Sigh, this is where the money's at so I figured I'd sell out. I'd like some comments on this so far and if see if any would like me to continue. Suggestions for the rest of it are well appreciated.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Note: The guy was freehand with rs guy as reference. I did NOT trace. It even looks different :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry for such a small update but I feel like it made a huge visual change:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok thats just cool 8) very nice!

wow so here you are finaly :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well...the angle is pretty interesting i'd say, not sure what you'r up to but could turn out with some cool setting :) (Yes it's worth to be continued)

 

 

 

What to say...mmm...

 

 

 

The drawing has its own style so i think talking about it is pointless, keep it up the way you like it to be and cross fingers to meet audience tastes.

 

 

 

I'd suggest you add the missing line on the elm (neck transition) and fix the left paddle. Looks like the kite is behind it rather than on its side. (it's a metter of a couple of pixels and maybe a darker shading for the shield).

 

 

 

Probably right arm is 2 slim for a warrior and the chest is 2 squared , but consider these as sidenotes u can skip.

 

 

 

Maybe get rid of black borders...maybe not :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waiting for the finished version.

 

 

 

Good luck with this project and with a good payback !

wow so here you are finaly :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well...the angle is pretty interesting i'd say, not sure what you'r up to but could turn out with some cool setting :) (Yes it's worth to be continued)

 

 

 

What to say...mmm...

 

 

 

The drawing has its own style so i think talking about it is pointless, keep it up the way you like it to be and cross fingers to meet audience tastes.

 

 

 

I'd suggest you add the missing line on the elm (neck transition) and fix the left paddle. Looks like the kite is behind it rather than on its side. (it's a metter of a couple of pixels and maybe a darker shading for the shield).

 

 

 

Probably right arm is 2 slim for a warrior and the chest is 2 squared , but consider these as sidenotes u can skip.

 

 

 

Maybe get rid of black borders...maybe not :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waiting for the finished version.

 

 

 

Good luck with this project and with a good payback !

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm honored to hear good words from you :D . I see exactly what you mean on all those points. I'm going to go and fix up now. Will keep you guys updated in this post. As for the black borders, would you just suggest using a darker tone of the base color for that area?

 

wow so here you are finaly :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well...the angle is pretty interesting i'd say, not sure what you'r up to but could turn out with some cool setting :) (Yes it's worth to be continued)

 

 

 

What to say...mmm...

 

 

 

The drawing has its own style so i think talking about it is pointless, keep it up the way you like it to be and cross fingers to meet audience tastes.

 

 

 

I'd suggest you add the missing line on the elm (neck transition) and fix the left paddle. Looks like the kite is behind it rather than on its side. (it's a metter of a couple of pixels and maybe a darker shading for the shield).

 

 

 

Probably right arm is 2 slim for a warrior and the chest is 2 squared , but consider these as sidenotes u can skip.

 

 

 

Maybe get rid of black borders...maybe not :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waiting for the finished version.

 

 

 

Good luck with this project and with a good payback !

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm honored to hear good words from you :D . I see exactly what you mean on all those points. I'm going to go and fix up now. Will keep you guys updated in this post. As for the black borders, would you just suggest using a darker tone of the base color for that area?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hehe i have to say i was drooling for interest after i noticed this thread and while the page was loading lol...I tried to be as constructive as possible since i was sure you could easily get all the pointed out stuff without screaming for a flame :wink:

 

 

 

However yes i mainly do that. Remember that a dark color choice implies more contrast while a lighter one (that is a very small difference in luminance value) gives a cartoony look.

 

 

wow so here you are finaly :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well...the angle is pretty interesting i'd say, not sure what you'r up to but could turn out with some cool setting :) (Yes it's worth to be continued)

 

 

 

What to say...mmm...

 

 

 

The drawing has its own style so i think talking about it is pointless, keep it up the way you like it to be and cross fingers to meet audience tastes.

 

 

 

I'd suggest you add the missing line on the elm (neck transition) and fix the left paddle. Looks like the kite is behind it rather than on its side. (it's a metter of a couple of pixels and maybe a darker shading for the shield).

 

 

 

Probably right arm is 2 slim for a warrior and the chest is 2 squared , but consider these as sidenotes u can skip.

 

 

 

Maybe get rid of black borders...maybe not :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waiting for the finished version.

 

 

 

Good luck with this project and with a good payback !

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm honored to hear good words from you :D . I see exactly what you mean on all those points. I'm going to go and fix up now. Will keep you guys updated in this post. As for the black borders, would you just suggest using a darker tone of the base color for that area?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hehe i have to say i was drooling for interest after i noticed this thread and while the page was loading lol...I tried to be as constructive as possible since i was sure you could easily get all the pointed out stuff without screaming for a flame :wink:

 

 

 

However yes i mainly do that. Remember that a dark color choice implies more contrast while a lighter one (that is a very small difference in luminance value) gives a cartoony look.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8) Thanks that helps. Hope it wasn't too bad from what you were hoping. Granted it is my first pixel "drawing", but I'm sick of posts that say that.

looking nice, like TJ said, make arms thicker. And also make his neck more strait (seems to going fowards). Has good potential.

looking nice, like TJ said, make arms thicker. And also make his neck more strait (seems to going fowards). Has good potential.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks, I'll make those changes in a sec.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

New version.

Nice work, keep going. Also a question: What's the rest of the background look like?

Im so ashamed of you ryan.

 

 

 

You cant beat them so you join them????

 

 

 

Tsk tsk tsk..

 

 

 

yah the arm is to thin.

those are SWEET

still not liking the head. Heads arnt circles, more ovals. Bg is going good

Sigh, this is where the money's at so I figured I'd sell out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No! They got another one! :(

 

 

 

j/k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice shading, but the arm still looks too thin. The shield also looks a little odd. The head should be a little taller and thinner.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm sure the finished version will look good. Keep it up. (or go back to real art :wink:)

First off, I know I'm selling out, but I need money and Im gonna do wha [bleep] takes. :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I changed the arm some.. guess it wasn't enough :P. I appreciate all the comments. I'll change the arm and the head when I can. I love how tedious these things are :roll: 8)

o and i dont really see the diffrence from them

o nvm

sell out :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol j/k looking nice, lot better than some of these sigs, and it has a perspective woot!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anywho, finish it up and sell it :P lol.

Offset the path that is coming directly from the characters body.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That will give it more of a path illusion opposed to a very long and skinny male reproductive organ.

Offset the path that is coming directly from the characters body.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That will give it more of a path illusion opposed to a very long and skinny male reproductive organ.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You little pervert you...It's a good suggestion though, thanks. I'll move it some.

really good!, im very impressed :P!, i cant wait to see the final version!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i never thought id see you making a pixel sig, i thought u were an anti pixl person! :lol: ,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

as i said, good luck completeing and cant wait for the final peice!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.:'':.Cool Banana!