My first pixel sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I need a rating.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: I am NOT a follower Zamorak. This was a request.-____-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The new one.

 

 

 

-I remade the Rune Scimitar. Tilt is thicker, and the blade is smaller. I also removed the big curl.

 

 

 

-I tried to redo the chin.

 

 

 

-Recoloured some parts. More dark, less shiny.

 

 

 

-Placed the text at another point, and changed the font.

 

 

 

Hope this is better:

 

 

 

9/10 for a first, only thing that throws me off is the text

What's wrong with the next? How to improve it?

Yeah, 9/10 because of the text... Try a different font, search around on http://www.dafont.com :)

Thanks, what about this?

 

 

 

wow thts gd i like the way u made it shine on the scimmy :lol: 8)

I've got a few crits for it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The hilt of the scimitar is far too thin. It'd snap. Make it thicker, so it's not like he's just holding apiece of string.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Scimitar blade is too thick. It should be thinner so you can see the curve more. Don't add the crescent at the point of the blade, because that really isn't needed and makes the whole thing look like a bent rectangular piece of metal.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The main person has no chin, or at least a very weak one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Armour doesn't look like plate mail at all, just a glorified metal set of clothing. Divide it into plate sections and you'll have plate mail.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Clouds need a bit of work on shading.

I've got a few crits for it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The hilt of the scimitar is far too thin. It'd snap. Make it thicker, so it's not like he's just holding apiece of string.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Scimitar blade is too thick. It should be thinner so you can see the curve more. Don't add the crescent at the point of the blade, because that really isn't needed and makes the whole thing look like a bent rectangular piece of metal.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The main person has no chin, or at least a very weak one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Armour doesn't look like plate mail at all, just a glorified metal set of clothing. Divide it into plate sections and you'll have plate mail.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Clouds need a bit of work on shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-True, I'll make it thicker next time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Yup, will make it thinner next time. The curve was meant to make it look cooler. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-My weak point. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- It looks like that in RuneScape. If I would divide in plate sections people probably wouldn't recognize the armour anymore.

 

 

 

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-Hm...I thought it would be better not to make them too shaded.

how long did it take you to make this?

Very nice! 9.5/10 MisterX has some competion :wink:

how long did it take you to make this?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hm...Lemme think...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think 3,5 - 4 hours. :roll:

very nice. 9.5/10 if u fix those crits that zonor said, as well as maybe change the color to be a bit darker to stand out cause its a bit hard on the eyes.

That can't be your first pixel sig...looks way too good. I love the shading and i think you should just make the text a good solid text. It only took u 3-4hours too?????? R u using a robot? lol. 9/10.

am I missing something here, cos' I can't seem to find the sig... :? :?:

tis a bit big for this forum but yeah its a good first pixel image, but everything seems a bit too shiney.. Like the infamous laminator has been on a rampage or something.. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10 anyways, good work.

actually nowi think about it, if u put your text in the right side so it stands out more against the sky blue. maybe that might work.

woot 10/10

 

 

 

millenin ownz

it's really really really nice for a first time work. nice 1 :D

10/10 i would buy for 750k...just dont need

very cool style 10/10 io dunno what u guys talkin about!

Thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That can't be your first pixel sig...looks way too good. I love the shading and i think you should just make the text a good solid text. It only took u 3-4hours too?????? R u using a robot? lol. 9/10.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I've more experience in MS Paint. It's just that this is my first time I tried to make pixel sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tis a bit big for this forum but yeah its a good first pixel image, but everything seems a bit too shiney.. Like the infamous laminator has been on a rampage or something.. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10 anyways, good work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was for someone on RuneHQ.

very nice :) specialy for your first one

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

make the changes that have been suggested and it will be complete :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10 for now

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

10/10 when you make changes

Thanks. I'll change it and make it better. :D

Really amazing work for a first... you've recieved good criticism. Run with it and make it look even better. I never rate images by number, but this would be high up on the scale.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You've got some serious pixellating potential.

i like it, i like it a lot. especially for a first. i personally cant do pixel sigs at all :cry: the body looks sort of odd, i dont know why. and as people stated before, the handle is extremely thin. i like the detail a lot though.