maybe raise the head?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WOW

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sooooo much better lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

now for fixing my fire drops into fire balls lol

Just make those "fire drops" more flamey looking (for a lack of a better term ). Fire isn't perfectly shaped :wink:

ya... iv tried and still am

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

comes out a demented blobs lol

ya... iv tried and still am

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

comes out a demented blobs lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i don't think this one looks as blobby as a few i tried... go ahead and use that one to do the other one if you like it :D

I like the fire!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe introduce different shades of orange to better suit it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice sig though! Keep it up.

I like the fire My Eggs drew. That's sort of what I was trying to get across :P If you were to make a nice blend from red to orange to yellow (moving in) that would look good, I think.

I like the fire!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe introduce different shades of orange to better suit it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice sig though! Keep it up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im going to hade it once i get the final shape

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats why there is no realy good shading yet

Heres two different color choices i used for the fire... the first one was all oranges and i kinda like it better than the second one...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what do you think of my fire?

The second one is much better, My Eggs. I'd probably even add some darker red shades on the edges, just to see how it looked :P

The second one is much better, My Eggs. I'd probably even add some darker red shades on the edges, just to see how it looked :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol, that wasnt to hard... how do you like it with the darker red-orange on the outside?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you want a really hot fire, make the center and bottom white, surrounded by yellow, some orange, and only the tip and trim around the top to be red. The best way really is to look up some fire pics in google, RL references are always great resources.

wow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks alot everyone :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

this is what iv got from everything you have helped me with :)

I really feel like we're taking over destro3979's thread here :oops: :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If possibly, I'd probably leave one 'strand' of the lighter red-orange around the fireball, and an even thiner 'strand' of the darker red-orange outside of that. If it makes sense? That way it's not too contrasting but should blend well from red to yellow/light orange.

I really feel like we're taking over destro3979's thread here :oops: :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If possibly, I'd probably leave one 'strand' of the lighter red-orange around the fireball, and an even thiner 'strand' of the darker red-orange outside of that. If it makes sense? That way it's not too contrasting but should blend well from red to yellow/light orange.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its ok

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

this is my first pixel ever so i need lots of help :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the last time i used paint before this was probably in elementary school lol

I present to you.....Hot Fire!!!! Yeah, i know its not perfect but I had some troubles with colors this time lol.... I have taken this sudden liking to pixeling fire :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you like the hot fire? or gonna stick with the current one you have?

you forgot the orange

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wow you guys are good lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i g2g for awhile

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ill be back

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also i would like to add some stuff??? idk what

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

any ideas

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

be back soon

heres a pretty good fire refrence pic if you need one for future pixels involving fire"

 

 

 

 

 

 

^^as mxm said, you can clearly see the white towards the middle of the fire^^

wow you guys are good lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i g2g for awhile

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ill be back

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also i would like to add some stuff??? idk what

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

any ideas

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

be back soon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I agree, you should add some stuff. For the most part the sig is looking pretty empty. Overall, here are a few things I'd recommend:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Get rid of the black lines. You may have been waiting until the end to do this, but I don'tn really know. Overall, they're pretty unattractive. Try using just a darker shade of the same colour (i.e. dark brown for the tree, dark orange for the penguin's beak). Just leave the penguin itself black. And the white lines on the character are kind of iffy. Try black maybe? Just something looks strange about it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- More diverse colours in the sky. Now how often to we see a purely blue sky, eh? :wink: Try adding some lighter shades of blue around where you want the sun to be (obviously there will be no sun in the actual picture, but maybe add lighter shades of blue in the top left hand corner, since that's where the light source is).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- More shading on the tree. Right now you used only two shades. If I were you, I'd just get rid of that darker shade and start over. Blend the colours from light brown to dark brown, from left to right - similarly how you did the mage.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Incomplete shading on the mage? Try making the insides of the mage's sleeves darker, and more shadows on the bottom parts of his sleeves. And the hood.. It needs shading, my friend :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The horizon looks a bit.. Flat to me. Maybe make it a bit more uneven and slopey?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Those are just a few comments and suggestions I have, hope they help :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Btw, that fire looks great, Darrel104 :thumbsup: )

dunno if you'll like it but i done the fireballs.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think it serves it's purpose ok.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do what you will with it.

ok i fixed a few of the things you said :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks better now :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i have something you need to fix... the feet are absolutely tiny

i have something you need to fix... the feet are absolutely tiny

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

is this good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or a little more?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now, I'm no expert, this is more preference, bt i think the hood should be a little lower on his head, because to me, it looks like his head is giant and egg shaped.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It hits the top of your sig, i think it should be just a little lower sitting above his head.

I KNOW WHAT TO ADD!!!!!

 

 

 

lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

first mountains in the background

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and some one ether with

 

 

 

1.full drag and a drag 2h

 

 

 

2.full dharok's

 

 

 

running at me from behind (gets rid of the reason of just randomly holding fireballs)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

maybe a few animals too???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bunnies!!! lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well im tired

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

see ya all in the morning