Ryan Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 Sigh, this is where the money's at so I figured I'd sell out. I'd like some comments on this so far and if see if any would like me to continue. Suggestions for the rest of it are well appreciated. Note: The guy was freehand with rs guy as reference. I did NOT trace. It even looks different :P Thanks Sorry for such a small update but I feel like it made a huge visual change: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 ok thats just cool 8) very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 wow so here you are finaly :D Well...the angle is pretty interesting i'd say, not sure what you'r up to but could turn out with some cool setting :) (Yes it's worth to be continued) What to say...mmm... The drawing has its own style so i think talking about it is pointless, keep it up the way you like it to be and cross fingers to meet audience tastes. I'd suggest you add the missing line on the elm (neck transition) and fix the left paddle. Looks like the kite is behind it rather than on its side. (it's a metter of a couple of pixels and maybe a darker shading for the shield). Probably right arm is 2 slim for a warrior and the chest is 2 squared , but consider these as sidenotes u can skip. Maybe get rid of black borders...maybe not :P Waiting for the finished version. Good luck with this project and with a good payback ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 10, 2004 Author Share Posted October 10, 2004 wow so here you are finaly :D Well...the angle is pretty interesting i'd say, not sure what you'r up to but could turn out with some cool setting :) (Yes it's worth to be continued) What to say...mmm... The drawing has its own style so i think talking about it is pointless, keep it up the way you like it to be and cross fingers to meet audience tastes. I'd suggest you add the missing line on the elm (neck transition) and fix the left paddle. Looks like the kite is behind it rather than on its side. (it's a metter of a couple of pixels and maybe a darker shading for the shield). Probably right arm is 2 slim for a warrior and the chest is 2 squared , but consider these as sidenotes u can skip. Maybe get rid of black borders...maybe not :P Waiting for the finished version. Good luck with this project and with a good payback ! I'm honored to hear good words from you :D . I see exactly what you mean on all those points. I'm going to go and fix up now. Will keep you guys updated in this post. As for the black borders, would you just suggest using a darker tone of the base color for that area? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 wow so here you are finaly :D Well...the angle is pretty interesting i'd say, not sure what you'r up to but could turn out with some cool setting :) (Yes it's worth to be continued) What to say...mmm... The drawing has its own style so i think talking about it is pointless, keep it up the way you like it to be and cross fingers to meet audience tastes. I'd suggest you add the missing line on the elm (neck transition) and fix the left paddle. Looks like the kite is behind it rather than on its side. (it's a metter of a couple of pixels and maybe a darker shading for the shield). Probably right arm is 2 slim for a warrior and the chest is 2 squared , but consider these as sidenotes u can skip. Maybe get rid of black borders...maybe not :P Waiting for the finished version. Good luck with this project and with a good payback ! I'm honored to hear good words from you :D . I see exactly what you mean on all those points. I'm going to go and fix up now. Will keep you guys updated in this post. As for the black borders, would you just suggest using a darker tone of the base color for that area? Hehe i have to say i was drooling for interest after i noticed this thread and while the page was loading lol...I tried to be as constructive as possible since i was sure you could easily get all the pointed out stuff without screaming for a flame :wink: However yes i mainly do that. Remember that a dark color choice implies more contrast while a lighter one (that is a very small difference in luminance value) gives a cartoony look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 10, 2004 Author Share Posted October 10, 2004 wow so here you are finaly :D Well...the angle is pretty interesting i'd say, not sure what you'r up to but could turn out with some cool setting :) (Yes it's worth to be continued) What to say...mmm... The drawing has its own style so i think talking about it is pointless, keep it up the way you like it to be and cross fingers to meet audience tastes. I'd suggest you add the missing line on the elm (neck transition) and fix the left paddle. Looks like the kite is behind it rather than on its side. (it's a metter of a couple of pixels and maybe a darker shading for the shield). Probably right arm is 2 slim for a warrior and the chest is 2 squared , but consider these as sidenotes u can skip. Maybe get rid of black borders...maybe not :P Waiting for the finished version. Good luck with this project and with a good payback ! I'm honored to hear good words from you :D . I see exactly what you mean on all those points. I'm going to go and fix up now. Will keep you guys updated in this post. As for the black borders, would you just suggest using a darker tone of the base color for that area? Hehe i have to say i was drooling for interest after i noticed this thread and while the page was loading lol...I tried to be as constructive as possible since i was sure you could easily get all the pointed out stuff without screaming for a flame :wink: However yes i mainly do that. Remember that a dark color choice implies more contrast while a lighter one (that is a very small difference in luminance value) gives a cartoony look. 8) Thanks that helps. Hope it wasn't too bad from what you were hoping. Granted it is my first pixel "drawing", but I'm sick of posts that say that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 looking nice, like TJ said, make arms thicker. And also make his neck more strait (seems to going fowards). Has good potential. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 10, 2004 Author Share Posted October 10, 2004 looking nice, like TJ said, make arms thicker. And also make his neck more strait (seems to going fowards). Has good potential. Thanks, I'll make those changes in a sec. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 11, 2004 Author Share Posted October 11, 2004 New version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carlos74 Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 Nice work, keep going. Also a question: What's the rest of the background look like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kngkyle Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 Im so ashamed of you ryan. You cant beat them so you join them???? Tsk tsk tsk.. yah the arm is to thin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 those are SWEET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 still not liking the head. Heads arnt circles, more ovals. Bg is going good Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralinre Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 Sigh, this is where the money's at so I figured I'd sell out. No! They got another one! :( j/k Nice shading, but the arm still looks too thin. The shield also looks a little odd. The head should be a little taller and thinner. I'm sure the finished version will look good. Keep it up. (or go back to real art :wink:) "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 11, 2004 Author Share Posted October 11, 2004 First off, I know I'm selling out, but I need money and Im gonna do wha [bleep] takes. :? I changed the arm some.. guess it wasn't enough :P. I appreciate all the comments. I'll change the arm and the head when I can. I love how tedious these things are :roll: 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 o and i dont really see the diffrence from them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 o nvm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 sell out :P lol j/k looking nice, lot better than some of these sigs, and it has a perspective woot! anywho, finish it up and sell it :P lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Offset the path that is coming directly from the characters body. That will give it more of a path illusion opposed to a very long and skinny male reproductive organ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 12, 2004 Author Share Posted October 12, 2004 Offset the path that is coming directly from the characters body. That will give it more of a path illusion opposed to a very long and skinny male reproductive organ. You little pervert you...It's a good suggestion though, thanks. I'll move it some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool_Banana Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 really good!, im very impressed :P!, i cant wait to see the final version! i never thought id see you making a pixel sig, i thought u were an anti pixl person! :lol: , as i said, good luck completeing and cant wait for the final peice! .:'':.Cool Banana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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