June 29, 200620 yr i know im not an art master, but you have your depth a little off. better then what i could do.
June 29, 200620 yr lacking four things SHADING PERSPECTIVE ACTION LINEWORK thanks everyone for the sigs!
June 29, 200620 yr i already knew shading :P i was bored dont yell :( *in a calm vocice* then please at least shade!...good practice :) Proud founder of the Myriad
June 29, 200620 yr Needs: Perspective Shading Depth Action/Movement Improvements on linework My Farewell thread. Please post nicely, or die. :^_^:Yea, I'd vote for him too. But I don't think they let Iraqis vote :P
June 29, 200620 yr the perspective and depth is all wrong! like for example you have a slanted wall yet the painting is hung facing towards you perfectly and the floor looks like its on top... -------------------------------------------------------------------
June 29, 200620 yr Everything seems in a wrong place. The frame, fireplace and the window seems to face us but the room... Seems totally out of shape. Hmmm, you might wanna improved on the lines? Thanks Metroid for the siggy and dark_shadow for avvy! \:D/ :thumbsup: <3 wendy
June 29, 200620 yr move the corner of the room down. its meant to be 30 degrees difference to a straight line doesn't it? remeber that from design and tech.... "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business"
June 29, 200620 yr Author i didnt play with angles or anything just was messing around.. u all seem like im a failure for trying something
June 29, 200620 yr ah no? were pointing out ways that you can improve it. when you look at it does it look like a room would to you? the window and fireplace should be going the same angle as the floor... before you post, stop, and think if it is worth posting as a half finished rush job by the looks of it. "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business"
June 29, 200620 yr Nice (unintentional?) Picasso theme. :P Picasso, I went for Rodin, or something like him :lol: ^^
June 29, 200620 yr lacking four things SHADING PERSPECTIVE ACTION LINEWORK ^^owned :P :wink: Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board!
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