I never messed with such things but i found it realy funny today so i'll post the result here 2. Don't expect much, first try ever at brushing in general 2.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Version 2:

 

 

 

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10262281/

 

 

 

Original:

 

 

 

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10248920/

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope you like it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cinema 4d render, consider it as a stock render image,up to grabs:

 

 

 

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10262255/

holy crap.... first off before i say anything bout the render i'd like to say AWSOME FOCAL POINT. when i looked at the sig it automaticly drew me into the middle spot, i can explain how awsome that is :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The line work is very nice, and the abstract is top notch (especialy for first time) Yes it could be more like other ones, but i like this, it has a style to its own)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Colors are also sweet , seems theres more to you than meets the eye m8 :P Great job.

Render looks great, but I'm not so sure about the colors. Linework really ruins it in my opinion.

Hum cant give it a real rating cause only cinema 4 abstracts i have seen are on deviant art, and most of them were the really good ones. So i am kinda camparing your to theirs, so i guess its as bit unfair for you..l..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Render is ok, seems to much simple (the design i have seen to many times). The line work needs to be spread a little farther then just the border, and color isnt my favorite. I guess its better then i can pull off, and its still good. I always point out the bad things, cause thats what i usualy find most usefull when people comment.

it's okay i guess... not too crazy bout the colorz

I like it! Very good focal point and brushing. I cant brush for beans. :( The shapes seem realy good, but the color is kinda funky. I love it though. Nice work. :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8.7/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:twisted: F!r3$70r/\/\ :twisted:

i think it looks really great. im not much of an artist myself, so...seeing something like that...just awesome.

Leme just say...if my graphics card could effectively handle that, I'm sure it would be amazing :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*wishes my video card could handle it to it's full potential*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It looks aswome, even on my crappy video card :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

9/10, 9.8/10 cause it's your first try :shock:

- doesnt have enough depth...

 

 

 

- It has to many colors to interpreit

 

 

 

- The focal point is taking away, there nothing to look at in it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And I'd also try and add some darker elements to even it out so its not like too much to look at, if you know what I mean.

Colors could be better. Some parts don't go along wiht the winding doen staircase look. The linework and text don't real fit. Besides that I like it.

Well i summarized some suggestions and made a version 2, taking away the linework (that i wasn't sure to add in first version anyway) and changed the colors to a less wide gamma, moved down to the greens...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10262281/

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also here's the render i used...free to use.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10262255/

i dont like the colors

 

 

 

maybe if u changed the thing sticking out to a different color

 

 

 

or just make it brighter or darker

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

other then that it looks great

looks pretty sweet, but what is it?