I like how it turned out, actually. Whee.

 

 

 

Someone said I should start selling 'em, but I'm not too sure yet. There're some really good artists on here from what I've seen, I've got a bit too much competition to matter much, lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Remember kids, ripping is BAD. You steala my art, I breaka your neck.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I can't seem to shade the horns right, arr. And the water... argh, the water keeps bothering me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Constructive criticism and opinions are nice. :S

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Should I make more? :P

I really really like this. I think the water looks just fine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The only thing I'm really having a problem with is the dragon's body. It's not very defined.

Good water is hard to make in pixel, but overall nice sig you made. Maybe she's a bit pale, but that could just be skin color. Her right hand may be a bit big.

pfffff....a lot of people put some super lame entry in a big competition..At the end, it is one of the lame one that wins the price..(none of them is good so...)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you decide to sell them, I'll support you. You have some neat ideas for line work. With good coloring it will totally kick butt. This is the kind of standard of work I want to see in those competition (although you might get put off by the boring ideas)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

she can do with some darker shading on some part of the body. Like the neck area, stomach area..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the dragon head is nice, but the body...eek, looks like it has injected with T-virus and mutating rapidly. I have a feeling it will make more sense if I can see the dragon's arm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The rock are really good. What is that cyan thing by the way??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You should make more.. :!: :!:

It's very very good, but try some AA, (Anti Aliasing) it'll make your lines seem so much smoother. Keep it up.

What is that cyan thing by the way??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

aww thats unfair, she said she couldn't get the water right..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

very nice, thought everything seems squashed into the canvas a bit, I'd advice drawing out some quick layout plans if your not sure how it'll look in the end.. I like your characters and thats a pretty sweet dragon.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

darker shades for skin? don't be afraid to save a few versions of skin to see what you prefer.. add a hint of pinks around the face maybe? brown tones towards the darker parts of her skin..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you certainly seem to have the talent, its up to you how you go about things, maybe have a look at other peoples work, see if you can take anything to better yourself?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

goodluck, lookin forward to future work :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ter

Very nice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So. Uh.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

By the way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I changed my name to kitten.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Like my new signature? IT'S 100 PERCENT BY ME ;DODOWEOFROS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

... AHHH MY NECK

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just kiddin' with ya. ;P

 

 

 

_________________

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Really. I'm joking. XD

wow... that looks.... wow...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you should look at my comp (pizle comp 1.2mil prize! is the title in media market forum)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

with the water, try making its wavy lines or something lol (im not real good with art, so i cant really help u that much)

Its very well done, the chick looks a little pale, maybe its just me?

Howdy :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Great first pixel, just one thing is that maybe you should do black outlines when the character's skin is almost white and the dragon behind is almost black, it makes her seem a lot more pale, same goes for the bunny ears.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You could also try practising with water, it looks good imo but could be better :shock: .

oh and also id add more defenition to her left arm (her left not ours :P)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it kinda blends with the dragon :)