Sparkle554 Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 its kinda bad but 1st ever lemme know what i can do to make a lil better :P:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yomom1919 Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 i know im not an art master, but you have your depth a little off. better then what i could do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noobish111 Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 One word: SHADING!!!!!!!!!! Ex-Runescaper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 lacking four things SHADING PERSPECTIVE ACTION LINEWORK thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparkle554 Posted June 29, 2006 Author Share Posted June 29, 2006 i already knew shading :P i was bored dont yell :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim_Jokes Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 i already knew shading :P i was bored dont yell :( *in a calm vocice* then please at least shade!...good practice :) Proud founder of the Myriad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Needs: Perspective Shading Depth Action/Movement Improvements on linework Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irulepoker Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Needs: Perspective Shading Depth Action/Movement Improvements on linework My Farewell thread. Please post nicely, or die. :^_^:Yea, I'd vote for him too. But I don't think they let Iraqis vote :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxshady Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 the perspective and depth is all wrong! like for example you have a slanted wall yet the painting is hung facing towards you perfectly and the floor looks like its on top... ------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jitouz Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Everything seems in a wrong place. The frame, fireplace and the window seems to face us but the room... Seems totally out of shape. Hmmm, you might wanna improved on the lines? Thanks Metroid for the siggy and dark_shadow for avvy! \:D/ :thumbsup: <3 wendy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
remoteman Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 move the corner of the room down. its meant to be 30 degrees difference to a straight line doesn't it? remeber that from design and tech.... "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Nice (unintentional?) Picasso theme. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparkle554 Posted June 29, 2006 Author Share Posted June 29, 2006 i didnt play with angles or anything just was messing around.. u all seem like im a failure for trying something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
remoteman Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 ah no? were pointing out ways that you can improve it. when you look at it does it look like a room would to you? the window and fireplace should be going the same angle as the floor... before you post, stop, and think if it is worth posting as a half finished rush job by the looks of it. "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Nice (unintentional?) Picasso theme. :P Picasso, I went for Rodin, or something like him :lol: ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 lacking four things SHADING PERSPECTIVE ACTION LINEWORK ^^owned :P :wink: Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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