November 25, 200619 yr i am trying pixel art instead of graphic art. heres my very FIRST pixel sig PLEASE RATE WHAT COULD IMPROVE
November 25, 200619 yr i think the question is WHAT COULDN'T IMPROVE? i'll just tell you one thing, and when you fix it, i'll tell you another... ANATOMY! your person looks very... mis-shappen :-s 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011.
November 25, 200619 yr dude u really need a few thousand hours of practice have u even read any of the pixelling tuts here on tip.it ? even my 8 yr old sister can draw better that looks like u made it in under a minute ok i dont wanna start flame wars here so i will request a mod to just close the topic anyway the rules say Don't post your first ever sig. To be quite honest with you, they are hardly ever decent. Remember, if you think it doesn't look good, it doesn't. For those of you who truely feel that you are hot stuff, ask for a second opinion such as family member, friend, or messenger buddy if you want a real opinion as to if it's any good. If they give good feedback, post away. and next time put in at least 2-3 hours of work even after 2-3 hours its hard to get a real good looking pixel pixel art is all about patience and talent
November 25, 200619 yr Everything. And, just a tip dietokill, but didn't you say you were going to be back "when you were better" ? You have been caught ripping images more than once (although the second is pending atm) and have the inteligence of a 5 year old. Honestly, it's bad. That's all I can say. If I were you I would go away, and practice. Not rip more backgrounds, but practice. Or, give up.
November 25, 200619 yr You can find heaps better colours if you double click a colour two times and click the define custom colours button, also look at a person on google or somthing, and try and draw them. and read some tuturials heres some basic tips "If ye love wealth better than liberty, the tranquility of servitude better than the animating contest of freedom, go home from us in peace. We ask not your counsels or your arms. Crouch down and lick the hands which feed you. May your chains set lightly upon you, and may posterity forget that you were our countrymen." - Samuel AdamsMy new site. [bETA]
November 25, 200619 yr Did you know that a proper pixel sig takes alot of time from beginning to ending, sometimes days? Not 3 minutes? :wink: and, CAPS LOCK DOESNT HELP IF YOU WANT OTHERS TO READ SOMETHING! [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
November 25, 200619 yr ok lets see no shading, the birds are little curves basically theres wierd dots all over the ground his stomach tucks in waaaaaaaaaaaaay to much you clearly used fill and his mouth is a straight black line, whats supposed to to be happening in your picture and the only decent thing is.. that .... um... i dunno. Hegemony-Spain
November 25, 200619 yr oh im sorry i didnt rate .1/10 [Mod Edit: Just edit your first post - no need to post again a minute after. ~azn] Hegemony-Spain
November 25, 200619 yr How old are you man? Because with every post you make it seems that your age drops about 1.54 years (that's the statistical number :wink: ). I wrote a tutorial (<====selfish promotion of own work :wink: ) for pixel work to try and save our forum from more images like this. First off, any good pixel takes anywhere from 10 hours to a week or more of work. Second, please don't post you very first pixel. I'm going to tell you the same thing I and everyone else told you about graphic art; read a few tuts from the FAQ Sticky, get some practice, and post your new work. You'll get better I guarantee it. But please, don't post anything more like this until you have at least some idea of how to do pixel art well.
November 25, 200619 yr omg man work on in more then 10 seconds cause pixels take weeks! I've been doing mine for a month and it still ain't finished. Just take your time! and are the colours soo bright. You shouldn't post with that sort of anatomy come on! :notalk: Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks-
November 25, 200619 yr You shouldn't post with that sort of anatomy come on! :notalk: No need to be so hasty as to be hypocritical now.
November 25, 200619 yr 0.5/10 you could do things like 1.) fix the lines on the guy like the legs, chest, and face 2.) straighten up the tree trunk 3.) tree leaves color should be darker 4.) stray brown lines extend both ways from the tree trunk 5.) if you want to shade grass then dont use black lines, nothing has black line borders in real life. 6.) birds arnt really a good idea since the serve no purpase and and just black lines. 7.) you shouldnt just scribble all over the place to make hair, draw it in and then shade it but you should first get your line work down before you start worrying about shading 8. eyes and mouth are not black and mouth is usally curvy and eyes are not round. 9.) hands and feet shouldnt be straight black just keep trying and i bet you can imporve by one point if not more each attempt
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