eckered Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 and... after some cc edit: second one and her4es one i had before... this one is 4 you weeb, think im the first one to use your c4d's :3> :3>(phr33 wub 4 weeb!!) also used a few of weebs c4d's there... rate/hate/skate/appreciate/instagate (actually dont do that plz)/cc/flame/spam, you guys know the drill... wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H_789789 Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 I Quite Like It But I'm Not Sure If The Red Contrasts That Well With The Eagle But It Still Looks GREAT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black_Flat Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 I have to agree with H 789789.... the eagle doesn't match the background. i think that the griffin is a good drawing, and the background looks good (not too sure about the scan lines, try lowering the opacity by half..) also the fact that you blacked over part of the griffens wings... An iffy job, im not sure how i feel about it, its not a hate and its not a love, i'll leave it at that. btw here it is resized Black Flat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 The orange part asks to much attention, and it doesnt suit the BG or the eagle :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 what color do you sugest that i change the background to? i saved it so i would be able to edit =) wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cadburys_egg Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 what color do you sugest that i change the background to? i saved it so i would be able to edit =) I'd recommend the orangey colour or a white/light blue. Render is choppy in places, feather it. Scan lines are too opaque, reduce their opacity to ~30%. Colour better (as mentioned above). Don't use a flat hue&sat layer. Better text, you've got lots of space yet use the smallest font possible. Background looks very unsaturated. Saturate it and possibly add a slight bit more contrast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 what color do you sugest that i change the background to? i saved it so i would be able to edit =) I'd recommend the orangey colour or a white/light blue. Render is choppy in places, feather it. Scan lines are too opaque, reduce their opacity to ~30%. Colour better (as mentioned above). Don't use a flat hue&sat layer. Better text, you've got lots of space yet use the smallest font possible. Background looks very unsaturated. Saturate it and possibly add a slight bit more contrast. Agreed 100% with Cad here. Also, just nit-picking a bit but that background is just kind of.. boring. I swear i've seen the same thing like it hundreds of times. Random brushing + scanlines + hue change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rik Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 i like it :) but i'm not sure about the red color maybe more gray white? now i just can't wait till i have my adobe photoshop cs2 to!!! :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 cad and nadril are both wrong :ohnoes: its a gradient, not a saturation, and the text, my text is broken so i add it through paint and stuff... its really screwed up... ill try the color changes you recomended, but also, heres a new one! edit: tried some of your sugestions, changed bg and reduced opacency on scanlines... on and rik, thats GIMP not photoshop lol >.< wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cadburys_egg Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 cad and nadril are both wrong :ohnoes: its a gradient, not a saturation, and the text, my text is broken so i add it through paint and stuff... its really screwed up... Well, the colours weren't hugely different and you're hiding the centre of it behind the render. ;) You can still change the font in paint. edit: tried some of your sugestions, changed bg and reduced opacency on scanlines... Lower scan lines about ~5% more and brighten the signature, it's still way too dark. You haven't feathered your render either, it's so choppy in places and doesn't blend at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 cad and nadril are both wrong Scared its a gradient, not a saturation, and the text, my text is broken so i add it through paint and stuff... its really screwed up... You don't "put a saturation" in your image. When he said it wasn't saturated enough he ment it wasn't intense enough. Slide up the saturation bar a bit to make it more vibrant. I still am not a fan of the scanlines, personaly i'd just get rid of them. They seem way to cliche and overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 i dunt know, i tried removeing scan lines, looked bad... tried feathering render, for some reason i gets really blured and parts of it get chopped off (thank god for ctrl+z) tried increasing saturation, and the blue looked too dark.. i kinad like what i have now anyways... thanks for the cc. any cc for the new one? wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 - Don't center the render. It almost always puts the focus on that and nothing else. - The colors, IMO, are very clashing. You have a very golden dark-knight figure in the midist of a bunch of blacks and purples. They just don't fit together well in this instance. - I see you tried to blend in the guy more. However, since he is radicaly different from the background (the background being dark and purple and him being muchmore vibrant and intractate [sp?]) it's going to be hard to get him to fit in. - I'm not a "huge" fan of the brushing style. It's all a mater of preferance really but I don't like tis new style of grunge. It looks more like a filter pile than anything :(. - Finaly, the boarder just doesn't really fit with the signature at all. Now... the good though. - I like how you at least tried to draw attention to the middle. At least how you had the densest concentration of brushing around the character, and more spartial brushing on the edges. IDK if this is intentional or not. - I like the text. It suffers from the same coloring problem but it's a nice idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 thanks for the cc, not much i can change, but for future refrence, ill be more carefull about that.. btw what i actually did was did some blk & white brushing, new layer, paste render everywhere, pick filter at some random settings, and then set it to overlay... and yes the brushing was concentrated twards the middle on prupose =P 8-) edit: one failed attempt, not going to bother posting, and a new one, used some dude's tutorial and weeb's c4d's =) this is really my first c4d piece, cc if you want, wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 and... after some cc edit: second one and her4es one i had before... this one is 4 you weeb, think im the first one to use your c4d's :3> :3>(phr33 wub 4 weeb!!) rate/hate/skate/appreciate/instagate (actually dont do that plz)/cc/flame/spam, you guys know the drill... no - i got some 'test readers' to try the c4d out before i uploaded ;p and 1 guy from TI in CGFX used them in his sig ;p the brushing on the eagle thinmg is nice, but the blue doesnt suit the render, and i think the white bit looks to dirty. My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 no - i got some 'test readers' to try the c4d out before i uploaded ;p and 1 guy from TI in CGFX used them in his sig ;p. you just made-ed me a berry sad boy... *runs and cries* also, i think im going to make a new one soon with a picture of jay, silent bob, and buddy christ wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 5, 2006 Author Share Posted October 5, 2006 sry for duble post, but i made a new one =) wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 sry for duble post, but i made a new one =) it seems a little clipped on the Left side, and the right side isnt very visible... but I love a couple of the others :3> Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 5, 2006 Author Share Posted October 5, 2006 clipped? not really sure i understand what you mean. thanks for the cc... i may try to do a new one with jay, silent bob, and buddy christ soon =P wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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