Ellipsis Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 Kudos to Strav for playing plastic surgeon on my person... I don't really like the bow or the sky, but I don't know how to fix them. =\ http://z4.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of ... hp?act=idxOoC Elder..? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 That's quite good, actually. The bow isn't that bad, work on the anatomy of the person first. The right arm is much longer then the left, and add detail to the hands, don't just use circles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkjestrup Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 Kudos to Strav for playing plastic surgeon on my person... I don't really like the bow or the sky, but I don't know how to fix them. =\ the hand holding the bow should be behind the wood with a thumb infront of it O:) like the girl holding the shark in my newest pixel also the womens skirt. too wide Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 lol you just wanted to show off your new pixel dk haha.. Its the background thats annoying me, or lack of.. its like the earth ends behind a stone wall.. :lol: looks great tho.. keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 @Dk - How He she/(He?) has the hand could be correct by having the fingers covering the bow. \_ | \\ <- Thumb \_ | \_ | \_ | ^ Fingers __^ Bow If the fingers went past the bow then It would be correct if you added a thumb. Back on topic It looks pretty good. I agree with Dk on the skirt and maybe add some crinkles in the skirt. I would change the outline on the wall (?) . Apart from what has already been mentioned, That's all I have to say. Good Job. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
softwarewiz Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 it is good shading :lol: ive quit because of the dumb side of the RS community, not because i play too much (like 1 hour a day) dont get lured! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BloodAngel Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 Looking good there Allie, just need to put something in the sky because it looks too plain. -Bloodangel "Unfortunately, the real world isn't the same as a fairy tale." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 That looks more like she is holding the bow, rather than it's just stuck to a circular object forming her hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ellipsis Posted December 22, 2006 Author Share Posted December 22, 2006 If I take much more off the skirt she won't be able to walk. Thanks for the lending a hand, Pyro. :P http://z4.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of ... hp?act=idxOoC Elder..? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peter_selie Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 Niceness Allie, gotta love it. You could add some plants in front of the horizon, make some more clouds and make the sun a lil bigger, brighter. The darker line seperating her right arm from her chest could be removed partially, should make it neater. Good lucksies. : Oh, and don't forget a border, however simple. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 It's nicely colored, the only thing I see missing is a background besides the sky. Perhaps add some hills in the back, or a forest, or town, up to you. :P Maybe a few more clouds so that one isn't so lonely. :) Finally, a border to finish it up would be great. :) Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moron8275 Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 I know you can draw better cabbages :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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