Rate Pixel So Far! And Give C/C And Idea For BG!

[tomdavies90]

here it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

Update-removed all black lines!

 

 

 

 

 

 

thinking of maybe getting rid of the black lines for darker skin coloured ones if you get me, probably won't diter shade it because it's just not the style i want, might try it though, also please give an idea for a simple background.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

by the way this is by 2nd real pixel, 1st being sig so rate kind please :lol:

[imhomer]

Yes, get rid of the black lines. Also the nose, by the shading, looks way too wide. Your lines with the pencil tool on his cin and left shoulder are also messy, try cleaning them up.

[tomdavies90]

Yes, get rid of the black lines. Also the nose, by the shading, looks way too wide. Your lines with the pencil tool on his cin and left shoulder are also messy, try cleaning them up.

 

 

 

removing black lines now, he has a fat nose, chin looks fine i think, fixed left shoulder, thanks = )

[remoteman]

Lol you've shaded incorrectly on the nose, it looks as if he has an "inny" nose. When you shade in darker tones it makes it look like an indentation, so shade darker on one side where the nose is casting shadow, and brighter than the normal face on top. More shading! especially around the eyes, go have alook at yourself in the mirror and see where the shadows fall across your face, and removing the black lines would be a good idea.

[dkjestrup]

the hair is bugging me. also his face seems wide and his mouth seems weird to me. Don't worry if you can't see anything cause its just my opinion.keep it up! :thumbsup:

[fitzztif]

The top of his head seems too flat

[megadedhed]

yeah, jefidently work on anatomy, as right now.. it doesnt look very human...

[Gattree]

for i backround i would just stick with the mountains

[terley]

well adding a dark brown or dark blue instead of black can take away from the messiness but I do agree not to use black lines if you're trying not to be cartoony.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

with your shading, you need more contrast, and shade one side of his face because he looks flat on the screen atm. His eyes are too high, does he have a brain? well if thats how you want your character to look than ok, check out my avatar, that character's anatomy disfigured. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You could have im floatin in space, with earth in the bg, starts, the moon, space ship etc.. ?

[tomdavies90]

thanks for all the ideas guys, gonna work on him more today, it was only pretty rough, took about 45 mins-1 hour, but doing other things at same time

[skull3k3]

the hair is bugging me. also his face seems wide and his mouth seems weird to me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I agree here

[Viktorkrum77]

A persons hair is not flat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The oval probably doesn't need to be that high, but your eyes are the midpoint of your face, so your hair line is about 2/3 the way up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The ears are also debatable. They don't have to be that big, but bigger than you've got them. Depends upon the person.

[Wisp]

his eyes are a bit to high up in my opinion and the hair sorta looks ...flat

[Despaxes]

A persons hair is not flat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The oval probably doesn't need to be that high, but your eyes are the midpoint of your face, so your hair line is about 2/3 the way up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The ears are also debatable. They don't have to be that big, but bigger than you've got them. Depends upon the person.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

last time i checked the middle of my face is more like my nose.....but thats just me...and everyone ive ever seen. But hey, ive never seen you so i never know.

[Viktorkrum77]

 

A persons hair is not flat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The oval probably doesn't need to be that high, but your eyes are the midpoint of your face, so your hair line is about 2/3 the way up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The ears are also debatable. They don't have to be that big, but bigger than you've got them. Depends upon the person.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

last time i checked the middle of my face is more like my nose.....but thats just me...and everyone ive ever seen. But hey, ive never seen you so i never know.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Take a ruler to your face. Measure the length of your eyes to the top of your head, then your eyes to your chin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's a common mistake made by people who haven't studied anatomy or portrature.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Of course, not everyone's perfect, but it is usually the midpoint, or close to.

[Despaxes]

you went to the top of his [bleep]ed up hair...bring it down to where his HEAD is and guess where your line is...his nose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i have studied anatomy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: you also went down to his adams apple.....not his chin??

[beesafree]

 

A persons hair is not flat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~picture~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The oval probably doesn't need to be that high, but your eyes are the midpoint of your face, so your hair line is about 2/3 the way up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The ears are also debatable. They don't have to be that big, but bigger than you've got them. Depends upon the person.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

last time i checked the middle of my face is more like my nose.....but thats just me...and everyone ive ever seen. But hey, ive never seen you so i never know.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nose is middle of face eyes is middle of head

[Viktorkrum77]

 

 

A persons hair is not flat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~picture~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The oval probably doesn't need to be that high, but your eyes are the midpoint of your face, so your hair line is about 2/3 the way up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The ears are also debatable. They don't have to be that big, but bigger than you've got them. Depends upon the person.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

last time i checked the middle of my face is more like my nose.....but thats just me...and everyone ive ever seen. But hey, ive never seen you so i never know.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nose is middle of face eyes is middle of head

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Exactly, your hair is pretty big. Plus I did go to the top of his head, not the [bleep]es. And yes, as I said, not everybody is perfect, but it's pretty close.