persons eye isn't glancing at her ear.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His CCs leave the same soft and tender feeling you get when you use a hedgehog as toilet paper, yet he's right. Definely. Totaly.

[neo_bahumat]

 

 

thansk for the input

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but as previous times I don't uite get what u mean by the chin thing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The proportions do look weird in this one but they are correct, I made sure of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the ffet may look small, but she is a woman they generally have small ffet plus it is quite bukly armour over a not so bulky woman.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its hard to explain, but I know what I mean as I made the character up, it might make more sense once I draw her sister from the books as they r near identical other than outfits.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the eye, i don't see what you see, the way it is looking and the allignment of it with the other facial features makes it look correct to me. I can see your point thouhgt if the face wasn't so clearly turned for that to be her right eye

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok if those proportions are correct then all the women on earth need to be reconfigured and have the portions made right. Those proportions are horribly done. And regardless if she's a woman, her feet are way to small. She has no chin really. The armour is way to bulky and makes her look like she has like 48 QQQ breasts, need to trim it down. Her neck is to long, Left hand is way to small.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once again your proportions are all wrong and don't try and tell anyone there not. You'll make Godslayer have a caniption saying something like that. Also did she get hit in the face with a large metal ball or something to make her eye be skewed to the side like that. Generally a persons eye isn't glancing at her ear.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His CCs leave the same soft and tender feeling you get when you use a hedgehog as toilet paper, yet he's right. Definely. Totaly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lmao, dont beat around the bush will you dude? though as mentioned, i'm sorry to say it but hes totally right, also those size feet and those breats with all the heavy armour? she'd fall over more times than a wasted bambi on ice dude

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

try to fix the points mentioned, and it could look smart though m8

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-=[ Gaz ] =-

[Despaxes]

bruh.... your last two were great.. this one os well crap...

 

 

 

*chin(she needs one)

 

 

 

*breast(mishapen and on the side of her body)

 

 

 

*shoulder(seems like it comes from no where)

 

 

 

*eye(picasso anyone?)

 

 

 

*waist(after her wasit her crotch area bluges forward....very odd)

 

 

 

*ankles(too small)

 

 

 

*feet(oddly porportioned and mishapen)

[Sy_Accursed]

To be blunt I really can't be bothered to edit this picture that much but I will give a go at the breasts and feet since they are easy bits to alter

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the eye it doesn't look like that on the paper, it has a black centre and a darkish bit around it for the coloured area so that is looking outwards, but the scanner has made that all 1 colour. Plus I don;t have a small enouhg rubber to just remove the eye to alter shading further to make it come throuhg on the scanner, but you gotta trust me on this one that it is two toned on paper. If scanner does that again I'll try slight pixel alterations to make it show up

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the person who said the breasts were on the side of the body what on earth do u mean? the breast are coming out of the right hand side of the picture because she is sideways on. If I mis-understood your meaning you'll have to explain it better

[Sy_Accursed]

Ok so I alatered all the points that I could do will scan it in again in a few minutes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Must remember to post others here before I do the major shading etc so tht I can edit out flaws first

[arizark]

add more facial detail and it will be great

[teenageloser33]

Is there ever a point in commenting on your work? All you do is let it bounce off you. Such a waste of time.

[Sy_Accursed]

Is there ever a point in commenting on your work? All you do is let it bounce off you. Such a waste of time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

there is a point. I alwasy end up doing the same (even thouhg I know it is dumb and I reall shouldn't)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I deny the problems, then I look at pic overnight etc accept some of the problems and say I'll sort em

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

then I sort them problems and most of the other ones then repost it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Seriously know I shouldn;t do it, but I just do now I muts go turn my scanner on

[Sy_Accursed]

Updated

[GonAndGary]

Too bad you're attitude wasn't as good as your pencil skills.

[Timo]

Yup, one of the most important skills that you need to have is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Take Critism.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's very important.

[Sy_Accursed]

I am getting better at excepting the cirtisms

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I mean I used to juts ignore them, then I used to do them without word. Atleast I am admitting I am wrong now. but still not really right attitude to have, weird how I am with it at school etc juts seems to be tip.it froums that produce these results

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ah well will stop it....eventually

[Quer_Skulll]

try something more feminine next time

[Sy_Accursed]

I have got more femine females to draw in the 14 pictures, just the fire mage that got kinda 'cross gender' outfit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just matter of pikcing whihc do next (i know I am doing boy girl since i got 7 of each) Should hopefully finihs the ice mage in next couple of days

[apinagez]

Commenting your work is useless...

 

 

 

All you do is defend it, you take no critics.

 

 

 

Remeber when I was telling you not to make pixels in wich chars doesn't look like a flat paper leaf?

 

 

 

That draw has no porportions and has only 2 dimensions, you have a big problem with their position as well, you put them in the draw in a way only if you were a great drawer you'd manage to make them more realistic (3d if you will).