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So this is one of the characters for my "planned" webcomic. Note: She has no arms, she moves the sleeves via telekinesis. OVERPOWERED PLOT DEVICE GO

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D'you guys think I could get away with making a webcomic as of now, or do I need to improve my art skills some more before actually starting?

It's Greta! The Dildo armed mage!

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So this is one of the characters for my "planned" webcomic. Note: She has no arms, she moves the sleeves via telekinesis. OVERPOWERED PLOT DEVICE GO

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D'you guys think I could get away with making a webcomic as of now, or do I need to improve my art skills some more before actually starting?

It's Greta! The Dildo armed mage!

 

Oh god, sorry Stork, but this made me laugh.

 

Anywho if you're making a webcomic, good luck, I'd gladly help with getting more viewers.

It's a REALLY big shaft.

I didn't catch fire, I used the can of hairspray as a flamethrower and pointed it at my arm.

how are you going to ignore my posts when I'm offering to let you live as my vassal in two weeks time?

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To be honest, you wouldn't be successful with that drawing style, you need to sharpen it up a little, get rid of the grainy, bold lines and not soften the shading. Also, those eyes are way too big.

 

 

I say the art's fairly good at the moment, but it needs a little bit of improvement. With a little practice you could probably get to Parallel Dementia levels, which aren't particularly impressive but convey the atmosphere of the story very well.

 

 

I think that the faces need a bit of work, mainly the mouths, because I can't usually tell if they are smilling or frowning or whatnot.

 

Other than that, if you think that you can portray all of the scenes with flair and emotion, then you are ready. :)

 

 

Alright, I'll take that as "improve moar." And now I know what to improve on, thanks guys.

 

Mather - I'm not sure what "not soften the shading" means - explain that a bit more? Also, any tips on making the lines bolder without just running over all of 'em with a paintbrush/pencil tool?

Nex - Moar practice. Got it.

Tech - Okay, more expressive faces. I can do that.

Dusty - That better have been a reference to something vague that I don't know about. Otherwise, mind explaining why you saw the picture as that?

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Dusty - That better have been a reference to something vague that I don't know about. Otherwise, mind explaining why you saw the picture as that?

Because she has an arm shaped like a dildo. A gigantic blue dildo.

...Note to self: work on magic effects. Can't have any more "LOL DILDO" jokes, now can we?

 

And okay, Mather.

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Hey Trip. Welcome to the insanity. What makes you brave these dangerous seas, surely it can't be just a friendly call?

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Youtube account: Earthgragonsage; currently uploading not an effing thing.

[hide=Memorable Crossroads Quotes.]

Reigan: NO MOOSE CAN SAVE US NOW; ...Had that been taken out of context, it would have been comical... Right now, it's terrifying.

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A combination of boredom and curiosity :P

I KNEW IT! YOU'RE NOT REALLY AN ARTIST, YOU JUST HAVE A SWEATSHOP FULL OF PEOPLE RUNNING PHOTOSHO- errr, this really has nothing at all to do with that post, does it? My bad.

OHMYGOD WHO TOLD YOU??????

 

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No Stork, it doesn't.. Hmm. Why not join one of our games, miss Trip?

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Youtube account: Earthgragonsage; currently uploading not an effing thing.

[hide=Memorable Crossroads Quotes.]

Reigan: NO MOOSE CAN SAVE US NOW; ...Had that been taken out of context, it would have been comical... Right now, it's terrifying.

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Tripsis visiting the Tavern?! And... DUSTY MAKING JOKES OF A DISTURBING NATU- oh wait that's normal.

10:53 PM - retech9691: I feel the need
10:53 PM - retech9691: To include many chasms in my story arc
10:53 PM - Resistance: You mean plotholes?

 

Remember, Remember, the 4th of November

RIP Dawngate ;-;

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Very normal. In fact, if you had finished that sentence, then I would have had to hit you with one of my binders. You would be buried in my handwriting. BURIED!.. Although probably not alive, for long.

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Youtube account: Earthgragonsage; currently uploading not an effing thing.

[hide=Memorable Crossroads Quotes.]

Reigan: NO MOOSE CAN SAVE US NOW; ...Had that been taken out of context, it would have been comical... Right now, it's terrifying.

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Stork, I just noticed, how long have you had that exact signature? It might explain the insults from /FG/.

10:53 PM - retech9691: I feel the need
10:53 PM - retech9691: To include many chasms in my story arc
10:53 PM - Resistance: You mean plotholes?

 

Remember, Remember, the 4th of November

RIP Dawngate ;-;

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The emergency exits are located here

Motions to the top right hand corner of the screen on Windows

Here

Motions to the top left hand corner of the screen on Macs

and here

Motions to the power button

 

In the likely event of insanity sucking your computer in on itself, please keep hands and legs inside the dysfunction at all times, and no flash photography if you would be so kind.

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Well I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.

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I need to find some more funny quotes for my signature... Either that, or become original. ... ... Nah. Too much work.

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Youtube account: Earthgragonsage; currently uploading not an effing thing.

[hide=Memorable Crossroads Quotes.]

Reigan: NO MOOSE CAN SAVE US NOW; ...Had that been taken out of context, it would have been comical... Right now, it's terrifying.

[/hide]

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Stork, I just noticed, how long have you had that exact signature? It might explain the insults from /FG/.

Which bit exactly would they use for insults? Also, you made the mistake of taking anything said in /FG/ seriously. AGAIN.

 

But I've had this sig for a while.

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Your signature is kinda... really really not amusing in the least. Go with actual quotes or forget about it, even the ones that were funny really aren't anymore.

 

I'll admit that I have the same sort of issue... I should take care of that.

 

EDIT: That was directed at Earth. Stork, the first word is a euphemism for what they've been calling you.

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10:53 PM - retech9691: I feel the need
10:53 PM - retech9691: To include many chasms in my story arc
10:53 PM - Resistance: You mean plotholes?

 

Remember, Remember, the 4th of November

RIP Dawngate ;-;

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Fine, but i'm leaving the cellar one. I likes it.

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Youtube account: Earthgragonsage; currently uploading not an effing thing.

[hide=Memorable Crossroads Quotes.]

Reigan: NO MOOSE CAN SAVE US NOW; ...Had that been taken out of context, it would have been comical... Right now, it's terrifying.

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