It's not bad actually. The colour choice was poor but the actual render is quite good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Blue is soothing, Red is angry.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I dont think red-is colours would fit this signature, although it would have expressed the feeling a bit better, I agree with that..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

El Eazy, how much would you be willing to pay for this?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

phuzi0n13x, Im sorry, free sigs aint my thing, and what would I do with 2 signatures? If I find some time and inspiration to make one, I might do it, but its highly unlikely, sorry.. :(

very nice! :shock: 1 problem needs fixin... the thing on the rock is hard to read.. ok ok it is readable but just hard... and its ok i have 20 20 vision.. 8)

The hard to read text was intentional.. Thanks for the comment :)

VERY impressive. Shame i dont play RS anymore to pay for it.

Now, i realy like this landscape, but only thing is it doesn't have anyting that just "jumps" out and makes you go "oh wow, cool."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyways, 9/10 for now :) And i would type a longer response but gotta go catch the bus :oops: :lol:

You should make a new topic to get people to bid on it :P

Now, i realy like this landscape, but only thing is it doesn't have anyting that just "jumps" out and makes you go "oh wow, cool."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyways, 9/10 for now :) And i would type a longer response but gotta go catch the bus :oops: :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Did you catch it? ;)

 

 

 

I will be working on it a bit more, perhaps I will post it, perhaps I won't, depends on how it turn out..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks mercifull :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

El Eazy, hmm, maybe I should.. Good idea :)

If you look real hard, you can see my name in the front rock-formation, went for a encarved kindof look, didnt really succeed in that, but oh well

 

 

 

The name isnt ment to be very read-able, think of it as an inscription that has been there for quite a while, and erosion and stuff washed it out a bit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Before you read my post, know that everything I am about to say has the full intent of helping you. I feel that you are one of those artists who will respond well to criticism, so I'm going to give alot of it. Here goes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Think of it as laziness I think you could do a bit of a better job making the text more readable. By making it so subtle, yet obviously there, the viewer spends way too much time trying to figure out what it says. That usually isn't a good thing. I would suggest to maybe make it darker in some places, or make the stuff around it a bit lighter.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like the detail of the front rock. But I do think that the blurring of the background mountains might have gotten just a bit out of hand. Maybe it's just me, but the background just looks real smudged... Maybe instead of blurring and smudging, try to actually rebrush it? I don't know, but I think you could work on that if you wanted to.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The dragon is pretty cool. Could use a highlight or two, but other than that, it's pretty small so I can't really say much about it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think it would be cool to use more ambient lighting. Maybe use contrasting colors to achieve highlights and shadows, rather than just a monotone feel..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The real decision you need to make, is to pick your emphasis. At first, it seems the dragon. But with the way the focus is, it seems like it's the rock... but I can't read the rock.... Get my drift?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I guess that's mainly all I have to say. Overall, good job. Lot's of potential here, hope some of this helped you out. If not, sorry? :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good stuff.

ooow, nice siggie!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Like the blurring effect to get depth in the sig, think it worked out good.

 

 

 

but the one thing i dont like is the carved tekst. You've made an attempt at it but IMO i think its better maybe not to put it in there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but maybe youll inprove it and it will look good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But with its goods and bads its still a very good sig.

very nice, i really like the style and the writing on the mountains does look like it was carved in(original :P ). As an experienced terragen-only landscaper i would say this is a 9.5/10; awesome landscape, i like the blur effect to add depth and the dragons look pretty good too. Good Job :)

Looks really good. I tried out a different color scheme and it looks really good ina yellowish red. But the text needs more contrast.

 

If you look real hard, you can see my name in the front rock-formation, went for a encarved kindof look, didnt really succeed in that, but oh well

 

 

 

The name isnt ment to be very read-able, think of it as an inscription that has been there for quite a while, and erosion and stuff washed it out a bit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Before you read my post, know that everything I am about to say has the full intent of helping you. I feel that you are one of those artists who will respond well to criticism, so I'm going to give alot of it. Here goes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Think of it as laziness I think you could do a bit of a better job making the text more readable. By making it so subtle, yet obviously there, the viewer spends way too much time trying to figure out what it says. That usually isn't a good thing. I would suggest to maybe make it darker in some places, or make the stuff around it a bit lighter.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like the detail of the front rock. But I do think that the blurring of the background mountains might have gotten just a bit out of hand. Maybe it's just me, but the background just looks real smudged... Maybe instead of blurring and smudging, try to actually rebrush it? I don't know, but I think you could work on that if you wanted to.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The dragon is pretty cool. Could use a highlight or two, but other than that, it's pretty small so I can't really say much about it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think it would be cool to use more ambient lighting. Maybe use contrasting colors to achieve highlights and shadows, rather than just a monotone feel..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The real decision you need to make, is to pick your emphasis. At first, it seems the dragon. But with the way the focus is, it seems like it's the rock... but I can't read the rock.... Get my drift?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I guess that's mainly all I have to say. Overall, good job. Lot's of potential here, hope some of this helped you out. If not, sorry? :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good stuff.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goody, criticism at its best :D

 

 

 

Ill reply at it when I get home, at school right now, bell just rang again, I've read it, and I must say, Thanks :D

 

 

 

Ill edit this post as soon as I get home, with the reply to everyones posts.. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*edit* Alright, Im home now, here we go :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keiphus:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yes, I agree with the first point, I could have spent some mroe time on the text. I was happy with it, the minute I made it, but after staring at it for a while, it seemed not too well done..

 

 

 

If the viewer spends much time finding out what the text says, it does mean that they remember the sig, as they have looked at it for quite a while ;)

 

 

 

Although, perhaps not really, because they are focussing on the text, not really on the image..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So.. Yeah, Im going to redo the text :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The background is perhaps a bit too blurry, I think I overdid the depth-effect a bit.. I'll keep it this way right now, perhaps I will change it after staring at the next version for a while.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was already experimenting with some more interesting colours, as that was mentioned before, I probably will get a bit more 'life' in it, perhaps with complementary colours.

 

 

 

By working on the colours, I will probably also rebrush the dragon, with more colours, more depth and more details. I will make it stand out a bit, so the focal point would be the dragon.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the criticism, It really did help :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eissob:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yes, true, as I mentioned in the reply to Keiphus, I will work on it ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mi3agent:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Unknownmasterofnothing:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As I said before, I will work on the colours, and it might do towards the red-ish colours, as they express anger (as FireFreek mentioned), it might suit the dragon theme a bit more.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Alright, so back to work I go, Thanks for the great comments everyone :D