spsmith Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Please tell me r these any good? I hope they r because i not very good... o well. and PLease no flaming! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Ok here's the deal: First of all don't post something that you don't think is good yourself. C/C (comments and criticism) isn't very effective if you aren't attached to the work itself to begin with. Second you said that you're not very good with pixelling. A few words of encouragement, no one is good at their first sigs, practice makes perfect, and don't be discouraged. Once you start to get the hang of pixelling, you'll get better and faster at it, I guarentee it. Now to the C/C: Your first sig is not a bad idea but there are a few things that need work. The tree is too simple a shape, try drawing more branches and make it assymmetrical (sp?). I see you've tried to do rudimentary shading which is good but you need to take it further. Generally speaking, I use about 5 or 6 shades per object, though sometimes more. The more cartoony you want it to look, the fewer shades you use probably to a minimum of 3 shades. The more realistis, the more shades (I've used 12 for rune armour before) The first sig also looks a little flat. What I mean is it doesn't look like the objects jump out of the page at me or go back into the computer screen. Don't worry, a little shading and adding shadows will help this a lot. Same basic ideas with the second sig, shade and add shadows. More detail would also be nice. Overall: Keep on using Paint (or whatever). Get used to the controls and making your own colors. Spend a little more time on your sigs. They don't jsut appear in a few hours. On my first pixel I personally spent almost 25 hours on the sig. Best of luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badphooeybad Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 ummm errmmmm uhhhh i like the cloud :roll: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flamer Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Do some shading and get a bit better at linework and you'll be good :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xeith Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Shading, line work, dimensions are some thing to maybe look at next time. I can't say much though, because im still working on my first. Which Final Fantasy Character Are You?Final Fantasy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Definately work on shading. The cloud in the first one looks good. ^_^ Just use the same technique you used on the cloud for the rest of it. Don't get in a hurry. ^_^ Take your time. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdprs Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Are these any good? No... Dont mean to flame, just umm, spend more then 2 seconds on sigs, and learn to draw? http://jdpr.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Are these any good? To tell the thruth..? NO. I see you worked on perspective in the first, but not in the second. Shade both... clean your lines...Its everything flat! too flat! And most important: Learn to draw! Oh, and spend more than 1 min doing your sigs. And why post and ask C/C for something that you dont even like? PLease no flaming! :D :lol: :lol: ~komodo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdprs Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 I hope they r because i not very good... If you know they arnt good dont bother posting them? :? http://jdpr.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verminox Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 You spelt Uranus wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 You spelt Uranus wrong lol... :lol: btw verminox you have a p0nage sig :lol: its awesome..can i use it :lol: Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Are these any good? To tell the thruth..? NO. I see you worked on perspective in the first, but not in the second. Shade both... clean your lines...Its everything flat! too flat! And most important: Learn to draw! Oh, and spend more than 1 min doing your sigs. And why post and ask C/C for something that you dont even like? PLease no flaming! :D :lol: :lol: ~komodo exactly what i was going to say...we're not flaming we're jsut advising you..and do not post your first sigs..they almsot ALWAYS suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spsmith Posted May 24, 2006 Author Share Posted May 24, 2006 is this any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xeith Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Umm arn't they exactly the same........ Which Final Fantasy Character Are You?Final Fantasy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Umm arn't they exactly the same........ just what i thought Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Umm arn't they exactly the same........ just what i thought ditto :? :shock: Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 is this any better? No, it isnt good... yet. I dunno if it will get good, but heres C/C How can the bench shadow be at his back when the sun is coming from the back and the tree shadow is in the front? Fix the light source, or one of the shadows... and those shadows need work up... serious workup. ~komodo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spsmith Posted May 25, 2006 Author Share Posted May 25, 2006 opps i totally looked over that my bad :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biggieg333 Posted May 25, 2006 Share Posted May 25, 2006 They are his first timers again. I do realize the reverse bench shade though. Keep trying bud! Join BsK today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted May 25, 2006 Share Posted May 25, 2006 They are his first timers again. So...? Also have to say, add some texture to you grass and tree. some basic texture. ~komodo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biggieg333 Posted May 26, 2006 Share Posted May 26, 2006 yeah, komodo, that might work too. maybe put in some players, like me and you! Join BsK today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted May 26, 2006 Share Posted May 26, 2006 yeah, komodo, that might work too. maybe put in some players, like me and you! Like Pking infront of the tree or a pacific ride? :P ~komodo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 im sorry...bit...it SUCKS almost EVERYTHING was made with the line tool, or a pre made tool, except the shadows, and theyre so bent and messes up...it IS funny.... draw in real life before you pixel, otherwise youll suck thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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