I like the shading on the tree, sig is coming together nicely.

I like the shading on the tree, sig is coming together nicely.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks

tree is done... maybe?

 

 

 

now for the sky :ohnoes:

 

 

 

Why's there a tree on ice :-k

Make the sky blend more, maybe add some clouds or mountains in the background.

Why's there a tree on ice :-k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Of course you REALLY meant snow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Because trees grow before snow falls.

ya its snow lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

am i done???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

idk

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what do you think

You definately need some more action in there, it's too empty atm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And add shadows to the guy and penguin, looksl ike they're hovering lol.

You definately need some more action in there, it's too empty atm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And add shadows to the guy and penguin, looksl ike they're hovering lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Duh... theyre magical and bend space and time to create psionic orbs to propel them far distances in mere seconds.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So of course they hover. What mad man wouldnt understand that?

Give it a nice border and colour the black lines. Also if I were you I'd add some mountains or something in the background, or at least shade the sky. How much better does that look compared to your first attempt though? Fair play to you for sticking it at it, you've succeeded where many have failed. =D>

you could add more shades to your sky and add shading to the penguin. Also add a border like the other guy above said. Then i think you could call it done, alough it would look better if you filled up some of the empty spaces.

im going to add mountains and a shadow soon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the only black line is around the robe and penguin...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i didnt think it was going to come out this good :)

shadows!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

light source?

light source?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

top left

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it would be above the sig....

the fire is a source of light, as is the sun, make it more clear where they are as it doesnt add up. also when shading dont be afraid to use curved or even wavy lines, adds depth.

ok.... problem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sig= max of 30

 

 

 

my sig = 60 :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

how do i fix it without losing color and detail

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GRAVITY! :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The robe arms need to be fixed!

 

 

 

Realistically, gravity would make the sleeves more vertical like.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's my only critique on it now.