not really sure how to do eyes + how to make the background abit more...full without it seeming crowded

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not really sure how to do eyes + how to make the background abit more...full without it seeming crowded

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

your sig now change it to that kind of perspective.. start over you havent done a great deal anyway in bg so its easy to change it now than later as for eyes look for references.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not really sure how to do eyes + how to make the background abit more...full without it seeming crowded

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

your sig now change it to that kind of perspective.. start over you havent done a great deal anyway in bg so its easy to change it now than later as for eyes look for references.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what like with a small person? :(

 

 

 

i like to try new things out but...

well I don't think you should scrap it and start over, otherwise this piece would have just been a waste of time, instead maybe you should learn something from it.. I hope you don't mind that I made a quick edit..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I did get a bit carried away, I started sketching in some eyes (as you were requesting help with em) and decided to AA em to get em lookin smooth.. Then I just said to myself, what the hell.. And I've just editted all I felt needed changing..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I assumed it was a woman so raised the jaw, smoothened off all your linework, added an ear, mouth and hair.. I tried to make the most of your colours to add depth to the face, your original version looks raised off the screen but still flat, I guessing its because you were maybe still going to work on that.. Well please zoom into my version and have a look what I've done. Keep your facial proportions in check also, even for anime..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I worked on the background next, it's always a good idea to add a hilly landscape, it suggests someone more is going on, flat suggests 'boring'.. Add a bush, bring the tree closer so it fills the screen more, instead of adding 'too much'.. I added some water but probably not the best pond in the world.. Also your moon kinda looks puny, and the moon is a good focal point on any night image, make it stronger visually would be my advice. With the grass, try not to do anything to repetative, or harsh on the eyes, its obviously just tiled grass..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and lastly I was thinking, something's still missing.. There needs to be something in the foreground to compliment the face, my idea was for her to have her hand out with like a fairy or something stood on her finger.. But that's just a suggestion. Didn't bother going the whole way with that..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Be more creative with this, it looks great though, my first impressions of this were that it looks as if you could do so much more with it, the positioning was good and I thought it was great seeing something different.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goodluck hope I helped at all..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Ter

terly has offically pimped your sig.

Terly, why do you own so hardcore? and why wont you respond to my marriage proposals by mail? :P ... :oops:

Terly, why do you own so hardcore? and why wont you respond to my marriage proposals by mail? :P ... :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:XD: #-o #-o #-o :wall: #-o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dangit terly you are too good...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

seriously you just freaking juiced that sig up so much it isn't even funny!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

gawd im enthralled!

terly has offically pimped your sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rofl, he does that all the time.. infact, hes done it for one of my sigs once : it really helped me improve on my pixeling

only here to help :

well I don't think you should scrap it and start over, otherwise this piece would have just been a waste of time, instead maybe you should learn something from it.. I hope you don't mind that I made a quick edit..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I did get a bit carried away, I started sketching in some eyes (as you were requesting help with em) and decided to AA em to get em lookin smooth.. Then I just said to myself, what the hell.. And I've just editted all I felt needed changing..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I assumed it was a woman so raised the jaw, smoothened off all your linework, added an ear, mouth and hair.. I tried to make the most of your colours to add depth to the face, your original version looks raised off the screen but still flat, I guessing its because you were maybe still going to work on that.. Well please zoom into my version and have a look what I've done. Keep your facial proportions in check also, even for anime..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I worked on the background next, it's always a good idea to add a hilly landscape, it suggests someone more is going on, flat suggests 'boring'.. Add a bush, bring the tree closer so it fills the screen more, instead of adding 'too much'.. I added some water but probably not the best pond in the world.. Also your moon kinda looks puny, and the moon is a good focal point on any night image, make it stronger visually would be my advice. With the grass, try not to do anything to repetative, or harsh on the eyes, its obviously just tiled grass..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and lastly I was thinking, something's still missing.. There needs to be something in the foreground to compliment the face, my idea was for her to have her hand out with like a fairy or something stood on her finger.. But that's just a suggestion. Didn't bother going the whole way with that..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Be more creative with this, it looks great though, my first impressions of this were that it looks as if you could do so much more with it, the positioning was good and I thought it was great seeing something different.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goodluck hope I helped at all..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Ter

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wow that face is amazing! i will try and use your tips to the best of my ability :wink:

well I don't think you should scrap it and start over, otherwise this piece would have just been a waste of time, instead maybe you should learn something from it.. I hope you don't mind that I made a quick edit..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I did get a bit carried away, I started sketching in some eyes (as you were requesting help with em) and decided to AA em to get em lookin smooth.. Then I just said to myself, what the hell.. And I've just editted all I felt needed changing..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I assumed it was a woman so raised the jaw, smoothened off all your linework, added an ear, mouth and hair.. I tried to make the most of your colours to add depth to the face, your original version looks raised off the screen but still flat, I guessing its because you were maybe still going to work on that.. Well please zoom into my version and have a look what I've done. Keep your facial proportions in check also, even for anime..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I worked on the background next, it's always a good idea to add a hilly landscape, it suggests someone more is going on, flat suggests 'boring'.. Add a bush, bring the tree closer so it fills the screen more, instead of adding 'too much'.. I added some water but probably not the best pond in the world.. Also your moon kinda looks puny, and the moon is a good focal point on any night image, make it stronger visually would be my advice. With the grass, try not to do anything to repetative, or harsh on the eyes, its obviously just tiled grass..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and lastly I was thinking, something's still missing.. There needs to be something in the foreground to compliment the face, my idea was for her to have her hand out with like a fairy or something stood on her finger.. But that's just a suggestion. Didn't bother going the whole way with that..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Be more creative with this, it looks great though, my first impressions of this were that it looks as if you could do so much more with it, the positioning was good and I thought it was great seeing something different.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goodluck hope I helped at all..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Ter

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Start a topic called "Pi mp My Sig" lmao.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ontopic-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

think you should makem some living trees instead of a dead one, and some more grassy looking grass.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sorry im now just adding on to what I said earlier.. You're pallette could do with some additional warmer tones to add within the shading of her face, plus it can add that extra shading level needed because imo my first edit looked too flat still.. With the rest of your pallette you seem to be picking the obvious default colours and altering the lightness and darkness, try not to restrict yourself to such generic colours, experiment with the whole of the pallette.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok im done, im just trying to give you as much advice as possible, I am sorry if you don't want me to edit your work so severely, Im also constantly learning myself and just can't help it :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

awsome edit, i especialy like the eye and the new edit has an awsome warm sence.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sorry im now just adding on to what I said earlier.. You're pallette could do with some additional warmer tones to add within the shading of her face, plus it can add that extra shading level needed because imo my first edit looked too flat still.. With the rest of your pallette you seem to be picking the obvious default colours and altering the lightness and darkness, try not to restrict yourself to such generic colours, experiment with the whole of the pallette.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok im done, im just trying to give you as much advice as possible, I am sorry if you don't want me to edit your work so severely, Im also constantly learning myself and just can't help it :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

was trying it out earlier with a beach instead of grass which is quite good! very nice work :